One Piece: Making the World Feel Pain from the Start

After Momonosuke is killed, any content in the Pirates fandom is worthy of a five-point rating.

Very good, the ceiling of a pirate fandom, five wives, the empress, Robin Reiju, Shirahoshi, the little fur tribe cook, the plot Momonosuke was pinched to death by the protagonist himself, but it was a pity that Nami took it away.

Good guy, five stars straight away. Although there are very few, and it is still a good article, it may be easy to collapse later, but I like it. This is my phone, I can rate it as many points as I want, hum ╯^╰

Yes, the whole book is well written, making people want to read it and have the urge to know the plot of the next story. Unlike other books, which make me want to jump to chapters and jump to stop reading, this book did not give me such a feeling. I read every chapter carefully, which can already prove the excellence of this book. He already beats 90% of other books. In the early stage, I wrote about pirate stories. Regarding what happened in the pirate world, within the larger framework of pirates, the writing was very good and well-founded. The subsequent story about the Marvel world is not that exciting, because he is already very powerful. If he really needs to find other gems, it doesn't need to be so troublesome. From the beginning of entering the Marvel world, the setting has a certain deviation, and the power is somewhat inconsistent with what he does. The above are my personal feelings and insights after reading this work. If there is anything I don't like or something I said is wrong, I apologize for your understanding.

I'm reviewing this book after I've finished reading it. This is the first Pirates fanfic I've read. It's pretty good. The author's ideas are also very big and reasonable. It makes people think that's it. Overall, it's good.

One of the few excellent fanfics, and the characters are well created. I hope it will get better and better in the future. Special attention: Don't jump when setting the combat power (manual dog head)

The novel is well written. I see that the structure of the whole book is good and there is no collapse of combat power. It can be said that it is the best among the pirate novels I have read.

This book is very, very good-looking⊙▽⊙very good-looking

Overall, the writing is good. In fact, it can be read as two novels. Before chapter 234, it is a pirate fanfic, and from chapter 234 onwards, it is an infinite flow with Marvel as the main line [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Personally, I think it's pretty good. As a fanfic, it has its own characteristics and doesn't deliberately revolve around the Destiny's Child in the original book. Moreover, this book is also a fanfic, so how can it not affect the story of the Destiny's Child in the original book? Also, you've traveled through time and you still can't accept it. How many of your favorite characters in the original book are here to serve as a harem? Do you have to care about what you do will affect Destiny's Child? It feels like if you traveled through time, you might as well just eat and die and wait for death. Of course, everyone has different opinions. Not just reading my comment can affect you. I can only say that everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. Ps: In fact, I personally feel that the author has almost finished the pirate chapter, but the author also wants to write a story about another dimension, hoping to have the protagonist's own wonderful story like the pirate chapter. Good luck, author.