Mortals Cultivating Immortality

It's not bad. Although I have five spiritual roots, I got a moderate opportunity as soon as I entered the sect. The writing style is quite good, the killing is decisive, and the mortal flow is not bad.

It's very good, not cliche, the world view is big enough, the writing is good, and the plot is good. The protagonist's personality is also okay, although it is not the smart one, and it fits the word "mortal" very well. Overall it's OK.

I wrote about 700 6 70 chapters when I first read it. I finished reading them all in a few days and I am still following it. It feels pretty good. The biggest highlight of this book in my opinion is that there is no Hehuan Sect, 😄

The plot is reasonable, well-arranged, and the content is substantial. It is really powerful to be able to write so many fantastic ideas. The author can also incorporate his own thoughts and insights into it, which is also very rare in online articles. However, the hasty ending left some unfulfilled meaning, which is a pity. Hope to have a chance to see the follow-up.

It looks pretty good to me now. I hope I can write it to the finale and not give up halfway. I hope that the subsequent plot won't be too bloody, for example, there will be a few dragsters. You can use some powerful magic weapons or find some powerful thugs. To achieve a kind of bullying, I hope the author will work harder

Overall, it was pretty good. According to the concept, there should be a follow-up, but it ended in a hurry.

The plot of the story is twists and turns, fascinating, the writing is smooth and smooth, and there is no nonsense. Very good, very good, a wonderful novel.

After returning from the underworld, Nanyuan Wujihai finally appeared again. Now it feels like Han Li returned to Tiannan when he was watching Mortals. The story is good, not a novice novel. Although the protagonist has a porcelain plate, there is an upper limit. Just like Naruto opened the Kyuubi, he was still beaten by Orochimaru, saying that there is no harvest in treasure hunting. This is normal. Is it possible for you to get all the benefits of the next dungeon?

This book is very well written, the author is talented and has great understanding. My favorite is "There is no me in heaven and earth, I am everywhere". Hahaha, "life is just a dream", there is no need to "know that everything is empty until you die". Like it, 👍recommended! 🌹

It describes the story of the protagonist. The first beauty betrayed him, but he cheered up. The protagonist has five spiritual roots and endured hardships without any random opportunities. Very interesting and worth recommending.

I think this book is very good, great

I have finished reading the book and it feels smooth and refreshing. It's a good book.

It's great, especially in the later stages. The author was kind and even though he was forced to dock the tail, he still looked beautiful.

It's okay, keep up the good work, but the male protagonist's skills are a bit poor, so I might consider further improving them in the future. Like the most classic Han Laomo's Sky Palm Bottle, it's much stronger.

Very beautiful, plain yet exciting

A good novel about cultivating immortals, looking forward to the chapter on the spiritual world

The logic is reasonable, the plot is rich, the interface is colorful, the links are smooth, and the imagination is fantastic! After reading this book, I highly recommend it. I finally finished reading it! It's true that mortals are cultivating immortality, and there will be no such thing as a sequel to the immortal world. This length is just right! Dear author, if you write another book about Xu Muxianjie, I will definitely read it! [Like] [Love]

The writing has started to flow a bit smoothly, so keep going and it will be a great work!

A very good book, worth reading

It's tasty and salty, it's worth a visit

Ups and downs, time and space changes, the protagonist never develops in the same place, he almost changes places, which is good, the enemy will never be found, I don't know if it is time to go to the fairyland!

Provide more books of this type, they are very interesting

It's well written. At least it can keep old bookworms reading, which is already rare [laughs][laughs][laughs]

A very good fairy tale novel

It's good-looking and exciting, but it's too short and lacks the spiritual and fairy worlds [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering]

Worth watching, fascinating, there are few such good works

Wonderfully written, with a tight storyline.

I quite like this kind of beginning! The protagonist cultivates immortality from scratch, and the process is very hard! Not a big stallion! Although the middle is a bit long-winded! Overall, this book is my favorite!

I particularly enjoy reading your fantasy novels

Detailed description, compact concept, wonderful scenes, fascinating