Through the Book: the Heroine of the Villain Became a Heartthrob After She Was Cleared

The author most likely just uploaded the manuscript at once, but I still want to comment. The overall plot is very rigorous and interlocking. There are only one or two places that are illogical, but the flaws are not concealed. The characters are also very well controlled, and the supporting characters all have their own characteristics, and they are not brainless. I just have a suggestion. The contrast between the male protagonist's and his previous characters is too big. From the beginning, it was okay to speak normally, but later on, the conversation became less and less reduced to fighting, developing the female protagonist's feelings and promoting the background of the plot. The three-dimensionality of the male protagonist is not even as good as that of the senior brother. The author needs to strengthen this. The heroine's character development is already perfect. It feels like the male protagonist is being ignored. In short, there is no need to read this novel to see how the male and female protagonists' emotional lines are drawn, because, well, the female protagonist is very smart and rational. Even if there is a misunderstanding that the female protagonist and the male protagonist want to hide from her, although she is sad, she is definitely not decadent. She is still working hard to solve the problem and never procrastinates. If the man is unreliable, then go home and complete the task, and the ending will be he. So the love line is not interesting. I think what is interesting is a group of reversals, again and again. Finally, I think the logic is not good. The heroine has already seen that Ling Yue killed the Phoenix clan, but why didn't she tell the people around her? Moreover, Ling Yue clearly knew that the heroine already knew that he was the culprit. If this was done, the male protagonist and his brothers would not know that Ling Yue was the bad guy. And the male protagonist shouldn't not know it. It's said in the plot that the male protagonist can also see it, but it's a bit reversed. Sometimes the male protagonist can see things that the male protagonist can't see [face covering]

A glance at the introduction of this book really stopped me from clicking in. However, as soon as I read the first page, I decided that this book was very good. [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart]. At the beginning, there will be entanglement as to why this younger brother is so close to Mianmian in the first place. Only in the middle will he realize that there are traces of all this and the reincarnation of fate. My younger brother is sensitive and knows that Mianmian is not Mianyi, which is great [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]. It's really good. I think I like the story of this book very much. It's very funny and humorous [snickering] [snickering] [smirking]. The emotions written every word are very real. Although this book has been interrupted for a long time, the story is still very coherent. The story of Langya City is really complex and simple. It is a very good story. At the end of the story, there is a feeling of dust returning to dust, earth returning to earth. Hey~ double death is what he is. I burst into tears TT[almost crying][almost crying][almost crying] But in the later stage, I felt sadistic. I couldn't bear to see this. It felt a little sadistic and my heart, liver, spleen, lungs and kidneys were in pain [crying][crying][crying]. Fortunately, the ending was a happy ending. It made my heart go up and down. It's funny when it's funny, and it's sad when it's sad. It's a very good, very interesting book. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] I hope more friends can read this book~~

It looks good, can you please have more ฅ( ̳• ◡ • ̳)ฅ

Hahahahaha, this heroine is so fun, right?

I like this tune After chasing for a long time, it's finally over The heroine has a good outlook on life and her growth can be clearly seen along the way. It's rare that there's no female rivalry. It's great that the female characters help each other.

That's pretty good. I'll help you recommend the book.

It's beautiful and the writing is very good.

It's beautiful, but it's still unfinished. [Love]

But the only drawback is that the author updates too slowly😤 Dear author, when will it be updated?

It looks good. I don't know why I didn't rate it. There's nothing bad about it. It's quite interesting.

What I admire most is the heroine's imagination, she laughs like crazy It's super good-looking. After three years, the author actually filled in the holes, [laughing][laughing]