Wuhun: Awakening the Golden Emperor Dragon at the Beginning

How can I put it? I waited for a week and finished it in a few minutes. It was not interesting. I just wanted the author to write more.

It's a good and interesting book, but the updates are too slow. I've read it, but I hope the author will update more every day.

I will definitely give my book five stars! (Although there are many shortcomings) Maybe it's because it's my first time to write a book, so many things are not well written. The main plot line is not carefully conceived, the characters are not well established and stiff, and there is a lack of vocabulary, etc. If it affects everyone's reading experience, the author would like to apologize here (thank you for your understanding) PS: This book will continue to be written and will have a complete ending. Maybe this work is a failure for many readers, but it is a valuable experience for the author. He can be more aware of his own shortcomings, so it is also the road to success. I won't go into too much detail, but this book will be kept updated, and it won't be unfinished if it's not too late. I plan to write a second book when I reach one million words, and it should be much better than this book by then (it can avoid many poisonous points) Finally, thank you again to every reader for your support, I love you!

I raise the flag for no female protagonists! Judging from the current situation, the non-heroine column is very popular, and there are not many people writing about it. There are some emotional dramas and ambiguous scenes. The momentum of harems has declined due to various factors, the most important being increased social pressure and the influx of female readers. In terms of income, the momentum of movies without female protagonists will continue to grow. As the number of readers of the author's books increases, the income will also rise. The harem has long been a bad joke because it appears in many novels (including the fact that the sisters are not biological), and many extreme readers will give low marks or abandon the book because of this. Of course, there is a little bit of my personal preference. I hope the author does not want to have a harem. It is really bad for the protagonist to lead a group of relatives and friends alone. The author does not want to have a heroine, and also hopes to minimize emotional drama and ambiguous descriptions. Of course, in the end it all depends on the author's own ideas, and I will support them except for the harem! [Laughs] Come on! Forget it, a harem is a harem. I admit it

It's well written and interesting. Even though the girl named Su said that her friendship was broken and she still had a relationship with her as a classmate, I still think she appears as little as possible.

Another good book, the author is very good at writing, which makes me have to continue to read books. The pace is tight, not as fast as mindless writing. It's the first time I write a book and it's already very good! Come on! ! !

After looking at it, I think it's pretty good. Let's sum it up: The beginning is also useless, even though the parents are still alive. My brother is very talented, and even after he cheated, he kicked me He has two heaven-level martial souls. If he misses the start, the system will open. Breaking into the Saint's Courtyard forcefully, how many villains are no good The martial soul of lotus seeds increases lifespan, and the essence and blood of the Dragon King are like heavenly materials I am accompanied by two female companions, who will probably come again in the future.

At the beginning, I can't see much yet. I hope it's not too watery. Also, there are 52 chapters with 110,000 words, and one chapter is a little over 2,000 words. The author needs to work hard. The number of updates is not ideal.

It's a very good book, why is the rating so low?

Can it be faster? It's been so long since I've been chasing it, one chapter a day is painful to death. Sometimes there will be a break [smile] @

I have been following it for a long time. I always thought it was a harem. So far, I have only confirmed one girlfriend, and there is no home run. Many of the early girls have stopped moving. Moreover, the protagonist is obviously talented in martial arts. The characters that come out are all the top figures in the mainland. There is no sense of adventure. I guess it will be a single girl in the end. The thing I can't stand the most in novels is a single girl. But the author still works hard

It's good-looking, but a little short. Isn't it the author's fault?

There are many martial arts novels that are the same, but the content is very good and worth reading.

It's very beautiful!!!! The invincible number one in the universe. Although there are some flaws, no one is perfect. It's very beautiful! Moreover, the author is also very considerate and accepts opinions. In short, it is a very good book. It is the most beautiful book I have ever seen in my life. Invincible is the most beautiful novel and Invincible is the best in the world. The author greatly cheers, cheers, cheers, cheers!!! Looking forward to the follow-up plot ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ

Today I saw a man who looked very much like the author. I ran out like crazy, but suddenly I remembered that there was no such person in this city. I froze, slowed down, and put down the bricks in my hands. It's a pity that the author hasn't updated this yet.

Wake up, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this, there are only a few pictures, To be honest, I really like the academic style and this kind of training mechanism. It's really okay so far. Come on. . . Not enough

So pretty! ! ! Big cheers for the author! ! ! This devil will always support you! ! !

Really good, only a little bit of a pity. The mythical Three-Legged Golden Crow, Creation Green Lotus, Creation Green Lotus, and Dragon are all out. The system recognizes that the martial soul is a fire and a power. The fire is the Golden Crow and the power is the dragon. It would be more appropriate to replace the "Dragon Martial Spirit" with the "Pangu Martial Spirit". After all, in the myth, the law of Pangu's force is also the Chaos Demon God of Power, and the Nine-turn Mysterious Technique refines the body.

I hope I don't have a harem. Then we can have a few more geniuses and pig feet to form a team and fight through other worlds. I personally hope that the author can consider it. The descriptions and characterizations of the characters are still a bit unrefined. The pacing is okay. It's just that the descriptions in some places don't feel clear enough.

This book is so beautiful, and the author also interacts with readers. Five-star praise😘

Good-looking is good-looking Can the author update it quickly so that I can read it in one go?

The author would like to thank you for updating! ! ! It still looks good so far (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

This book is only available in heaven. It's great.

Not bad, keep up the good work, but it's too short. I finished it in one go😏

Overall it's pretty good, but I personally feel there are some issues that need attention. First of all, the description of the novel is a bit slow. It takes a long time to prepare for one thing. The communication and psychological activities of the protagonist are just watered down in many chapters. I feel that some descriptions are completely unnecessary, and many of them are pretty much the same. There is also a lot of foreshadowing by the author. I hope these holes can be filled in later. Then there is the emotional line. It feels like the protagonist is showing mercy everywhere. First, Han Meng goes to Nangong Yueqian and then to the Holy Lord of Yaochi. In between, he seems to be having an affair with other girls. Otherwise, one of the girls fell in love with the protagonist. But after looking at it, I feel that the heroine is the Holy Lord of Yaochi. I hope the author can fill in the pitfalls between Han Meng and Nangong Yueqian. And I have always had some questions, and I feel that the author's setting is a bit confusing. According to the title, the martial soul should be a very important point in this book. However, except for the plot description of the awakening of the martial soul in the front, I feel that the role of the martial soul in the later chapters is minimal and dispensable. It even directly sets the king's realm later to refine the martial soul to improve myself. Also, according to the previous description, this should be an urban practice, but the further I write, the more it feels like it is in ancient times. There are fewer and fewer modern elements, and it doesn't feel like it is in the city anymore. Last but not least, the author is a bit slow and not enjoyable enough. The above are some of my personal problems with this book, but I still like this book very much. I hope the author can work hard and write this book, and make it better and better, and don't end it!

After reading it for so long, I still like it. Although the author is very good now, I read the comments today. How should I say, I only reviewed it a few hours ago. I clicked on this book not long after it was published. It was really not very good at the beginning and I abandoned it twice. But after The Artifact of Heaven, it started to look better. The author should be a newbie and his writing has gradually gotten better, which is also progress. You can see it from the beginning to the end.

Five stars. For me personally, I actually quite like reading semi-recommended books with such details. And let me tell you, if you don't like reading it, you don't have to read it. Just go find it. Can't you find something you like even though a tomato is so big? I want to read it, but it makes me uncomfortable to watch it. The poisonous points are revealed. I just want to give the author a warning. Anyway, I am quite comfortable reading it. It may be the perfect trilogy. I have read too many parts of the Devouring Part II. However, the updates are too slow. When I just started reading it a few days ago, I saw that the chapter names have been updated, and it is still Last year, but now it's only over 700 chapters, I feel something is wrong. When I finished reading it and saw the weekly updates, I thought, author, you really need to take a break. Can you hurry up? I still want to celebrate the New Year and get a master certification (●—●), so hurry up and update (‵□′)

Super nice. 1 The Golden Eye feels a bit awkward, not as good as the Golden Eye. I hope the author will not become a bad namer. 2 I hope that strange fire or the top ten sacred fires can be added to make the protagonist become the supreme fire master. 3 I hope the practice system can be made clearer. 4 The author would like to keep up with the new content. There are only a few suggestions at the moment. The above are just personal opinions and will be updated.

I like your books very much, but I don't like the speed of your updates.

The book is indeed quite good, but as for the surnamed Su, the male protagonist still has a little connection with her, and I haven't said it over yet. People like me who are patient can continue reading. For example, some people just can't stand it anymore. They just look at the front and can't stand it anymore and leave! It's not easy for the author, so give it a five-star rating! I hope the author will continue to work hard! (๑＞ڡ＜)☆ Hehe😁