My Sword Fairy Apprentice Awakened the Ability to Read Minds After Becoming a Demon

The dog food is so delicious, and the female protagonist can clearly hear the male protagonist's little thoughts. Lovers finally get married, and others witness it with their own eyes. I still prefer the heroine to be more aloof.

Very very beautiful! The male protagonist is emotionally strong. No ambiguity, single-mindedness, and good writing style. Come on, author, you must be on your own. Write more novels like this in the future. No ambiguity, no harem, and the cool aspect needs to be strengthened. System cheats have no sense of existence

This book is really good, but if you look at the male characters, the male protagonist should be the more active one, and this male protagonist is a bit passive 😂 But it can be considered a new experience, and the female protagonist is also well-shaped. It may be a little bit annoying at the beginning, but the transformation of the female protagonist after each chapter is still a bit sweet, and then it is just forced to feed the dog food o( ❛ᴗ❛ )o If the female protagonist in the future is more soft and cute in front of the male protagonist, calling her master to act like a baby, I might be so sweet 🌝 It's really great, come on, come on! ❤️

One of the most devoted novels I have ever read

This novel is so well written that I have only written dozens of chapters. To be honest, if I continue to write it, I should be able to write more than 1,000 chapters at most, and at least a few hundred chapters to write out the dimensional wall of reality and the illusory world later and buy some foreshadowing. , This novel is not rated 8.7, The highest rating is 9.4. Unfortunately, this novel has too few articles, and many things are not written in detail. They are all very brief. If you write in detail, you can dig out a lot of foreshadowing and write a lot. This novel probably describes the protagonist, playing a game, traveling through the space of cultivating immortals, or the dimensional wall. The plot is a bit like the movie Mural, or those movies that combine Chinese and Western styles. Traveling to the future, or a different world to save Sun Monkey, or something I can't remember the name of. At the end, it is either a dream in a virtual void, or a place that can never be returned. Many novels and movies have borrowed this routine. This novel has three major shortcomings. The first is that there are few articles. The second is that some plots are relatively simple, and the third is that the foreshadowing of the subsequent plots is not written out. It can also be said to be a fly in the ointment. But if you think about it from another perspective, it can also be said that it is an alternative and perfect way of constructing a small foreshadowing and a micro world view in short articles. Was the experience a dream or reality? It is also possible that everything in front of you is fake and illusory, and what you see, hear, and touch may not be accurate! Maybe it's true. There are no absolute facts in front of us, everything is questionable and comes from skepticism.

(I have read the entire book and will write a review) It's a very nice short sweet story. There are basically no major flaws in the whole book, except that you might not be able to figure out the relationship between the protagonists at first. I didn't watch it very seriously, but overall I can tell that the protagonist is a time-traveler who travels into the game world and needs to ascend in order to go home. The heroine is his big apprentice. She likes the protagonist when she grows up, but later falls in love and turns evil. Later, the heroine has the ability to listen to the male protagonist's voice, so she starts to conquer the heroine. Also, the male major does not study the Wuqing Dao. He only needs to give gifts to others to increase their favorability to gain cultivation (something they just need). The Wuqing Dao is just a cover. Then the ending of this book has a twist, but the extra chapter makes up for it very well. Don't ignore the extra chapter to read the ending, it's really sweet. Good looking, recommended.

It's pretty good-looking, but due to a setting problem, it's bound to be accompanied by a little stomachache. The result is that one moment my aunt is laughing, and the other is a stomachache. . . Uh uh uh. The progress of the relationship between the male and female protagonists seems a bit inexplicable, mainly because. . Setting issues cannot be avoided. The writing style is very good, and it is fully qualified as a dog food article, but the part in Wuwang City in the middle is uncomfortable to watch. To put it bluntly, the only bad point of the work is the setting of the male protagonist, which leads to the lack of plot line and the need to over-focus on the emotional line. However, because the strong first impression at the beginning does not match the slowly narrowing distance between the two, it leads to the lack of perception. I will only talk about the shortcomings here. In fact, the works are still very beautiful, but such works often cannot be written for a long time. That's a pity. In addition, not everyone can accept this setting, and the male protagonist's long-term inaction in cultivation makes the fairy-cultivating dog food less of a fairy-cultivating feeling. . . It's also because of the setting. . Summary: The early stage is amazing, but the middle stage is a little stomach-ache. It mainly depends on whether you can accept the settings of the male and female protagonists. The main reason is that it lacks the logic and plot that it should have. Although it is not foggy, it does not look clear. As a dog food article, it will make people feel bright at first sight, but after reading it for a long time, it will feel boring. Just like eating snacks, an occasional bag will make my taste buds feel happy, but eating it all the time will make people feel tired. It lacks clear logic and plot lines, and in the end it still cannot be used as a staple food for me. I don't know what male and female videos are, personal opinion comes first. Of course, you can't write a long dog food article without a plot line. .

After reading it, let's give a brief review Personally, I think it's quite reasonable in terms of a single essay, but I think there's a bit of a problem with the disconnect between the setting of the male protagonist and his actual performance. I can only say that the author doesn't have a very good grasp of the details in this area, but it's understandable for the first time he's writing a male story, and then there's no problem with the progress of the plot, and the sweetness of the male and female protagonists is also very sweet. , The speed of the car is also quite fast, but the setting of reading the mind is a bit fresh in the early stage, but in the later stage, it feels a bit tasteless and a pity to abandon. It is better not to use this setting at the beginning and use other methods to replace it, but it is definitely good that the author is willing to make new attempts. There is also the problem of the ending progressing too fast and too hastily. Points will definitely be deducted as appropriate. Finally, let me talk about a minor point that is not a lightning point, that is, the author used the male protagonist's words to criticize the harem and stallion novels. I personally have no idea about it, but that chapter was quite noisy. I personally think that the harem novels and the stallion novels should be discussed separately. There is absolutely no problem in criticizing the latter. The former still depends on the arrangement of the author of the article, and cannot be criticized with a stick. Damn, what I watch depends entirely on my mood. I can watch everything from Danmei harem to single heroine. Anyway, I basically don't take the protagonist's perspective. The above is my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Personally, I still like the author's style and writing style, but I hope there will be less controversial arguments in the author's articles. If you have anything to say, just say it outside the article. In conclusion, there is nothing to say about the author's writing style, but some details were not handled well when writing a male video for the first time. However, the emotional description of the male and female protagonists is still worthy of praise. The driving speed is also very fast, and the ending is somewhat disappointing. For me personally, unless the previous article particularly moved me, I will definitely deduct points for a rushed or unfinished ending, so I give it four stars. I also hope that the author's next book will be better.

It's very good, it feels quite novel. If it becomes popular, it will kill me, and it will help the author.

Never be a eunuch, the author is great, This novel fantasy novel suits my taste very well. Come on.

I think the writing is pretty good. I don't really like the feeling of hearing the voice of the heart. It's like all the secrets are heard. But if the voice of the heart is not heard here, I'm afraid the misunderstanding will continue. Most of the time, the male protagonist will be raped by the female protagonist. In the end, he will be locked up in a small dark room. She has a child, and the one where the heroine is the Demon Emperor is similar to Yuanying. She is the Demon Emperor. I feel that the author is more suitable to write about daily life. I personally think that a mildly yandere is fine. A severe yandere is too crazy and dangerous [face covering]. Keep up the good work, author.

The writing is delicate and the portrayal of the male and female protagonists is spot on. Just two chapters a day is not enough →_→

The author's emotional writing is very delicate (much more detailed than the author of the male video), and the description is also very good. The combination of themes in this book includes (rebellious apprentice and master, the heroine hears the voice of the heart, the yandere turns black, and the heart is broken into tears). The master and the apprentice had a good relationship before, but the male protagonist has concerns and wants to fly back home, so he does not dare to face his inner feelings. (It also makes it clear that he cannot be a scumbag [laughing]) He relies on his outstanding appearance, aloof image and giving out expensive gifts to gain favorability. The heroine developed inner demons because of her previous love-to-hate relationship, and finally went further and further down the path of darkness. In the end, feelings slowly flowed in both directions, and the lovers finally got married. Fortunately, the extra episode made up for the regret in my heart, otherwise I would have sent the blade(｡•́•̀｡)

The author's writing is great (*￣3￣)╭♡. This book is more of a romance. It does not spend too much time describing the main subject of fantasy "cultivation". It is a single heroine. The author vividly describes the past and present life and emotional development between Gu Qingwan and Luo Ying, full of emotions and details. The shortcoming is that at the end of the banquet in the world of cultivation, many monks discovered that Luo Ying was a demon, which fell into the cliché of most female comics. In addition, the ending is too hasty, and the endings of many characters in the book are not properly dealt with. [Send heart][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Shy] Finally, thank you to the authorヾ(@^▽^@)ノ

To be honest, other parts are okay, but some basic knowledge of cultivation is a bit lacking, some background logic is a bit unreasonable, and the description of details is not deep enough, but it is still okay. There are remarkable things, and generally speaking, there is a lot of room for improvement. Keep working hard.

This is the first serious review by a newbie. This book has a good theme and a good plot, but it also has a lot of shortcomings (the biggest shortcoming is that it is short). I think some battle scenes should be added to make it more interesting.

The ending is a little rushed, but the whole book feels very good. The speed is very fast, I like it very much, and the traffic volume is also very heavy, so I also like it. In short, I like Thurse, I like driving, and I like this book.

Not bad, not bad. Probably the best in this genre on Tomato right now.

I think the author's writing is quite good. I'm used to reading novels about intrigues and decisive killings. It's also very good to read this kind of dog food novel. The most important thing is the master-student relationship, which is used to the extreme😁😁

It is a shorter book, although the writing is average and the plot is not particularly reasonable. It can even be said to be a bit incomprehensible, but it is more comfortable to read it as a short story (without thinking). Single female protagonist, cultivating immortals, male master and female apprentice, male protagonist's perspective, dual strengths I got it from Tomato Launch Assistant. As a book from four or five years ago, the setting is more in line with my heart. After all, books like male master and female apprentice + male protagonist's perspective + single female protagonist are hard to find. Don't read this book with too much thought, especially in the later stages. The ending is good, nothing cruel, good review [like] It's been a long time since I had the patience to read this book. I give this book a thumbs up.

I finished reading all the chapters in two days. There are still a lot of fantasy stories like Tomato. This book is relatively a breath of fresh air. After all, the female author will definitely not write too much about fighting and killing. She mostly writes about the emotional lines of the two protagonists, which I agree with. It's just a pity to end it hastily

A very straightforward short yandere novel without so many twists and turns. Heartfelt and Yandere are the best. As a fast-paced short story, it's excellent. Like, praise, praise. This author is also very knowledgeable about the window sill. Anyway, this novel is the best choice for short stories about yandere. The character of the male protagonist is also very good, but the pace is a bit fast. The rest is still very good. Come on, a big sister who loves to write royal novels. It just feels like a forced ending at the end and needs a little bit of anti-toxicity. Otherwise, it's fine.

After reading this book, I successfully made a new definition of male porn and female porn, or maybe it's because the author is a girl. There are obvious differences in the writing styles of male and female authors, and the writing is very good. If boys eat too much of the heroic, bohemian, and arrogant dishes, it is great to have some dessert after dinner occasionally. Let me give you a suggestion: write down the male protagonist's daily life for the first 220 years. It might also be a very good romance novel for men.

I will never forget this book. I still love it very much. The male protagonist is gentle and dedicated, and the female protagonist goes from being cold to accepting the male protagonist. Like a fog of misunderstandings, one after another is solved, and the two finally get married. Of course, the author wrote it in such a short time, which is also painful in my heart.

Female authors are already very good at writing male videos, but I still disagree with many books written by male fans. The writing and plot of this book are pretty good, but some holes are left unfilled, and the ending leaves a huge hole as to how the heroine came to be. Overall, it's not bad.

It's beautiful. Although the ending is rushed, it's perfect.

How to put it, a single female protagonist has the advantages of a single female protagonist, and a harem novel has the advantages of a harem novel. This type of book is quite new, but some details are not handled well: First of all, there are conflicts. There are no very serious conflicts in the first dozen chapters. The language is also slightly flawed in describing the character and appearance. It makes people feel that the female protagonists and heroines are all the same, and it is impossible to have a unique impression of a certain character. In the following chapters, the story is narrative, but I personally feel that it does not play a big role in promoting the plot. There is no obvious foreshadowing, the context is too coherent, and the suspense is not very great. Of course, in the chapters so far, the conception is still remarkable, and the pace of the story has gradually picked up, starting to fit the theme of sweet pets, but at the same time, I also hope that the author can handle the role of the female supporting role in the article, and use it as a passerby. Personally, I think it is better not to leave it at all. Emmm... The book is good, the author has worked hard to update it!

There is nothing wrong with female channel authors tending to be female protagonists. The negative reviews are a bit too much. I will express my personal opinions on the early plot, which is very good. I personally feel that the ending is a bit too fast and sloppy. Overall, the creation of this book is very novel. It can be seen that the author has worked very hard. Please support me. I hope the author will persevere and look forward to the release of the new book [Love]

As an author myself, my writing style is quite good, and my emotional descriptions are particularly delicate. In other words, the feelings you write are things that male video writers like us cannot write. It is still worth reading. Come on!

It's my personal opinion, and you can be lenient when you have different opinions. The early and middle stages were well written, but the later stages were too rushed, and the plot was forced together for the sake of completion. However, the author still gave the male and female protagonists a good ending, which is not bad. Even if he does not have the energy and mentality to continue writing, the ending like this is quite good. At least the protagonists are together.