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I read it for the second time. I haven't read it recently and I picked it up and read it again. Personally, I think it's pretty good. It's considered one of the better master-disciple novels. It would have been better if it didn't always have a Shura field (I don't really like Shura field in harem novels), and it would have been nice if it didn't end badly in the end. Overall, it's pretty good [thoughts]

The writing is good, I just hope that the male protagonist is from the past life or something (but the master before time travel is really stupid), otherwise it would be a bit awkward to take over someone else's apprentice (don't criticize me, you are right, it's just a personal thing). Anyway, I didn't think about it when I read the novel. Aba aba

X At first I thought the author's writing was very good, but when I got into the relationship with Mei'er in the Demon Realm chapter, I felt that Master's character completely collapsed. The first dozens of chapters had no effect on the Master's sculpting. Instead, I kind of disliked Master. Maybe it was because Master was too unreserved. Also, when Mei'er threw the medicine, why didn't he swallow it in a whirlpool? Don't comment on your own opinions if you don't like them. The author's writing style is still very good. I support the author greatly.

Very beautiful, can be reprinted in the series But before you read it, you need to know: this book is not finished, but it is super sweet and the harem is ambiguous! (Invincible!) The author didn't miss any of them, but in the end he forgot about the elf girl... (I wonder if the author forgot it in vain) The male protagonist is invincible. This book has a lot of water in the sea, but it's all a meow meow plot (everyone understands it) The whole book! No knife at all! No knife at all! No knife at all! ! ! (Say important things three times) Finally, I hope you have a pleasant journey, thank you

I'm not telling you, it's really pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

This book is quite exciting, with an intense and orderly pace. The first chapter 100 mainly describes the story between Jiang Wuming and the three apprentices. It introduces in detail the mutual understanding and humility between the three women and Jiang Wuming, and understands the characteristics of each heroine one by one. 2 Before Chapter 00, the main plot was introduced, leading to the story of the upper realm, leaving suspense, and using dual cultivation to improve the realm. However, the more people watched, the more excited they became. After that, the story of the empress of the upper realm was told, and the wonderful clip of Jiang Wuming defeating thousands of armies with one sword. Although this book is a villain novel, the focus is on Jiang Wuming's path to invincibility. It is very refreshing and the author's writing style is profound. Although there are many typos, whether it is Hongda's battle scenes or the scene of dual cultivation, everything is written with ease and as if written with spirit. Worth reading for everyone.

It's a shame, I actually quite enjoyed watching it. A message to the author: The author keeps talking about data issues in the book. I thought about it carefully and I think the author can strengthen it from these points. 1. Use AI painting appropriately. AI painting can still increase your popularity a lot. 2. The death of the "original heroine" was too simple. As one of the great joys of this work, she died too early and the joy was gone instantly. In many villain books, the death of the original protagonist is a big highlight. You can write that the original heroine had a lot of licking dogs, and then use her every licking death to advance the plot. In the finale, it would be even more fun if the heroine pisses off the original heroine together. 3. Driving is good, but fantasy novels still need to write upgraded plots. You can arrange for the heroine to steal the original heroine's opportunity to lick the dog. This will increase the number of words and increase the three-dimensionality of the heroine. You can also increase the sense of satisfaction by having the hero save the beauty. Looking forward to the author's next book.

I have read the entire book, and I personally feel very good about it. The ending is a bit rushed, but the ending is quite happy. There is another question, what happened to the elf Mu Dong in the end? The author didn't write it out. Finally, I would like to tell the author that when the protagonist is doing serious things, you always give it a quick brushstroke and write without details. There is no process, no details, no sound, no pictures, and no video. I hope the author will make corrections. After all, the author should know what readers want to see [laughter] -June 3, 2022 17:29

In the harem story, driving is faster. I originally thought that the ambiguity would remain unresolved, but it turned out that it was accepted fairly quickly, although it was not the male protagonist's initiative. Bai Meier, Su Xiaoxiao, Wu Qingzhu, Hong Youwei, Wen Ning, Elf, Empress, and Li Yuan. It's a pity that a few of them were confiscated. The writing is relatively good, with ups and downs, and everyone basically has their own characteristics. However, the original male lead had too few roles, and he got his box lunch soon after he appeared. It's so unfinished, the upper world map hasn't been opened at all, and the last chapter just summarizes it and ends it.

Good, good, so interesting. I really like reading this kind of subject matter. Keep up the good work, author!

Nice! ! ! Nice! ! ! Nice! ! ! Say important things three times! ! ! ! ! !

It's very interesting, very interesting, and the author's writing style is also good. But author, if you see my comment, you should read your other book. It has been a long time. I have been waiting for a long time and there has been no update.

Damn it, it's a big trough, it looks good! Take it for your five-star praise! Update update update new new new! Come on, work hard, author, come on, I am optimistic about you, pay attention to your health, I wish the author all the best, good health, success every year, safe travels, come on, work hard

There are quite a lot of questions, but what I'm watching is not the plot. What I'm watching is the senior sister, the second junior sister... I don't want any plot or anything like that. The description of the spring heart is budding. It's quite good to watch, hehehehehe! (The rating is not good! Except for women, the other descriptions of the protagonist's bird food are not very good, but I knew what the book was from the beginning. It is very good, but other points are not so good. If this point is maintained and strengthened, you can eat this bowl of rice!) I'm here to see the young lady!

Author, please listen to what I have to say. Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language but impresses readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are fluent and coherent, and the psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This article showed extraordinary literary skills in its plainness. It can be said that every word and every sentence is a classic, reaching a height that is elusive for me. After reading the article, I did not dare to reply easily. I was worried that my vulgar language would tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still replied because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, it's impossible to describe the brilliance of this article, so I just want to say: your novel is so touching, how about...··A few more chapters? Five-star hardcore update🐶

This is one of the few harem novels that is well written. Most people cannot handle harem novels and fall apart after writing them. Although this book also has many poisonous points, book lovers who like to read harem literature can still read it.

After reading about two hundred chapters, I knew it was going to be unfinished, but I can see that the logic of the author's writing is still very smooth, and the writing style is not bad. It's not like other unfinished articles that can't even help you straighten out the logic of behavior and fill in the holes. It's sweet and really sweet. I hope to write better works [Sending Hearts] In fact, according to my own standards, it shouldn't be called a bad ending. After all, the ending of the story is at least explained, and the logic of the characters' actions is also very smooth, especially the plot of eating four people directly in the spirit tree. The plot is pushed forward in a short length, and the reading is not abrupt. I can only say that it is a pity to have a rushed ending.

I finished reading 86 chapters in one day, and I personally feel pretty good. This kind of master-disciple setting and writing style seem quite comfortable. As for those people in the comments who think it doesn't look good and want to spit, they are somewhat incomprehensible. If you don't like it, just leave. Do you leave two spits to prove your existence? I hope the author will speed up the update and don't care about the opinions of those trolls.

I only saw more than 80 pictures, but I gave it five stars. Why? Because really. I have recently become obsessed with this kind of master-disciple, fairy-cultivation fantasy novel, and then I looked for similar books to read. There is another one, which I have read hundreds of chapters, and it is pretty good, but this one is the best one in my opinion so far. I can't help it, the overall quality of the books on Tomato is just there. Then what does this book say? The setting of the male protagonist is quite interesting, and it is not as casual as in some novels. It is more principled. I personally like a single female protagonist and don't like having a harem. But I am still reading this book. Overall, the quality of this book is actually average. But it's really possible to compete on the Tomato platform. If you have nothing to do, you can definitely take a look. (◦˙▽˙◦) I'm so depressed. I've seen more than 100 pictures. I've been a little depressed since the ghost guy came out. I'm still reading.

The front part is good, it's a harem story, but it's sweet enough. It can be seen that the author wanted to write a grand world view, but unfortunately it was unfinished in the end. The ending almost just gave the reader the outline he made, which is quite a pity.

The world view is quite complete, the combat power is not broken, the plot is generally quite good, although it is not unfinished, but in the second half, I feel that I could have written hundreds of thousands of words, but suddenly it was reduced to a few chapters, which makes it not very enjoyable to read. I look forward to other works by the author.

Great, great, great, but the ending was so rushed. I feel like the author could have written hundreds more chapters if he wanted. I finally finished watching it, it's okay

The story is interesting and logical. The senior sister is dull, the second junior sister is charming and active, the third junior sister is cold and has a high IQ, and the silly dragon is cute and cute. Each person's character is well shaped. Very interesting book

The subject matter is good, but it's really not that good. The beginning is not very attractive, but it is still good. The golden ten chapters are completed perfectly. The plot concept is not very good. It would be better if it is more funny, otherwise the score will definitely be ten!

This book is indeed very good, but it is a pity that the role of Li Yuan, the young leader of the ghost clan, is missing. He is obviously so good to the protagonist. Where is that loli elf from Mudong, was she eaten by you? . In addition, Hong Nishang and the young master of the Fox clan are gone. Although I really want to give it 2 stars, I still give it 5 stars because of the good plot.

The nice-looking gift has been given 5-star praise and has been sent for reminder (*￣3￣)╭♡❀The little flowers will hit you

It's very beautiful and the author's writing is good. Especially this kind of harem novel is the test of writing skills. I hope the author can work harder and update a few more chapters.

I finished reading 116 chapters in 3 hours. It's very interesting. I like the novel about driving too fast the most. I wish the author to write better and better. I give full marks to the title. It attracts readers' interest in reading. I like this the most, unlike some novels with incorrect titles. Also, I beg the author to update it quickly. I can't wait.

There is no need to say anything about the harem, just start it with five stars. The author strongly maintains this. Don't listen to what others say and don't have a harem.

100%, In terms of harem: the harem has indeed been opened; in terms of combat power: I personally feel that the combat power is not compromised; in terms of plot: mainly the interaction between the female protagonists makes the male protagonist jealous, and the male protagonist is responsible for watching the show and killing. The handling of the harem relationship depends purely on the female protagonist's consciousness. Anyway, the male protagonist is responsible for killing and killing in the plot. It can only be said that the third apprentice likes the male protagonist too much, otherwise the harem will explode. I personally recommend this book about the master-disciple system in the harem, which is a brainless and refreshing novel.