Wuxia Crossover: From the Start, I Awakened Copy and Paste

I don't know what the theme is. Since it's time travel to mixed martial arts, I won't say where I'm going and just follow the plot. But at least there has to be an outline. I don't know what I'm writing the whole time. I just walked through all the areas. Either someone came to trouble or someone invited me. Then after walking once, I started the second time, and then a bunch of people came to invite me. What on earth is going on?

First of all, there is no suspense in the storyline, and it feels a bit like running water. Secondly, the level of strength is unclear. After reading more than 100 chapters, the protagonist has learned so many powerful martial arts secrets. His strength should exceed that of ordinary people, but he continues to absorb it. Although he is very powerful, he does not exceed the scope of ordinary martial artists. This is too vague. Compare the character to his master Zhang Sanfeng! Also, this book brings together many martial arts novel worlds, but different worlds have different strengths, right? Can the world of divine eagles and the world of Fengyun be on the same level? I felt dizzy and gave up!

It's not good to write without killing, but have you killed the people you let go? The troubles in the future are all the people you let go. Author, do you know why your score is low? It's the people you let go, and then they are so awesome that they coax the protagonist into trouble. Although you want to write more chapters, it will not look good if you write less of those people who let go and find trouble. The score is higher.

The author has worked hard, and the writing is very lively, but I still feel that the plot is too confusing, and I don't like this novel very much. It seems that my level is not good enough.

It's a boring book. The world of mixed martial arts follows the plot completely. It's clear that there are protagonists who are blocking it, and the plot never deviates. It's like reviewing the TV series all over again. Mixed martial arts and other things are basically selling dogs on sheep's heads, in name only.

The Story of Yitian Slaying the Dragon, Late Yuan and Early Ming Dynasty Where is Yitian Prefecture? You actually used someone else's framework. I feel you should respect the original characters and place. ┐(´-`)┌

When I read Chapter 26, from the time when Wudang climbed down the mountain to when he returned to Wudang, people assassinated people, blocked the way, and stole swords. As a result, a few nameless people died but no one else was killed, including a few eunuchs from the Songshan sect who blocked the way and provoked them. What kind of decisive killing is this? Although the world is a worldly thing, if you don't win over people, they will keep harassing you. For example, Qiao Feng, Xing Zilin forced him to abdicate because he knew he could not go on a killing spree. Later, the Juxian Village incident let them know that Qiao Feng was a real murderer, so no one said anything about killing Qiao Feng until the Shaolin Heroes Conference.

There are so many unreasonable things about this novel. First, the protagonist is already invincible, yet he is possessed by a demon. Becoming a demon is not a bad thing, but every time he kills someone, others will see it and worry about killing him. Second, the protagonist system can be copied infinitely, but every time you meet someone else, the protagonist will not know who the other person is and will only start copying after asking. So what is the use of the system? Third, the relationship between the characters is extremely complicated. People who were killed earlier are inexplicably resurrected later, and then killed and released again, which is inexplicable. Fourth, the protagonist is always assassinated for no apparent reason, and he is always fooled, even once or twice, but being fooled all the time is not a stupid problem. Fifth, and most importantly, the protagonist recruits not his subordinates but his ancestors.

Being hunted all the time, right from the beginning, the writing is so kind, even if you, the author, are a novel with tens of thousands of words, you will get tired of it after reading it for a long time. The key is that the realm is unclear. The system is obviously so good, but it will not kill everyone. This heart is not ruthless enough. If you are ruthless enough to destroy a sect, there will still be so many people chasing you. There is a saying in the book world that "the spring breeze blows and the grass grows again, and the chiseled grass leaves no roots."

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