
Naruto: My Swordsmanship Is the Best in the Shinobi World
火影忍者:我的剑术忍界第一
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 93k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
44Chapters
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I'm giving you that one less point because the protagonist's combat power setting is very confusing. A genin fights a chuunin and a jounin. With so many shadow clones and fire escape ninjutsu, there is no chakra overdraft. . . . Later, when three Iwa ninjas were beating up one of them, one of them still died? Are you sure that the protagonist killed jounin and chuunin before? Moreover, the third generation would have a genin as the captain with an ANBU and Yugao. This is probably not a joke. To be honest, there are many flaws. . . I don't know how long you can write. . . But I hope you can control the combat power as well as possible, otherwise it will feel very weird after all, you are not a system writer.