The Earth Across the Way

Overall it's good, but the number of words is still small and I can't see the overall world view. Please work harder and update it.

The novel is well written and full of ideas. Everything in it is closely related, but it also leaves a lot of pitfalls. I hope the author can fill them in in the future.

It's very interesting. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The author is very thoughtful. The more I read back, the more novel my ideas become. I hope the author will continue to work hard.