The Immortal Venerable’s Son-in-Law in the City

First of all, whether the author wants to write his own book or a book that readers like, this is very necessary. If the author is the former, ignore the comments, but if it is the latter, then change the style. It may seem a bit depressing. Maybe this is your style, but the life of readers in reality is not easy. I hope I can enjoy the spiritual world in the novel; then the first 30 chapters are very well written, and the plot begins after reading It's slow. There are too many unimportant character descriptions. There are only about 60 chapters so far, and several contradictions have emerged. The first one is to build the foundation in less than a few days, which is too sudden. The second one is that everyone around you knows that the protagonist is extraordinary, so don't force the protagonist to continue to be ordinary. The third one keeps reminding you that this is a mystery and that is a mystery. There is really no need to lay so many minefields. It is better to let it happen naturally. Finally, come on, the author.