The Group's Favorite Counterattack: Dressed as the Younger Sister of the Male Protagonist of the Novel About Cultivating Immortals

Lin tide is already very good In modern times, there is no family affection or friendship. Ordinary modern people tend to be a little autistic. Every one of them is too harsh [referring to the book review] Not long after graduating from college, I traveled to the time when "Lin tide" in the book was a child. What's wrong with a kid who has such a bad temper? The previous life was too miserable. In this life, can't we live our childhood friends again and slowly grow our xinxing? Also, it's normal to cry. Some people have relatively developed tear ducts. Coupled with the heroine's autistic tendency and social anxiety, it's normal for her to cry easily. Dear readers, you have read too many other heroine stories. Not everyone dares to kill people and slay monsters when they travel back in time. If you think about it from another perspective, you will not be much better than Lin tide after traveling back in time. People need to grow up slowly. Many of Lin tide's qualities in the article are also things that many of us cannot achieve. Everyone, just keep your mouth open when reading the article. If you don't want to read, just exit in the upper left corner. There is no need to fart and leave in the chapter review. It is very unappetizing. Some people originally like to read it, but they can't stand it after seeing the "fart". I saw updated chapters from the beginning, and many of them are like this. Finally, I would like to encourage the author. He is already great. Come on, don't pay too much attention to those very unpleasant comments. ＼＼\\٩( 'ω' )و //／／

Thank you all for your likes and support! I slowly started writing novels because I love reading novels. I have been reading novels for eight years, and I am very happy that people like the novels I wrote. If the protagonist's character or some storylines make readers uncomfortable, please don't be angry, this is just a novel! Don't bring it into reality, this is really just fiction! Don't be so angry that your head hurts, this is really fiction! Finally, I wish you all good health, all the best and happiness every day!

It's pretty good to watch, but I don't really like watching this kind of thing. The female protagonist bursts into tears without moving. She's an adult. Are you too timid and afraid of everything?

Have those who say the heroine is bad have never experienced social terror? There are not so many brave people in the world. If you like to travel to another world and suddenly become super powerful, please go back and see those heroines who are agents, killers, generals, etc. What we are talking about here is an ordinary heroine who just wants to live peacefully. Please show your respect. If you don't like it, you can leave or not read it, but can you please not comment on some not-so-good comments? The author is not God and cannot write novels that are loved by billions of people in the world. Thank you for your understanding! Also, the author, you are very good. Regardless of whether others want to read it or not, I have decided on it anyway. I urge you to update it~

Some people's requirements are too harsh. Before the time travel, the heroine was just an ordinary person. Her parents were divorced and they didn't love her. So it's normal to be sensitive. Most young people in modern times don't dare to pick up a knife to kill chickens and birds. It's impossible to overcome psychological barriers and kill this and that after only two years of practice. The heroine design is also okay, social fear, a social fear will make people laugh at the sky and the earth as soon as they travel through time, and she can speak well, which is funny when you think about it. Anyway, I think the heroine setting is very realistic and pretty good. I'd better retract my previous remarks. The first time I looked at it, I probably had a square filter, so I didn't feel anything wrong in front of it. But then I reviewed it from the beginning and it felt very wrong. The first thing I want to talk about is the two sisters that the heroine rescued at the beginning. The younger sister has always been jealous of the heroine and has a crush on the hero, so she has been targeting the heroine. If they were of any other age, I would think it was a bit silly at best, but the younger sister and the heroine were only eight years old. They fell in love with the opposite sex and had sex with each other at the age of eight. In reality, they were in the first or second grade. In the middle, the heroine was offended by a monk. It is normal to be angry. As a woman, I was also angry. But around the 300th or 400th chapter, the heroine met another monk. Because the monk who offended her was a branch of this monk's sect (as mentioned earlier, the monks in this branch all made mistakes and were demoted), the heroine vented her anger on this monk. I wonder why they gave a branch to those monks who made mistakes, but this monk did nothing. Moreover, the heroine's crying character has improved, but she has become self-righteous. The monk said a few words and the heroine thought that he was encouraging her to die. Look at that sister and this monk. The younger sister tried every possible means to make things difficult for the heroine, the savior, but the monk did nothing. But what about the heroine's attitude? He didn't do anything to Zhou Yunya, and he didn't fight back no matter how hard she made things, but his attitude towards that monk was extremely bad. It's also very uncomfortable to come back from the secret realm and get a knife back. He just said that the female lead master was not the most handsome, and then he lost all his money and still owed a lot. Jokes between friends must be moderate... The sum of these things is no longer a shortcoming in character, but more seriously, it is a moral issue.

The writing is okay, but the heroine is too timid. She would be shy when looking at a child. She was so nervous that she trembled in the presence of a group of children when she was testing her spiritual roots. After all, she went to college and became independent in her last life. I really can't imagine it. I am particularly curious about how she will cultivate immortality in the future.

It's nice to watch. The male protagonist is not particularly strong and cold (when he first appeared). The female protagonist is not perfect either. People always have some weaknesses. She is not pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger. The female protagonist is not like other female protagonists who have phoenixes and dragons as soon as they appear. In short, I like this novel very much. Good luck Luoyu! Come on! (I finished reading it in less than a day😭)

The writing is good, but the heroine is a bit too weak. Everything has a process. I hope the heroine can adapt to the world of immortality and adapt to the law of the jungle.

So far so good, I love it. Don't say that the heroine is timid, she was well protected when she passed through, and it is terrifying to become murderous without blinking an eye. After all, I grew up in a legal society! 🤔🤔🤔🤥🤥🤥

I feel like the heroine can't stand up and the plot is too slow. But the writing is still good. I give it four stars.

Nice! I like my brother [laughing] Very cool [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

Looks good The heroine's character is very normal... Doesn't the world have every character? There's no saying which character is the best. I hope the author will update it soon hahaha! 555555Why are all the good books never finished? I hate it.

Let me share my personal opinion. Most people in the comments felt that the heroine's character was quite realistic, socially fearful, and prone to crying, but she gradually grew up. I am also afraid of society, and I kind of understand it, but the heroine is already in college, and I don't really believe that society is afraid of this, because I myself am slowly changing. Then again, why is the heroine called the heroine? Why do I like to read novels? It's because the novels contain the life I envy, and life is already hard. There is no need to read a novel to think of myself. I just want some sweets when reading novels. And when reading novels, if you see something you don't like, just find another one. Everyone has different ideas. For example, I like to read sweet novels, while others like to read sadistic novels. There is no need to unify. Besides, the author can write whatever he likes, and the same goes for bad comments in the comments. He just said what he wants. Anyway, I still think that everyone has different ideas. Personally, I think this novel is just average. Anyway, the author is great, so you can just be happy writing it.

As an old reader who has been reading novels for ten years, there are very few books in recent years that I can read from beginning to end, but this novel kept me from skipping to read it. It is very interesting and the author keeps up the good work [Like][Like][Like]

The plot is okay, the male protagonist really has a lot of love affairs, the emotional line between the male and female protagonists is so slow, their relationship is not awkward. It is said to be a book about cultivating immortals, but there are not many descriptions about cultivation. Most of them are about things that happen around you.

After watching the beginning, I wanted to comment because it was the first time I saw such a timid heroine [laughing], it was very interesting and funny. But thinking about it, I was a social phobia in my previous life, and I had such low self-esteem that I thought I was in a book and died in an unknown way. It would be weird if I didn't cowardly write it. The writing is more realistic and not so exaggerated. Although it is not a cool article, it is very interesting. I think if I traveled through time, I would be very cowardly, because it is a world where killing is legal. .

I'm so cowardly that I won't be in trouble all the time. It's really unspeakably uncomfortable to watch. The subject matter is very novel anyway.

What can I say about this book? There are many shortcomings. The heroine is already an aunt in her heart, and she is still very young. . . . I can't really say. Anyway, after reading more than a hundred chapters, I sometimes resented the heroine and sometimes found it pleasing to my eyes. But overall this book is pretty good and the writing is great👍🏻

The heroine is also making progress step by step. She is no longer the cowardly and scared person she used to be. She just wants to know who the hero is! ?

The overall concept of the article is very good, the article is interesting and humorous, and the images of several supporting characters are also very three-dimensional. The only bad thing is that the image of the heroine is not established well. The heroine is always emphasized to be kind, but when various incidents occur, it makes people feel that the heroine is stingy and selfish. Moreover, the article always emphasizes that mortals are like ants, which makes people dislike it. Especially early in the article, the heroine also said that it is because immortals look down on mortals, so God is not happy with the immortal cultivators in this continent, and the highest ability is Yuanying. There were several foreshadowings in the early part of the article, but no further explanations were given in the later part.

In fact, the novel is quite good. Many people say what the heroine's character is like, but human nature is inherently complex. In different environments, different origins, and different choices, any character that appears is reasonable. Not everyone is born tough, and not everyone has the care and love of parents. For people who have been tortured by life, surviving is a kind of bravery. Although the heroine in many previous chapters is a bit childish, but for children in modern society, although college is a small society, it is not only the dark side. There are also many people with pure minds. I have always felt that the heroine, as a timid ordinary person, is very reasonably portrayed. I cannot say that there are no flaws, but she has no problems with her outlook on life and the approach is reasonable. She does not have a big golden finger or a rapidly expanding psychology. It is rare to see a heroine with an ordinary character. This is why I did not jump to a chapter. Although, I feel that the plot is a little delayed. After reading hundreds of chapters, I feel that the key plot is limited. Personal opinion, the later part describing Jing Ling and Zhong Yuan is very good. I am a person with extremely strong empathy. This is the only part of the whole text that made me cry from beginning to end. So I think the writing here is very good. It's a bit arbitrary and willful, but I think it's very good if it touches me. I hope that the author can improve on all aspects when he writes in the future.

It's very beautiful. It may not be very detailed in some places but it's really good. It's not bad for girls just starting out. No one is born complete. There are shortcomings and advantages. These need to be experienced slowly to smooth them out. Step by step, watch Lin tide slowly change from being timid at the beginning to being able to be strong and independent in the future. I really want to see Lin tide and Huo An get married. This ending is too bland. I always feel that their relationship, oh, they really agreed to Zhong Yuan's offer. He loves her a lot. I don't know why I can tell that the heroine loves her, but she doesn't seem to love her very much.

I still like the plot of this book. Watching the heroine slowly change from a timid and loveless person to a brave and confident person is quite inspiring. I hope Huo An and Jing Yuan are the same person. Even if they are not, I prefer Huo An as the male protagonist. (Personal preference only)

Overall, Huo An is the better male protagonist. They are childhood sweethearts, and Huo An has liked the heroine since he was a child, and he still likes her now. In the previous chapters, the words Jing Yuan said to the heroine were more like a parent's role, and when the first chapter was only over 100 chapters, some people started to complain, but there was nothing to complain about. The male protagonist is Huo An, and the overall flow is relatively smooth. If the male protagonist is Jing Yuan, the previous chapters will be very awkward and unsmooth, as if it is forced. If the male protagonist is really Jing Yuan, if I want to make the article smoother, I may have to write more and change it like this, but I prefer that the male protagonist is the elder brother.

The character's growth experience is very natural and very close to reality. It is the most normal novel I have ever read. The ones set up by people are also good. Overall I feel very good about this novel. My only dissatisfaction is that it is too short and does not include a new world. Alas😔

It's pretty good to watch. The heroine's character in the early stages is hard to describe, but she gets better in the end. There is just one thing that I am not satisfied with. When the author was filling in the pit, he said that in order to allow the heroine to better cultivate the world of immortality or to send the heroine to modern times, he developed such a character. I really don't know if it is repaying a favor or taking revenge. Of course, there is nothing to blame other than this.

No heroine is perfect. If the heroine is too perfect in a novel, you will follow the old stereotype. What do you think she will do in the next stage? The heroine does not have to be perfect, nor does she have to be strong. She has her own personality, which may be unexpected and will surprise you. If you can predict what he will do next, then what is the point of this short novel? So I think the author wrote very well. Then I gave it a five-star review. The male protagonist is not strong at the beginning and then, um, indifferent. He is so arrogant and paranoid. Anyway, I think his character has a special sense of justice and is impartial. The settings of the two male and female protagonists are also very good.

The protagonist's identity is very real. Ordinary people have no experience and it is difficult to change. The heroine is not deeply involved in the world and is an ordinary love-hungry home girl. The writing is good. (Just read the first few dozen chapters. Personally, I like refreshing articles, because refreshing articles are impossible. Just look happy. The writing is too real and looks too tiring.)

The old bookworm said that the overall story is quite good. The heroine is not the kind who is weak or strong all the way. The story of her gradual transformation from weak to strong is quite realistic. In the end, the connection between Jing Yuan and Lin Xihuoan is revealed. The character of the inner demon in the later period is really cute. Good luck, author (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's very interesting, just write what you want to write. The two of them are so sweet together, come on, come on, it's beautiful. Isn't it normal for those who say the girl cries when she doesn't move? This is the real thing. Do we have to add a little gold to him? Moreover, the heroine's past life is not very big. She is just afraid of losing. You don't have the experience of the heroine. And for example, if you traveled through time, you were in this peaceful country now, and then went to the world of cultivating immortals, there would be so many intrigues.