I Was Beaten at the Beginning, but the Cold Female Instructor Stood up for Me
开局被揍，高冷女教官为我出头
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 105k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High-Concept
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
63Chapters
11.8kReads · all time
开局被揍，高冷女教官为我出头
As a bookworm for more than ten years, I still want to give the author some tips. 1. The plot of the story is okay and can be read. Although it is not too draggy, it has not been fully developed yet. I feel that the author has not found a breakthrough point to unfold the entire story. Of course, it may also be because there are not many words yet. 2. The author has dug a few holes, or some foreshadowing, to figure out what everyone is looking for, as well as some background of the heroine. This needs to be explained as soon as possible. People nowadays are not as patient as in the past, so take your time and look for it. 3. The author's writing style cannot be said to be bad. Some details are OK, but some plots are still lacking in meaning. Please write more and improve. 4. It can be seen that the author wants to express a lot of things, but blending these things together is not an easy task, and it will easily collapse if not done well. Finally, I would like to say that I hope the author can update more stably. This number of words is really not enough. Honestly, I would give this book four stars. In order to encourage the author, it is not easy to create, so I will give it five stars first.
My own book, be modest and give it four stars! This book probably looks like this: Look at the first three chapters: What is this about? After reading three chapters: Hmm, that's interesting! Seeing the back: Oh my God! It turns out to be like this! After watching Backhand, it's a reminder to update! Decisive bookshelf! It is not easy to be original, and there must be various small flaws. Readers are welcome to comment and point them out!
Come on, author, please update. This book doesn't have many routines. I don't know if it's because of the author's innovation or because I haven't read the book enough, but as long as it's original, I'd better support it🐶
Looking forward to watching the male and female protagonists doting on each other!
I don't have much to say, so I'll give you the six-star review first.