Grassroots Cultivation of Immortality

This book is my first work. There were many things I failed to do well in the first part, but I have made great improvements later. The male protagonist is set up as a growth-oriented character. His previous character may be a bit idiotic, but he will gradually grow up.

For now, it's very, very good to watch. The only drawback is that although it's not completely direct for the sect to change its own destiny, it should be given some face, otherwise it will appear a bit ungrateful. The character of the protagonist is more or less problematic, but I still give it 5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐, very good

The boss's writing is okay without too long of cheating. The plot is also okay. You need to grasp the passion and unfold it slowly. Don't write something too incredible or incomprehensible.

This book is very well written, at least not verbose and in line with normal thinking. I have read many fantasy novels, and this one is all well written. I like it. I hope you will continue to work hard. Come on!

Very little storytelling. I have read too much, and now there are very few books that can attract me to the end. After reading this book, although it was good at the beginning, it didn't feel like a masterpiece. But as it went on, it got better and better. It didn't have that mindless feeling of being invincible in the world with just one plug-in. Extremely excellent! The author has a solid writing skills, and uses ordinary language to write down the step-by-step process on the road to immortality, and he will be cautious and careful before reaching the top. If this book had been of this caliber, I would have finished it. I think the rating is low, at least higher than many books with 9.3 To 9.4. I think it should be above 9.6. Five-star praise, praise, praise, praise👍🏻!

This book is well written, and the interesting characters are very personal. I still have to urge you to read more, and I hope the author will write a good article with more content, better, more intense, endless aftertaste, and satisfying people. Thank you [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The writing is smooth and natural. It's a good book. Highly recommended.

Very good, the language is simple, not repetitive, not verbose, the more I read, the more I want to read it, the beginning is better than the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, the score should be more than 9.2 Points, I hope the writing will be better in the future...

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This novel feels like it's getting smoother and smoother as I write it! 👍👍👍

Very good, wonderfully written and easy to understand.

The writing is good, I give it five stars, but I hope there won't be any harem stories in the future. Waiting for updates every day

Since the story of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, I once liked Goose, the abandoned young man of Lao Wu, and the door of creation, until I went on the road of Cultivation Alone. The text is simple, the plot is vivid, and it is exciting. There is no sentimentality or exaggeration of unnatural luck and opportunities. The goal is clear step by step, which is quite good. I like.

Well written, detailed and true. This is the first time a bookworm has taken the initiative to give five stars.

I hope the author will update quickly. The book is good. It is really good. The author is a great talent and the writing is magnificent. The book is only missing an opportunity to soar into the sky.

It's so exciting. I hope you work hard!

After reading Chapter 198, the world where the protagonist lives is very similar to today's society. The author said in the book "never forget the original intention" and personally understands that "people are inherently good by nature". In the process of growth and maturity, people are voluntarily or involuntarily contaminated with more and more evil. The process of finding good (original intention) is the best trajectory of life. In everything encountered in life, whether to filter out the root of evil (selfishness) in oneself, or to filter out the manifestations of good (for others) in others. People are both good and evil. Suppressing one's own evil and doing as much good intentions, good words, and good deeds is the way for people to find their true self. In the plot of the story, in the emotional entanglement, whether to treat the other party kindly, or to be ruthless and indifferent, this choice is spread out in the story, which attracts people's hearts and tugs at people's heartstrings. Choosing good will bring light and happiness to people, while choosing evil will feel darkness and hatred. When reflected in the story, they are the positive and negative characters. The clearer the good and evil, the stronger the sense of opposition, the more exciting and fascinating. The most outstanding book in this regard is the British masterpiece "Wuthering Heights". This book may give you inspiration for your creation. A single point of view, the purpose of communication.

Super exciting, exciting plot, emotionally delicate characters.

I have been following this work. I feel that the writing is good. The serial update is a bit slow. After reading it, I forgot the previous plot. It was not enjoyable enough.

This book is very well written. This is another good book I have read after reading The Mortal's Journey to Immortality. I hope the author will continue his work.

This book is very beautifully written, thank you to the author. 👍

This book is quite exciting, but the protagonist still grows very slowly, and it takes decades or centuries to advance to a certain level. It is very different from other authors and not very enjoyable. Combat is not the kind of killing that goes beyond the realm. I hope the author can improve his ability in this area in the future.

Reading this book is like seeing the growth of the author. It is a little jerky at the beginning, but it gets better and better at the end. The more you read, the more flavorful it becomes. It's a pretty good book, with the flavor of a mortal and its own characteristics. It's worth reading. I hope the author will work harder to make the plot more exciting and not stop updating it!

Not bad, not bad. Believe in yourself and write according to your own ideas. I am optimistic about you. Come on💪💪💪

The novel is well written, and the plot is quite attractive to readers. However, the protagonist's cultivation skills are too slow and difficult to improve. I suggest revising it.

The storyline is relatively well written and worth watching.

This book is rich in content, vivid in plot, and vividly written about the character. It is slightly different from other fantasy novels. The protagonist: a person with feelings and righteousness, who strives to conquer the troubled times and never forgets his true heart...

The author's writing is so good, it's really excellent. In this book, I saw a misguided story, a plot that does not conform to the relationship between cause and effect, a dog-licking protagonist, unlimited yy, and an imbalance in combat power. It is simply a model of doing whatever you want. In addition, the author's level of yy once again surprised me, making me feel that there are such unique people in the world. Tiantian is the chosen one in yy, isn't it? You can use the pen in your hand however you want, it won't be surprising even if you practice your Qi and soar to the top, or destroy the world with your palm, you can do it!

Many people read this book and said it was not interesting, and some said it was not well written. I have also read a few books on cultivating immortality, and they all have about the same content. Not to mention how exciting this novel is, but it is okay. I have read too many romance novels, and reading cultivating immortality is also a change of taste. I have been following it. I don't know when I will be able to finish the rest of it quickly.

To be honest, this book is the best one I have read in so many years (except for the previous greats such as Wangyu, Ergen, etc.) The ending is still a bit rushed, and it would be nice to add a chapter or two to describe how the final enemy was aggrieved. It is recommended that authors continue to conceive new works according to their own ideas and less draw on other people's experiences (the experience of great masters is worth learning from)