This is my first work, I hope the data will be better and not too cold. This book follows the flow of crossing the Liujia system. This book is different from other Harry Potters. It will stand on the enemy line with Harry. If you don't like it, don't enter it.
Reader comments
I think it's pretty good, especially killing Hermione. I really hate Hermione when I read Harry Potter fanfics. Maybe it's because I'm arrogant, but in this novel, it's really cool to kill Hermione.
It's so beautiful. I'm giving you one less star because your style of writing is not what I like, but it's really good.
It feels very good, quite novel, and it's good that there is no female protagonist. I'm looking forward to the follow-up. It's quite humorous. I just want to know if the protagonist will have a partner. Of course it's not a girl. And the author, please give me a lot of supportｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
Wow, it's the first time I've seen someone kill Hermione. It's so cool. The author is awesome. It's just that the plot behind it feels a bit confusing, so I can sort it out. Come on (ง ˙o˙)ว
It looks great, good luck to the author!
Ask a few questions for the author (❁ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈)◞
There is a bit too much psychological description of the protagonist, a bit like a first-person perspective.
Sometimes the behavior of some characters is a bit inexplicable, as if some plots were missed and a bit messy.
However, from the description of the scenes in the article, we can see that the author wrote this book very carefully. Come on! ❤️❤️❤️
I would like to suggest changing the cover. I actually think you could do some follow-up plots in the United States. Otherwise, this will make people think that your story line is relatively short. For example, the story line needs to be very big. Regarding the introduction, you can interchange the third-person perspective and the first-person perspective. Sometimes you can also use second-person perspective. This would be better. Otherwise it will be very troublesome and difficult to understand. As for the plot, I feel like some things could be deleted. Then Gryffindor can add some IQ.
It looks good, it looks good, keep up the good work
Great, cheers author
It's so beautiful. I give you five stars. Keep up the good work.
Big boost to the author👍👍
I like this book very much
I like this book very much. It is updated too slowly by the author. I said that I have two books about Harry Potter at home, and one of them is this one by the author (*^ω^*)
The writing is too short. There must be more descriptions. There must be more psychological descriptions to highlight the character's characteristics. The key characters must be portrayed more to make the article more colorful.
5 Star review
This book is really good [Sending my heart]
Author, let's discuss whether we can update two chapters a day. One chapter is not impossible.
The author writes well
What the author wrote is quite interesting.
High-quality book reviews will be displayed first
Help every dream [eating melon]
Great stick! Come on! I support you
It's super cool. This is my favorite Harry Potter fanfic.
Dear author, your writing is very good, why don't you open unlimited streaming for your next book? ~
If the author gives me a letter of approval, will I still write the book?
Now I am very interested in the plot that follows, please come on, author ^0＾~
I asked for the sofa. Five stars, I gave it.
Okay, I was stuck, hahaha, sin, sin. My author, is it time to consider updating this?
Come on, okay?
Come on, the number of chapters is a bit short.
There are only 17 chapters in the volume. Come and read Juan with me.
It's not bad, but the details are not handled well. The environment can be written more specifically, which can be used to enhance the atmosphere. However, it is very creative, and the characters are not good, so I can think about it before writing.
I think it's pretty good, especially killing Hermione. I really hate Hermione when I read Harry Potter fanfics. Maybe it's because I'm arrogant, but in this novel, it's really cool to kill Hermione.
It's so beautiful. I'm giving you one less star because your style of writing is not what I like, but it's really good.
It feels very good, quite novel, and it's good that there is no female protagonist. I'm looking forward to the follow-up. It's quite humorous. I just want to know if the protagonist will have a partner. Of course it's not a girl. And the author, please give me a lot of supportｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
Wow, it's the first time I've seen someone kill Hermione. It's so cool. The author is awesome. It's just that the plot behind it feels a bit confusing, so I can sort it out. Come on (ง ˙o˙)ว
It looks great, good luck to the author!
Ask a few questions for the author (❁ᴗ͈ˬᴗ͈)◞ There is a bit too much psychological description of the protagonist, a bit like a first-person perspective. Sometimes the behavior of some characters is a bit inexplicable, as if some plots were missed and a bit messy. However, from the description of the scenes in the article, we can see that the author wrote this book very carefully. Come on! ❤️❤️❤️
I would like to suggest changing the cover. I actually think you could do some follow-up plots in the United States. Otherwise, this will make people think that your story line is relatively short. For example, the story line needs to be very big. Regarding the introduction, you can interchange the third-person perspective and the first-person perspective. Sometimes you can also use second-person perspective. This would be better. Otherwise it will be very troublesome and difficult to understand. As for the plot, I feel like some things could be deleted. Then Gryffindor can add some IQ.
It looks good, it looks good, keep up the good work
Great, cheers author
It's so beautiful. I give you five stars. Keep up the good work.
Big boost to the author👍👍
I like this book very much
I like this book very much. It is updated too slowly by the author. I said that I have two books about Harry Potter at home, and one of them is this one by the author (*^ω^*)
The writing is too short. There must be more descriptions. There must be more psychological descriptions to highlight the character's characteristics. The key characters must be portrayed more to make the article more colorful. 5 Star review
This book is really good [Sending my heart]
Author, let's discuss whether we can update two chapters a day. One chapter is not impossible.
The author writes well
What the author wrote is quite interesting.
High-quality book reviews will be displayed first
Help every dream [eating melon]
Great stick! Come on! I support you
It's super cool. This is my favorite Harry Potter fanfic.
Dear author, your writing is very good, why don't you open unlimited streaming for your next book? ~
If the author gives me a letter of approval, will I still write the book?
Now I am very interested in the plot that follows, please come on, author ^0＾~
I asked for the sofa. Five stars, I gave it. Okay, I was stuck, hahaha, sin, sin. My author, is it time to consider updating this?
Come on, okay?
Come on, the number of chapters is a bit short.
There are only 17 chapters in the volume. Come and read Juan with me.
It's not bad, but the details are not handled well. The environment can be written more specifically, which can be used to enhance the atmosphere. However, it is very creative, and the characters are not good, so I can think about it before writing.