Improper Evolution: This Dog Has a Code, Run Away!

Cheer up for yourself~ Hahaha... This is my first time writing, thank you friends for your five-star encouragement... Don't worry, I may be a little reserved at the beginning, but it will definitely become more and more romantic in the future... [Blowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] (Ps. I found too many complaints about the protagonist Xianyu ~ In short... The protagonist did it on purpose... Those who have read the second volume should have some guesses, it is not a spoiler.)

This is a magical and weird book that is very funny for normal people to read.

When I saw 58, I couldn't stand it anymore. Maybe my traditional concept is too strong. I feel that people who die for the continuation of civilization should not be made fun of. Seeing other people working hard for human civilization, it's a bit uncomfortable to suddenly jump to Xianyu's daily complaints when the camera turns, but in a sense, this also shows that the author's writing has a better sense of substitution. And aside from the character of the protagonist that makes me angry, the author's character creation ability of the supporting characters is still very strong. I hope the author will continue to work hard and I will come back! (Possessed by Big Big Wolf)

It's very interesting. It tells the story of a lucky ordinary person who unintentionally caused trouble outside.

Not bad, there are quite a lot of elements. What makes me comfortable is that it doesn't feel forced to be patriotic.

Good, good, good, good-looking, super exciting, and related to environmental protection. The character of the protagonist is related to the fact that he/she is the "true" child of destiny on the entire planet. After all, there are "pseudo" children of destiny to do it, so just lie down.

It's so good. This book is full of laughter. I couldn't hold back my laughter in the middle of the night. It looks good, but Li Qingyu is still confused

Okay, Miss Crimson's venomous tongue is really annoying.

It's very beautiful. Why can't the rating go up? It's funny, good-looking and passionate. Come on, wuwuwuwu, it's not cool at all [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Please update I stayed up late reading a book today. I read the topic comments in the search box and found out about Tomato's personal report. After reading it, I found that I had also read this book. To be honest, this book had been deleted from my bookshelf a long time ago, so I had no impression of it before I saw it. Now that I have seen it, I suddenly became very popular. Mad, what a good book, what a good subject matter, but the writing is getting worse and worse. I read I read it, and I haven't read it since more than 600 chapters. Now I think about the feeling of reading the book at that time. The author begs you to write well. I am really angry. The writing of a good subject matter is getting worse and worse. There are various poisonous points, 🌟🌟The plot, the more I think about it, the more angry I become. I can't remember many details now. I have no desire to read this book anymore. I won't talk about sleeping [angry] and never see you again.

It looks good and the writing is very good. The subject matter is also very novel, it is a good book

I personally feel good about this book. From the current point of view, the protagonist is weak in the early stage. In the second game, his strength is significantly improved because he obtained the Sword of Failure and Betrayal. When reading this book, be patient. The main character is weak in the early stages and may be frustrating to read. It will be much better in the second scene. I personally think that the biggest highlight of this book is the use of various props that have evolved to enhance oneself. The topics are novel and the personal sense is good. (The plot is a bit tricky, but overall it's still very enjoyable [laughing evilly]) Among them, because the painted skin simulates the shape of a mermaid princess, her psychology has become a bit like a mermaid princess. If someone can't stand it, you can quit (if you quit, delete the reading record, this will not affect the author's score of this book) [Learned].

I just finished reading the author's latest chapter. I feel like I don't understand what kind of book this is. I was bored in the first round, but I was so excited in the second round. Moreover, this book is really fast. I hope the author can update it quickly. When will the gender change card be used? ! !

An Qi kicked me alive, and I will look back and see After reading it for many days, I found that more than two hundred chapters have been updated. I looked through the table of contents and found nothing about Angel. The original four stars are now made up to five stars. For Angel, that's it. That's it. Just remember this moment.

Didn't jump to chapter 9.5, It's better than Dali. I secretly watched and laughed at night until my girlfriend got up and beat me.

Although this book is very interesting, there are very few people. I pushed it several times, but there was no significant change [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

The world view is very good, book, you successfully caught my attention (the overbearing president laughs)

"People will encounter many temptations in their lives, in career, love, and friendship. All kinds of temptations are inducements. Whether you do something or not depends on your true heart, so walking in the world and sticking to your true heart is the right way." Seeing through your true heart is the most important and the most difficult point. It is difficult to see yourself clearly, so you are influenced by others. Is the final result what you want? It's hard to answer, it seems like I have regrets no matter what I do. In the middle of writing the book, the author was influenced by others and changed it, but the idea was not clear. He wrote it but felt uncomfortable and a little upset and annoyed. The later part was okay, but because the character of the main character in the middle changed too much and was not powerful, it seemed that the main character and the plot could not be connected later. Fortunately, there is an ending. Overall, it is not bad. I am very looking forward to the next book!

The beginning is very interesting and interesting, but there are a lot of foreshadowings in the middle. The protagonist is almost invincible and also crazy. It is very enjoyable to watch. The ending is so reversed. The protagonist is the culprit who suppresses the fate of the human race. I was dumbfounded. So many foreshadowings were not filled in before it ended. I can give five stars to the first part, but I want to deduct one star for the ending. However, there is a reason why the author couldn't continue writing, and it was very hard. In the end, he gave a big twist ending, which made people feel a little shocked. Even though the ending is sloppy, it's still interesting, but I won't deduct stars.

To be honest, I have been following it for a long time. It was fine at first, but I didn't understand the last few pictures. I ended up confused [face covering] [face covering], but it's still very good and the taste is right.

The book is very good, I hope the author can continue, but I also hope the author can untie his own knot. I haven't finished it after reading 846, and I haven't read such a long book for a long time. The innocence represented by SpongeBob SquarePants has been lost. Accept regrets, accept an unhappy separation, or become as stupid as Squidward and Patrick. I hope the author will do well.

The author is great! Come on! ! ! ! ! ! Don't care what others say, some people are just stupid and stupid. They obviously don't have a few ink in their heads, but they insist on pretending to be literary people to comment on. It's extremely arrogant! I can see the latest chapter, which shows that there are still people who like to read your books. Some of the writing is the same, which makes me bored. It is not easy to come up with such a novel and eye-catching book. I hope the author can work hard and persevere. As for what others say, read less. Although there are some merits, people who follow the trend are really hateful. Just say what you say without any brains.

It seems that this book is okay so far. Although the protagonist with a brain twitch has persuaded many people to turn away, but after knowing that he is hiding, after the obscene development, and the blue light in his eyes at the beginning, he can still accept it. After having SS and SSS swords, his intelligence has returned a little, and it feels a little better to watch it. Why should I read this book? The main reason is that it's so shocking and shocking to me. I can only describe it as "unbelievable", so let's open up my imagination! The effects of love burial spectacles, princess disease, 22 childbirth marks, and the male protagonist's appetite. Although the witch is quite annoying, she really should have an opponent, otherwise there will be nothing to write about. There are also some places where the content is dragging, cumbersome, and a little incoherent. Some places where the plot may be a little tighter are just tightened and then loosened, which makes it look a little uncomfortable, but overall It looks okay, so I gave it five stars. I hope the author can write better and better. If you have time, you can also look at what you have written before. You can make some small adjustments and fine-tune it. For example, at certain times, the description may be a little strange in terms of action psychology and so on. If you make slight modifications, it will look much more comfortable. Of course, it is just a personal suggestion. Hmm... I looked through the comments, and there were quite a lot of curses. What they said is indeed correct. You can add a small hint in the introduction at the beginning, or you can be more direct. The protagonist is an old scumbag hiding something, because it suddenly occurred to me that if it was hinted, no one might think about it carefully. Even if it was explicitly stated, it would not be taken too seriously. It would be better if it was direct. I thought about it, but I still have to elaborate. As for the tightness of the plot, I feel that this is quite important. It is very important for the viewing experience. Of course, it is just my personal sense. It is tight when it should be tight and loose when it should be loose. There are many places that should be tight, but suddenly loosened again. Some places should be loosened, but suddenly become tense again. The part that should be tightened. I can't think of the specific plot, but when I watched it, this feeling was obvious. The typical example of looseness is that when evolving SSS Crimson, the evolution time is long, which is indeed understandable, but at that time, you should relax a little and leave a day or two for the hero to sort out the functions of Crimson and settle himself. 12 Hours is obviously not enough, so I can only have a rough understanding. Although I gradually understood it during the game, this problem does exist. It is just a personal opinion and some of my own opinions, you don't have to listen.

Have the author ever thought about the spaceships of human civilization? First attack the steam civilization of Yijing. Then there is the witch civilization. In this way, after defeating the enemy civilization, you can collect their scientific research information and supplement it to make your own spacecraft more sound, making navigation in the universe safer and more powerful. Attack the witch civilization in this way. After gaining their runic powers. The other two are fundamentally different because their styles are too different. No progress can be made. In other words, use their bodies as a biological research database. If it's biological progress, then their bodies should be quite strong and their lifespan should be quite long. If you compete, your brain flexibility and lifespan will be reduced. The main thing is longevity. You must know the desire of some high-level people for life. His efforts are beyond others' imagination.

The writing is quite good. I haven't finished a book in Tomato for a long time. The style is not single and makes people want to keep reading. I hope the author will maintain this style and not let the book he writes become a single style, otherwise he will be tired after reading it.

Big cheers for the author! Very good. Keep up the good work.

I really like this book. Maybe the first game made a lot of people run away. Things got much better in the second scene, especially after binding the sword, the protagonist became completely beautiful. Great, but no one responded to me.

It's very interesting. It's a bit boring at the beginning, but it gets better and better at the end. But the ending feels a bit too hasty. I hope the author can fill in this hole next time. Thank you very much. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Very good, but the pace can be faster, and don't focus too much on being funny when writing in the comment area. It's okay at first, but then I get a little impatient. The pace is faster when I return to the planet, but everything else is fine. I'm a very picky person, and it's rare for you to let me read more than a hundred chapters. Come on!

Although the writing is okay! Too bad I'm a sci-fi fan! If you take the cultivation route, ordinary people in the future should pay attention when going out and don't talk nonsense. You might be gone if you don't pay attention! And beautiful ladies, please be aware that you may be gone that night! Some people may think I'm being serious, but individual combat abilities are all kinds of weird! When the ability becomes stronger, some things are no longer bound!

It's very beautiful, but when I saw the title of the book, my first reaction was dark blue... It ended suddenly, a bit unfinished