Quick Travel: I Am Crazy and Ruining the Plot in Fairy Tales

I have been reading this novel for so long, and I have been updated every chapter. So I will tell you my thoughts. I don't know if the author can see it. I won't go into details about the advantages here, they are mainly things that need improvement or should be noted when writing this novel. First of all, as far as the plot is concerned, there is no clear purpose (many novels will have a main line. Most of the fast-travel novels are the emotional line of the male and female protagonists, rescue, etc., And the rebirth novels are mainly about revenge, changing the emotional line, and then confronting the villain in the novel, etc.). Today's romance novels are mainly about emotional lines, but this one is not like it. The male and female protagonists get along very early, the male protagonist's sense of presence behind is not very high, and the relationship progress is not clear. It doesn't really arouse people's desire to watch it. Suddenly I forgot what to say (•́han•̀ ٥) I'll reply to myself next time when I remember it. Note: This level of writing is already good, but you still have to keep working hard.

I like this book very much. It is based on fairy tales, but not conventional. The stories behind the Mermaid and Snow White chapters are very real and profound. Although the Little Match Girl and Sleeping Beauty chapters are not very consistent with fairy tales, they are still very vivid and are also good short stories taken separately. The theme is novel, and the four stories in the book continue to grow with the protagonist: the righteousness of the mermaid, the innocence of the little girl, the wit of the snow-white princess, and the kindness of Sleeping Beauty. After experiencing so many fairy tales, the protagonist's character, conduct, and wisdom are also constantly growing. It is obvious that she has made progress. My favorite is the mermaid chapter. Even though she turned into a bubble in the end and was forgotten by everyone, her story was left to the world invisibly. Her past existence and the things she did will eventually affect the world. Where life and emotions are, there must be traces, which cannot be erased by all magic and superpowers!

I really like the fairy tale setting. I haven't found many books in Tomato. The author's writing style is very good and the writing is very practical. Although the emotional line is not obvious, there are not so many mistakes. The overall is relaxed (my personal feeling). The article is full of humor. Some parts are very funny [laughing and crying]. In short, I like it very much. Can the author also give you a thumbs up?

I really like it [Send Heart] Dark Fairy Tale is my favorite [Shy] It's obviously very good-looking, the logic is coherent and the character design is not broken, why is the score so low [Crying] I know why the rating is so low. It's too frustrating to write. It's so irritating that my blood pressure can rise [angry]

This is one of my favorite fairy tale novels, but few people have read it.

In the first life, the male protagonist is Xin Lang, the little milk fish. In the second life, he is the overbearing president Xin Lang. In the third life, he is the dwarf Xin Lang. In the fourth life, he is the policeman Xin Lang. How can I say that the male protagonist's system seems to have disappeared in the third life? After all, in the fourth life, he is an ordinary person. How should I put it? It's quite good-looking and highlights a genre.

Quite fun. Although some places are inexplicable, it is a fairy tale after all. Prince Charming fell in love with Snow White after just one glance. Cinderella and the prince only danced once and then searched for Cinderella all over the city. From the perspective of a fairy tale, everything is normal.

This book is really good, but the child at the end is a bit pitiful. His parents went to experience wearing clothes, but he still wanted to go🌚

I think it's very beautiful, but I don't know why there are so few people there.

Sweetheart = someone who is on your mind and wants to kill you all the time ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧ Absolutely amazing!

It's okay, but not as pretty as I thought

This book is quite good, it shouldn't be based on the current rating.

In general, this book is quite exciting, and the plot in it will not be completely based on the fairy tale. It will change the environment of his life, and some storylines may be changed to make people feel more eye-catching, such as the Siren in the first plane (don't ask me why I said Siren instead of his name, I just don't remember the name!! [Laughing evilly]) This character can be said to be very amazing to me!

It's good, but the male protagonist is a bit miserable. He has to wait for death every time before he can go to the next world.

It's so beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡The author writes very well, the mermaid article is my favorite

The heroine's IQ is online and the story is very telling. It made me see a different fairy tale. It made me cry. It's so beautiful.

Based on my personal opinion, this article is okay, not particularly amazing, but it has the feeling of flowing water, which is great. However, I don't think the emotional line is particularly clear. PS: I thought there would be a sour part, but in the end there wasn't even any minced meat. Hahahaha. I like it. It's quite novel. The plot is exciting, a little unexpected, and reasonable. Keep up the good work! ! !

Good-looking, worth the trouble Everyone has different preferences, this is just my personal opinion

It's good-looking, and I won't lose money if I invest in it. I just felt a little aggrieved when I watched the first world. I almost cried at the ending of the second world. It was so uncomfortable. I felt so sorry for Xiaoman.

It's pretty cool, but I don't know why the score is so low.

Woo woo woo, the author should seriously consider writing a second part [almost crying] and let Xiao Xin Yang be the protagonist [grieved] [grieved]

Really, after cheating the mother, cheat the child [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's really, really, really wonderful!

The settings are OK, but the writing is so-so.

It's a very good book. Why doesn't anyone read it? It's so sweet. You lied to me about falling in love again.

Quite cheerful, I kept laughing while watching it

Great writing! Super exciting! Recommended [Like]

It's pretty good. I specifically searched for fairy tale themes. The content is very heartwarming, so the rating is a bit low.

It fits my xp so well. It's really beautiful.

I never thought fairy tale books could be written like this. It's really fun.