The Uchiha Rogue Ninja in Naruto

The author is a newcomer and his writing style is average. This is the first time he writes a long article. There are some loopholes in the plot. Please forgive me. I also hope that you can point out the plot and design loopholes and try to make up for them. I will try my best to present the best side of this work to everyone. I hope this Naruto fan novel can bring joy to all book lovers in their spare time. I am very satisfied.

It makes me laugh. The main character is 15 years old and has a kaleidoscope, but he can't defeat 7-year-old Shisui. The most outrageous thing is that Shisui is 7 years old and has a kaleidoscope.

To be honest, compared to those novels written by seven-year-olds and eight-year-olds, this one is really good.

Chapter one, the camp part. In fact, at this point, the detachment was written before, and the camp is mentioned here. It can be seen that this is not only a team of 4 people, but two or one. It would be better if it is stated here how many people are on the opposite side. Otherwise, they will directly show up here to launch a sneak attack, clearly telling the enemy that an enemy is coming. Moreover, the leader here will actually go up and chase after being attacked by a surprise attack. Anyone with a higher level will think about it in battle. After all, in the world of ninjas, intelligence is greater than human life. Making such a hasty move without knowing the enemy's combat strength information is not right with the previous invincibility on the battlefield. After all, even if the combat strength is high, it does not mean that being high can be invincible. A high-level fighter without brains will definitely be kited to death by a smart person, just like Shikamaru beat Hidan. At the same time, the level of the protagonist's team and the level of the opponent can actually be written before the fight, so that it is conceptual to read, otherwise there is no concept of fighting without levels. Although there is mention of special jounin, it later became jounin. Don't say jounin, then there should be a distinction between special jounin and jounin. I hope the author can understand and use clear words in the writing process. Never make the first sentence "special jounin" and the next sentence "jounin". The back and forth between special jounin and jounin will confuse the reader's concept of level. I personally think that the levels must be clearly divided so that there will be no loopholes. After all, it is a fan and it is based on the original work. Of course, this evaluation is just my personal suggestion. The book is still very good. Keep up the good work, author!

I don't understand why so many people criticize the author. Although there are loopholes in the writing of this book, as a new author, the author worked very hard and corrected any mistakes. It's good. Are some people uneducated? Give the author one star for scolding. Is there anything wrong with this book? Yes, but not much. It is much better than some language input books that copy web pages. This is a Naruto fan fiction, and it certainly cannot be said to be exactly the same. I am also a Naruto fan, and I have watched Naruto no less than three times. The logic of the author's book does not collapse, and the characters are relatively reasonable. Three or four stars are understandable and reasonable suggestions are made. But if you don't like the one you haven't read even one chapter, don't read it. What are black authors doing? Anyway, I feel like it's good so far. Come on, author (if you are dissatisfied and feel that I am wrong, just reply to me, it's a healthy discussion)

Alas, no more, I stopped reading. Originally I thought he was a complete blackmailer. He killed his sister, then killed the heroine, then took revenge on Yunying, then killed Danzo, became Hokage, and then became invincible and fucked Kaguya. Who knows what the author wrote? Brother, can you come with me? I'm so scared, I'm already very good, I can help you, and then his brother said, oh, sister, I am a vicious person, my brother has already helped you settle down in Konoha, everything, and then he said to the heroine, dear, come on, what a mess, this is a dark text, a dark text

I can't stand it, the power system has collapsed too much, and Uchiha is the top among his peers. Moreover, opening the kaleidoscope does not mean a direct increase in strength. It is almost impossible to fight against Todoroki with a kaleidoscope. Obito can ignore the side effects, Itachi can not die, and Shisui has almost never opened Susanoo. It needs to be written with human thoughts, and one step closer to death is used to save lives. The power consumption of Susanoo's eyes is much higher than that of ordinary pupil techniques, and it is not possible to open the kaleidoscope to Susanoo. Susanoo vs. Todoroki? Two more myopias after bombing? Moreover, Shisui has a great love personality. He usually shoots another Tenjin, or another Tenjin mouth, and uses Susana to attack... Wow, he went blind after a few times.

Really highly recommended! The author's writing is very good. I really like to watch the protagonist pursue a career instead of falling in love all the time. In short, the writing is very interesting. Super recommended *⁂((✪⥎✪))⁂*

It was so embarrassing to watch. The protagonist, a middle-aged boy, loved his sister to death. He said he wanted to be a rebel ninja, but in the end he still worked hard for the village. He was surrounded and beaten later but when he was caught, he screamed in pain why the cloud ninja wanted to destroy the peace. It embarrassed me to death.

For the fans, this plot is extremely toxic, it's just bad.