Spiritual Qi Revival: Formless Realm Divine Power from the Start

This book is okay, but the details bring down the rating. For example, the description of the character, what the person looks like, what he wears should be at least described. There is also the description of the character's emotions, his joy, anger, sadness, sighs, etc., All must be described clearly. There is also the description of the scene, what this place looks like, these are not described well. I am attracted by the divine power of the Colorless Realm, but...

The author is great, is this mainly based on things in Wu Geng Ji? The writing is good, much better than Naruto and Pirates and other Japanese comics. Don't let it end. Come on ٩(๑ᵒ̴̶̷͈᷄ᗨᵒ̴̶̷͈᷅)و, great

Generally speaking, I personally like it. As the elder brother said, except for the details that need some adjustments, the overall picture is still interesting.

You don't need to talk so much about favors. If you want to kill, just kill. Don't talk so much.

It's okay, I just want to ask the author if he won't update anymore?

It's not bad, it's pretty good. There's nothing much to say about the plot. I've seen similar ones, but the author's writing is okay, but the character descriptions are not detailed enough, but the emotions are not very stiff. If you don't know how to write, to be honest, it's not a bad idea to write like this.

Come on, author. From the overall point of view of this article, the description of characters and situations is still lacking. I don't know whether your identity in real life is only the author or there are others. If you think you have enough time, you can try to find some free online courses on the Internet to slightly improve your overall writing ability. I think this may be helpful to you. (Personal suggestion only)

Striving toward perfection is the meaning of our lives.

You don't have divine power either.

Why don't you write it?