The Beauty of the Disease of Rapid Wear and Tear

The writing is very nice, but the ending of some worlds feels very rushed. This book has a very plain style, without those vulgar jokes. It should be uncensored so far. I really like the character image of Jiaojiao, she is very bland (I am not good at Chinese, so I don't know how to describe it). When this book becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan, so cheers for the author! ! !

I think the reasons for the low rating are: 1. The ending is nice, simple and not procrastinating, but it leaves readers confused. For example, when you pass through the first plane at the beginning, you can see that the male protagonist still loves the original protagonist, but at the end, the male protagonist suddenly changes his heart? 2. The heroine completed the task without much effort, and did not reflect the heroine's strategizing. It was unpleasant to watch, so I think the heroine can be described more and more carefully. I think the author generally wrote it very well. I don't understand why the rating is low. Most of the reasons are probably because it is too short. (I'm not good at it, so I won't write. These are just my personal opinions. Come on, author＾0＾~)

I've written it down. Thank you very much. Tie Q

Great author, come on! Super wonderfully written

It's very well written, and each world only has a dozen chapters. It's very friendly to people like me who don't have enough patience, and the writing is also very good. The only shortcoming is that the heroine is too much like the original protagonist, and sometimes she does a bit too much. Anyway, it's a bit redundant for me.

It's very beautiful, thank you to the author! ! ♬︎*(๑ºั╰︎╯︎ºั๑)♡︎

The author's writing style was still a little immature at the beginning, some of the plots were wrong, and the character's style was a bit extreme [punch out], but there has been a lot of improvement later on, the writing is good, and the plot is not so bloody. It is still worth reading. I hope the author can continue to improve like this! [Blowing kiss][like] Originally, I habitually gave five stars, but after comparing it with other good-looking books, I felt a little sorry for them. I still hope that the author can improve faster...

The author's writing is very nice, and each world feels quite short, which is a lot more enjoyable than other fast-travel novels.

Why did it end so suddenly? I'm still waiting for the update! The writing in the front is quite good, but the ending is sudden and not at all unexpected, so I feel very unhappy. I originally wanted to give it a high score, but forget it now.

I don't know why this book has such a low rating. In fact, I read this book two years ago, and I picked it up again when I was browsing the bookshelf today. Although I read it for a long time, I was still very impressed by the story in it, which is probably about becoming an immortal, and the Ode to Thousand Years of Long Live Pepper Flowers, which is the Republic of China, and the last one looking for Erivia. I was particularly impressed by the stories. Especially the story about becoming an immortal, I really think it is very well written. I didn't finish it without finishing it. There were one or two story settings that I didn't like very much so I didn't read it. Anyway, I really like this kind of imagination. When I read it, I also remembered that the writing was also very good, so I added a five-star review after two years. Recommended recommended,

So beautifully written! I hope the author's book can get a rating of nine or so as soon as possible! 🌹

Is the background of Chapter 2 Shaolin? Woo woo woo, it's so well written [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Jue Juezi, please give the author a big boost!

Long live the thousand years and the chants of peppercorns brought tears to my eyes and I was so excited! [Almost crying][Almost crying][Crazy][Crazy][Crazy][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's very good. She doesn't have the same personality as everyone in the world. She feels very curious. Although it is fast, the logic is very clear [I understand] I'm not losing money by investing in the shares. I also hope that the author will work hard. I've finished reading. Please speed up the update. [Sending heartfelt wishes]

Super pretty! The plot is special and exciting, and I love the sickly and beautiful heroine! There is a feeling of white moonlight. Come on, the author, give me your full support! [Send heart][Please update]

The second section of the brothel is a bit like a play called "Shaolin Asked" Still very beautiful

Big cheers for the author! I especially like Platycodon Shang

Well, let's just say, I didn't understand.

Hmm... The length of each world is short after all. Every time I think there is more to come, it will be xxx (finished), but it is still ok. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง When I commented on this, it happened to be Chengxian 1, and then I watched Chengxian. I had no interest in this plane at first, but out of trust in the author, I watched it, uh... How should I put it, didn't the author wake up? The writing is a bit messy. Why does the heroine blink so cutely when she is covered with a ribbon?

It's obviously very good-looking, why is the score so low? [Learned] [Please update]

Really recommend this book! Each world is short and without nonsense, and the plot is exciting and exciting!

It's really exciting! Super pretty! Big cheers for the author! ! !

The previous one is quite nice to write, and the overall style is the same, except for the sudden ending [face covering]

I've finished watching Two Worlds, and it feels pretty good. I prefer watching fast-paced movies, so the descriptions aren't so detailed, which is good for me. It's great, I like it very much

This book is very good, why so few people read it👉👈

Long live a thousand years, this plane of Pepper Ode is really good!

Keep up the good work, author. Although I just read it, it is really good! ! ! !

It's so beautiful, thank you to the author! 🥰🥰🥰

It's really beautiful