Feathered Fairy

This is the author's first book. The author is also an old bookworm. He started writing a novel without a harem, a heroine, or pretentiousness a long time ago. He thought about it for a long time before writing it. It's just that I don't have a good grasp of the previous mortal chapters. It will be fine when I officially enter the world of immortality. The goal of this book is three million words. I hope all book friends will support me.

The main plot is clear, without any sloppiness, nor too much emotional involvement, nor any righteousness to make you feel comfortable. The protagonist lives freely, and everyone who watches it is also very satisfied. Come on, author.

It's exciting, but I wish there were more descriptions in the space, such as recruiting slaves to cultivate the land, brewing wine, practicing weapons, practicing elixirs, etc., To give everyone some hope, and everyone is in full swing.

I finished reading it in one go, and I still haven't finished it. The author does what he says, no cp means no cp. If you don't like a female protagonist, don't worry. So delicious!

The author breaks away from the usual routines of most immortality novels and has his own unique starting point. His writing style is also carefully crafted, I like it😘! Then the protagonist of the story, like most dream chasers, continues to hone and grow on the way to growth, and has a unique transformation in the extraordinary story! I hope the author will update it soon. I really want to know what plot will be discovered next. It's great! Worth a look!

It looks pretty good. Why is the score so low? Let me raise it.

After seeing a little bit of the foundation building, this book can still be read. As for why there are no five hearts, it's because the Golden Finger of Immortal Mansion is a bit too powerful, and even the skills are prepared. If you just plant and hide, I can still keep reading, but this thing obviously looks like it can give you something every time you advance. I didn't read later, but I will not have a refining room or just send a few spiritual treasures to wait at the back. It is no longer interesting to look at it like this! Immortal cultivation is boring [eating melons], but the writing is still okay. Friends who are interested can continue to watch [Thinking] Lighter

How many chapters are updated a day? , I hope there will be thousands of chapters, 3000 chapters in the Zero Realm, and 3000 chapters in the Immortal Realm. If your level is not high, just write about countless beauties meeting each other. One or two will be enough, and some may write five or six. Such novels, no matter how well you write them, are not good to read.

So far, I have read around 400 chapters, which is pretty good. There is no female protagonist, but the male protagonist is decisive in killing. It can even be said that he is quite capable of committing evil acts for the sake of immortality. He is also very kind to people who are kind to him. The only shortcoming is that there are many typos. Then I always write my name wrong. There is also a timeline that says the author forgot about it. Earlier, he wrote 10 episodes of retreat, and later, he wrote incorrectly for 6 years and had conflicts with others [face covering]. There are not too many poisonous points at the moment. I have survived the dozens of small poisonous episodes in the past, and it is still very good. The author should correct the mistakes, otherwise many readers will be easily distracted. (I hope that the protagonist will remain single-minded in the later period and kill decisively.) Don't write about being a dog licker. You can read it before Chapter 400. I will continue to comment after reading it. Although the addition of a heroine is a bit like adding a heroine, the good thing is that the heroine has very few scenes, and there are no emotional scenes that make people touch their toes. It can be watched as if there is no heroine, but if there is a heroine, it will be skipped directly. It will not affect the plot, and the beast palace is given to the heroine. Some people feel licking. In fact, if you think about it differently, if someone has given birth to a child for you, [face covering] should be regarded as a betrothal gift. The only thing that feels bad is that the male protagonist saved the female protagonist for the sake of the child at the beginning. He even made a concentric spell to save the female protagonist, and the secret of the fairy palace was also exposed, which proves that the male protagonist values ​​​​this bloodline, although it is a bit inconsistent with the character of the previous male protagonist. But we shouldn't let the heroine take away the child. It's bad to hear that the heroine is being hunted at any time, and there is no fairy palace like the hero to avoid disaster. The heroine is strong and may be able to escape. If something happens to her daughter, the hero can't hide the secret of the fairy palace. Anyway, I feel weird when I see this place. I don't understand what the hero is saying. Why do you attach so much importance to this child? Why did you agree to let the heroine take away your daughter? [Grief] There are also magic weapons and spiritual treasures. They are too confusing and always written wrong. In terms of combat power, too, every time they fight, they will be seriously injured. Especially after raising so many battle pets and spending so much treasures to raise them as ancestors? Many times it can be clearly released and solved without being exposed. But it won't be released until the protagonist is extremely hurt. Then I recuperated for a long time [covering my face] I was anxious to death every time I saw it. The skills are all awesome, they are condensing mana and polishing the body. Not to mention asking your Nascent Soul to fight the spirit of transformation, at least it shouldn't be that difficult at the same level. In the middle Nascent Soul, I can fight all kinds of injuries in the late Nascent Soul, and I can't even defeat you. [Grief] Are you learning the skills of your fairy world and so many talented people from Bao Bai in vain? [Facepalm] The only good thing after seeing more than 2,000 chapters is that the male protagonist is dedicated to the Tao and is decisive in killing. He is not a virgin. The female protagonist currently has less emotional scenes and is not a dog licker. I hope the author will be more rigorous when updating and posting. Forget about typos. I always write wrong skills, magic weapons and spiritual treasures. [Thinking] I can also write down the inventory of the storage bags of other immortal cultivators every time I kill them. Many times I just mention it in one stroke. , Or basically didn't write it, [face covering] I was so anxious, even though I knew he would take it away, but if you didn't write it, I felt that the protagonist was not at a loss [face covering] The summary is that it looks good, although it is a little bit poisonous, such as the forced arrangement of the heroine, and there are NPCs everywhere (everywhere they go, they are invited by fairy friends or) to give out tasks, but whether it is a secret realm or a game, it leaves room for imagination, [thinking]

Just tell me directly, wouldn't it be great if this is a replica of the Mortal's Legend of Cultivation to Immortality [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

I have read it several times and rarely write reviews. Now here are my thoughts on this book: 1. The chapter about exploring the secret realm is too complicated and not good to read. 2. The race war of the human race has not yet begun, but it has been foreshadowed in the early stage. According to your way of writing, more than 300 chapters will not be written until the subsequent race war is over. But I think the climax of this book is the cross-border war. 3. Since the protagonist has the Golden Lotus of Luck bound to the sect, he must work more on how to improve the overall strength of the sect and write more about the role of the sect in the race war of the human race instead of fighting alone. Only in this way can the preparation of the Golden Lotus of Luck be completed. 4. Generally speaking, this is a very good novel about cultivating immortals. However, the chapter about exploring the secret realm is too long, which makes the improvement of each small realm very cumbersome. The subsequent human race war and cross-border war take too long, and the climax of the book is not well controlled! ! !

The writing style is very sophisticated and the plot design is also very exciting. The latest chapter is 8.3 Million words long and the protagonist is still in the middle stage of integration. If I finish writing Fairy World, it will probably be no less than 12 million words. I hope the author will work hard to complete the book.

It's still okay, but in the early stage, the protagonist has been on the way to getting into trouble or getting fucked up. Overall, it's not good but not bad either. Also, the cultivation level is very slow. It took Chapter 2000 to reach the Great Perfection of Divine Transformation, and you need to practice emptiness.

Author, are you also having fun with Yi Nian Xiaoyao? Overall, the combat power is quite good and not too high. The characters are also very decisive and calm. It is not a holy mother. It is a bit dull in the early stage, but after the foundation stage, it is still quite good. Of course, some things are borrowed from several novels and Yi Nian Xiaoyao (game) [Send Heart][Send Heart][Send Heart][Blow a Kiss][Laugh] All in all, a normal mortal novel

This book is very good. Judging from the overall structure of the novel, it is very subjective. The outline is very clear, there is nothing poisonous, the killing is decisive, and the plot selection is also very good. Each realm has a prestige that belongs to each realm. It is not like in other novels where the person who refines Qi and builds foundation elixirs becomes a grandson. The Yuan Ying transforms into a god and refines the void and continues to be a grandson. This novel has the majesty of Foundation Establishment, and the ancestor has the appearance of ancestor. The plot is very compact and delicate, and the descriptions of various scenes are very well written. The ups and downs of the plot are very attractive. At the same time, this book does not have a heroine, and there are not many emotional dramas. Overall, the protagonist is a decisive and single-minded character who knows how to organize and deal with others. There are a lot of human feelings and sophistication in the plot, and the image description of each character is very good.

The author wrote this book well, but the process of the golden elixir period is a bit long. According to your book introduction, this book should have a female protagonist. According to chapters 397 and 398, I think you can write that powerful person in the upper world as the female protagonist, but there is a big gap in their strength now. You should write a chance encounter for them. How to write it is up to you.

So far, the overall performance is quite good. I hope the author will keep writing, the spiritual world and the fairy world [love][love][love][like][like][like]

The writing of Transformation Stage is more creative and the protagonist is very stable. It deserves full praise.

The writing is incisive and exciting, the plot is well conceived, and it has the flavor of a classical fantasy fairy novel!

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The spiritual world is very well written, very layered, the levels of spiritual objects in the realm are clearly divided and the logic of the hierarchy is very good. Come on, author, write slowly. I hope to describe the fairyland's regional environment in a more macroscopic way when writing the chapter on the fairy world. There are just so many typos that almost no chapter has them. For example: 1. The first few chapters are about the Divine Transformation Stage, and after a few chapters it becomes the Nascent Soul Stage. 2 In the first few chapters, it is a level 5 spirit creature. After a few chapters, it becomes a level 4 spirit creature. 3. The most outrageous thing is that the enemy was still dead in the last chapter. After a few chapters, the enemy will join forces with others to hunt him down. 4. The most typos are that the levels of realm spirits that appear in the previous chapters are lowered or raised in the next few chapters. The author suggests that you should sort it out before sending it out, otherwise there will be too many typos and the rating will not be raised.

It's hard work coding, thank you author.

Come on, you can do it [learned] [learned] [eat melon] [eat melon] [like]

It's okay, unlike those who have no brains and go up a few levels, and unlike those who choose a spirit beast whose name is either Xiao Hei or Xiao Hua.

I personally think that the text is okay, but there is too little description of the treasures and personal practice. I have been searching for treasures. Give you five points

No Harem, No Stallion [Like] Five-star review

(There is no evil in the heart, only the road to immortality) A rare novel about cultivating immortality.

The author's writing is smooth and I don't think it's a running story. Everything I've written so far has its pitfalls. Overall, I think it's okay. The fighting plot is also okay and there are many tricks. The whole process is quite compact. I keep refreshing the copy. It's okay.

As long as there is no heroine, everything is easy to say

I finally found a novel without a heroine. It's so good.