Pirate: Let You Take Charge of the Revolutionary Army and Become the Four Emperors?

The Empress liked the protagonist at first, but after a few chapters she turned into Luffy. It was rubbish. Look at what a mess it has become.

This is bullshit, open the eight doors and let Blackbeard run away, the Samsara Eyes are all there, and the war at the top does nothing. The combat power is just hovering between noobs and invincibles. I was confused when I read it. After reading dozens of chapters, the co-authored protagonists and they are still a bunch of noobs, and I am speechless. It's full of loopholes. As soon as Ace mastered Fire Release, he was evenly matched with Sabo, the four-tailed jinchuriki. This combat power was too unbalanced. I rushed to participate in the war on the top, but ended up doing nothing, just talking nonsense.

It makes sense to return to the battlefield for one day at a time. It also makes sense to return to other things for several days.

Too bad, tut, at the level of a primary school student

The preface doesn't match the postscript. I'm afraid the first 49 chapters were ghostwritten, and the latter is your true level.

The writing is so confusing that the author doesn't even know what he is writing. In the first part, he writes that the protagonist helps the Empress to remove his tattoos and the Empress falls in love with the protagonist. But after finishing it, the Empress looks at Luffy shyly and feels confused?

What a mess. The front is good, but the back is not good! And doesn't Hancock like the male protagonist? Will he become Luffy again later? Inexplicable!

Magellan was actually written to death. . . . .

You'd better stop writing

It's a bit rubbish, but it's pretty much the same after that.

Agree with the one above

There are a lot of typos, and something feels wrong.

It's a mess, what the hell is written?

It's inconsistent and the writing is too confusing.

It's a mess, the preface doesn't match the postscript, I can't understand what's being written at all, and the protagonist's abilities are not clearly explained, it's weak in comparison.

Chapter 50 is rubbish and it's a mess

The front is fine, but the more I look at the back, the more confused I become and I am speechless.

Settlement completed directly

The front is okay, but what's behind is the eight guns and Blackbeard firing cannons. Also, the protagonist of your book is a revolutionary army. You follow Luffy all the way and you're speechless.

The first chapter was fine, but after chapter 40, is it bad? ? ? ? ? It's completely out of line, out of line, and a mess.

Not bad, very pretty

Chaos? Looking suspicious of life

It's written like a joke! Those who deserve to die are not dead, and those who deserve to die are forcibly written to death! It's better to write about the war in one stroke than to write about it!

More than forty chapters have gone away, there is no end, I will go