The First Immortal in the City

It's pretty good. I used to read books at qi. Com, and then switched to Tomato. After reading a book for a long time, I didn't find a book that I found interesting. This is the first storybook that I found interesting, and the characters in it are truly representative of the current social situation. Human nature is vividly reflected, and the male protagonist's cultivation is indeed a bit abrupt, but you don't need to use your brain when reading the book, and this book is not like other urban cultivators. I follow a formula for everything, and he also has his own unique features. Say important things three times, it's not a matter of trust or trust. This book definitely deserves more than 4 stars. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

The content is pretty good We have been friends for more than ten years. Nowadays it is very difficult to find a good novel. This one is really good.

Support the author. I hope to write thousands of chapters. I have listened to more than 300 chapters. The plot is not bad. I wonder if the subsequent plots will be as exciting as the previous ones. As for many people saying that the protagonist is not decisive enough to kill and kill, I don't think so. I feel okay. The protagonist is still good. There is no hesitation. He handles things well. However, the appearance of the space ring is a bit unrealistic.

I have read a lot of high-scoring urban immortals, but none of them can be finished. On the contrary, this low-scoring book is written in detail, and has the desire to read on. It has friendship, love, cold-bloodedness, protection, persistence, revenge and ambition. Handy

Although the plot is cliche, the writing is concise and the twists and turns are good, so you can follow it.

I hope that Ye Chen will not be a stallion and increase the interaction between Ye Chen and Chen Yinuo, otherwise just cultivating immortals will seem numb.

It's okay to stand out from the crowd and stand out

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good

The article is extremely beautiful, and it's hard to describe how wonderful it is. It's easier to understand than the articles I've read, very good.

Very good, the character is well created, and there is that sense of tension

This work is so perfectly written that I spend less time sleeping [laughs][laughs][laughs]

The book is quite interesting. It is not easy for the author to accurately apply ancient official functions to modern times. This shows that the author has a good literary background and a relatively high level of knowledge. Moreover, there are many particularly good idioms and sentences in the article, and the article also writes the true face of the real world. I am optimistic about the author, and the above is my evaluation of your book.

The writing is very good. Thank you, the author, for giving you a thumbs up👍

I have read a lot of novels, but there are too few that are interesting and enjoyable. This novel is very good. Thank you to the author. Please like and support [like] [like] [like] [laugh] [laugh] [laugh] The novels written by Li Bu Shang are also good to read.

Yes, even though it is a straightforward narrative, it is also written with ups and downs. The characters are raised again and again, but they don't feel like they are trees without roots.

From the current point of view, this is a relatively good book among similar books that I have read recently. Although it is a common topic, the content is relatively rich. The language is a bit nonsensical and uses a lot of colloquialisms, which makes it difficult to say whether it is good or bad. In short, it is very awkward. The content in the later period is a bit watered down. Some people say that the protagonist is indecisive. In fact, this is not the case. It is obviously a foreshadowing arrangement made by the author for the character "water". The protagonist feels that everything is under his control. In the end, either this accident happens or that accident happens. It makes people angry, and you need to be patient as you continue reading.

Yes, come on author, the details are well written.

Although it's not perfect, thank you for your hard work.

You've written a chapter on Mountains and Rivers, have you forgotten it?

I saw the Qiankun Ring in Chapter 303. Who knows how to get it? Why didn't I see it?

So far, I have heard more than a hundred chapters written smoothly, the plots are intertwined, there is not much unnecessary nonsense, and it is as good as the Nine Star Hegemon Body Technique

I wrote it very quickly and I estimate that this book will have more than 2,000 chapters! There are just so many places that I have to drag through!

Chen Yinuo knew that the quality of these classmates was not good, so why did he still call Ye Chen? That's what's bad about it. I feel that the beginning of this novel is okay, but the later part is very confusing, and it is different from the title. Maybe I don't understand it well enough. Rebirth of the First Immortal Lord, this is a street full of master immortal masters.

It's pretty good, although it's the same as many plots. But you can still watch it. Jump to watch!

Very good, much better than the ones I saw before (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

Good-looking, good-looking, wonderful. There are too few female protagonists, and the portrayal is not sexy and gorgeous enough. This is not to my liking as an LSP.

The plot description technique is meticulous, each link is compact, tense and orderly.

I really like the framework structure of this book. I give the author a like [like][like][like]

It's beautifully written, the main character is not a virgin, and it's not verbose.

The content is exciting, exciting and worth watching