The Magical Girl's All-Powerful Sword Immortal

It feels like a very good otherworld harem novel, and the ending is relatively good (among so many bad books on Tomato). Although there are some small holes that have not been filled in, they are innocuous. There is almost no sense of system settings and can basically be omitted. Overall, most of them focus on daily life, the main plot is quite clear (revolving around various female protagonists), and the car drives very fast. If you like Western fantasy harem stories, you may want to take a look. I gave the rating 5 stars. As for why this book has such a low rating, it must be because it was underrated.

Personally, I think the male protagonist's emotional line is quite stable. The only thing that's not good is why does the male protagonist interact with so many young ladies? I have seen so many young ladies' naked bodies😓😓

Very interesting, the plot between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is very sweet 😳

It can barely be considered a high-quality article. It's a small lick. The system of cultivating immortals is a bit scummy but not poisonous. There are some minor bugs. If you want to open a harem, choose carefully. If you can accept the above, this book is good

The book is very good, I don't know why no one reads it

Well written and beautiful Mainly because there are too many typos

Not bad, I hope the author can work harder

The story is good, but it's a bit shabby Is it important or not mature enough?

Very nice and recommended

Good! Very pretty!