Shock! the School Beauty Disappeared, the Confinement Center Called Me to Report It

Here, I give my most sincere ratings and suggestions. First of all, the love in the article that the author wants to express - whether it is the small love for his wife and children or the great love for the country and the nation, has reached the eyes of the readers through this article. But as an author, you not only need to think about these, but also make readers like and be more willing to read the story. In terms of writing ideas, I feel that the plot has gradually accelerated since the heroine was the daughter of the richest man. But I could have postponed it for a while and talked about ordinary dog ​​food and daily life, and I also want the author to talk about it this way. But it wasn't until my father-in-law came to visit me so soon that I knew the car wouldn't stop. This story is like a speeding train, getting faster and faster. As a result, the author can only tell the daily life of the protagonist after telling the big plot. This imbalance of big love and small love in the article may not seem like a big problem, but it is not. Whether it is the title of the book or the cute baby daddy system at the beginning, it is determined that the main plot of the book cannot be separated from the family happiness of the family, and it should even be written closely around this. And directly raising the protagonist to such a high position, there must be no turning back. This will also reduce the reading experience to a certain extent. After all, the feeling of a love story is missing. The above are just some comments for the author. I hope that the author's future books will achieve greater success. I also wish the author a successful career and good health.

I thought it was a mindless dog food article, but I didn't expect it to be a patriotic science and technology article. It must be praised, and the writing is not bad.

This book is another new work by the author after his silence for more than half a year. After these six months of accumulation, Laomao's writing skills have also improved, and the plot is not sluggish. . . . In short, just be awesome and that's it. Congratulations to Laomao for creating new brilliance with his new book

I have finished reading Chapter 107, so I can't help but comment first. I just started reading some last night. Reading this novel reminded me of "My Wife Was Kidnapped, My Black Technology Exposed", which is a bit like the story. The male and female protagonists are good-looking, and the male protagonist's wife has a strong background. After the male protagonist has a system, he starts to counterattack. I have already finished reading that one. Fortunately, I found this novel and read it again, hehehehe. I have a premonition that it will go to the stars and so on.

It's super exciting, I hope it won't end in the future, it's a single female lead story

Not bad. The writing is very good and the rhythm is tight. At least it allows me to catch up on updates. I hope the author has unlimited brains and full of inspiration, but it shouldn't be too short...😂

The time travel system is close to you, Gotham, scientific research field, medical treatment, and warriors basically have everything you need. You can take the expressway from time to time without getting stuck.

The content is novel, and the story of the novel comes one after another, making people want to read it, and it also closely follows reality. The only flaw is that the plot goes too fast (but it is not good if it is too slow, it will make people think it is in the water), but this does not affect it. Also, none of the people in the production team are that lazy. They don't ask for much in a day, just 10 updates is enough.

The content is really good. I finished reading it in March this year. I read two chapters last year before it was finished. I didn't think it was good. Then I suddenly wanted to read some scientific articles, so I remembered this. The more I read, the better it gets. I highly recommend it.

This book is super exciting, and it's the type I like very much. Come on, the author, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

Read It's very smooth, the author's writing is very good Recommended as a bookworm

Although 4 in 1. What can I say about the cute baby plot, it is also perfectly distributed and not confusing, but the details still need to be strengthened. In particular, the author has a systematic function in the plot process. Although it is complicated, it is not chaotic and makes it seem more organized and step-by-step. Although I don't want to say more, I think I can almost end it here. Because how to say, even if you enter that door, there are many plots behind it. Many of them are not particularly easy to write about, at least in my personal opinion. So I think leaving it in suspense like this is actually perfect. Of course, it is ultimately up to the author to make his own arrangements. Support you, come on.

Aside from the slow start to the theme, the plot after the ice carving machine is exciting, the characters are delicately drawn, and the plot is more exciting. The only regret is that the book ends in a hurry. It could have been a more ambitious chapter again, but it is a pity. It seems that there will be a follow-up work. All in all, it is a very good novel.

Lao Mao's new book is finally here! Without further ado, here's the five-star review, I'll give it a thumbs up for this one! ＼\\٩( 'ω' )و //／

Post a review for everyone to read! …Originally I came here for dog food. Who knew at first I thought it was a diaosi counterattack, who knew it was a story about a nanny, then who knew it was a system article, then who knew it was an entertainment industry article, then who knew it turned into a medical article, who knew it turned into a fantasy article, and finally it turned into a science and technology article... The ups and downs in it are exciting to watch and full of praise! It's good-looking, but the ending is a bit off! Worth recommending! …

It's great. Although I'm not too keen on watching a single female protagonist, it's very interesting to watch. I mainly like the songs mentioned by the author! It relieves my worries 😭 very well and reminds me of some things about myself. Thank you again to the author! 🙏, I really like the songs in it

The book is very good, I just admire the male protagonist's ability to attract hatred. In reality, ordinary people will encounter at most one or two, but they will all be encountered by the male protagonist. I just met my father-in-law, and his company was suppressed because of his technology. This ability is awesome!

I feel that this book is very well written. I am really looking forward to the following content. I will be a big fan of the author from now on. 😘😘😘😘

Emmm, it's very beautiful. The author doesn't do anything fake, it's quite exciting.

This is the best novel I have ever read. Give the author a thumbs up! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's very interesting, especially the technological content. It's interesting and exciting to watch. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not go off topic.

It has flesh and blood and emotions, and now it also includes current affairs and politics. The writing and plot introduction are good, which is better than the book about School Beauty Technology. I have deleted that book. This book currently has a score of 9.3. I hope that the later ones will not be worse than the previous ones. Come on! Recommended by a bookworm of more than ten years.

The writing is very good, and the author is also very humble, unlike some people who write about bad cooks and scold those who don't give five stars.

It's so good, but the ending is a bit... I don't know if the author plans to write a second one. It's really good. Please give the author some advice from book friends. I really hope the author can write a second book. Please give me a thumbs up. This book is really good. 🙏🙏

It's a very good book. I suggest the author not to have physical objects in the system. If there are physical objects, there will be no sense of immersion.

Very beautiful, very exciting. I hope the author gets better and better. Rainbow all the way. The author should pay more attention to his body.

It would be great if you update it quickly. The writing is thoughtful and novel. This is the first time I have seen something like this. Come on.

This book is very interesting, the ideas are very good, and it has a different flavor from other similar books. I personally like it very much. Although it is not finished, I believe that the later parts are also very exciting. I am looking forward to it. I hope the author will update more. It is not enough. You can also read it. It is really good.

A very good book, worth reading. Although it is a bit rough and written in a hurry, the things developed in the content are still close to reality. There is no such thing as becoming a god or becoming a civilization all of a sudden. Looking forward to the author's next book.

The story is wonderful, and the author is also very active in updating. There is no delay in updating for the time being. I hope the gift will be kept. Please don't be like other authors who suddenly stop updating, or disappear directly. If this happens, I will curse you in your dreams. There will be no seasoning packets when eating instant noodles, and there will never be filling when eating steamed buns🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔