A Dream of Yellow Millet: An Unknown Variable

I personally think it's okay, maybe the writing is not that good, but I can continue to watch the plot. The main reason is that the dialogue is difficult to handle. Some of the plots that I came up with are completely impossible to write. If there are too many dialogues, it will feel like a game NPC, but if it is not added, it will feel like writing a novel. It is too difficult to write a novel. The first book can only be written like this. If you like the baby, please help to add some bookshelf, and remind me to update and pay attention. Thank you very much.