One Piece: Thunderous Beginning and Gossip

It's good to watch, but I can't help watching it. I gave it 5 stars after Monosuke died.

This book is really good, but the update is a bit slow. This book should be a harem, after all, there are so many beauties [laughs][laughs]

The writing is good. I just read a few chapters, but I have some questions about the few chapters I have read. The protagonist obtains skills by relying on skill points and system purchases. What does it have to do with choice?

I support the author, and I give a true five-star review. Whether the author has seen it or not, I just want to say a few words. Your work is perfect. Although your score is only 7.1, Don't give up and don't think that if your score is so low and you feel that you have not written well, it is because your work is so good. Others The author is here to trick you, don't worry about them, just be yourself. If you really want to get a higher score, I will give you a few tips. If someone comments, just click and follow the other person to send a thank you to this friend. Whether intentional or not, you will feel that you have done a bit too much? 80% Will definitely delete it and give you a five-star review again. You have followed him, and he has followed you. You are his fan, and he is also your fan. We are equal to each other, so your score will not be low. In the next one or two months, your score will be very high. This is my experience from uploading videos frequently.

Yes, it's quite burning, and it can be substituted, but there are many pitfalls that I don't know if they can be filled in later. After all, the protagonist is too strong suddenly. Even if it can be said that he hides his strength later, it can be explained reasonably. The burning fruit can be explained as the ability of Shenlong, which is easy to understand.

The protagonist is not arrogant, his emotions are quite delicate, and he does not belittle the comic characters, which is great. It's good to watch, it's good to watch, and the plot is quite attractive, but two updates a day are not enough to watch. The more you write, the better it looks!

I have caught up with the updated part. As a long-time Tomato book friend and Haimi, I can responsibly say that this is a masterpiece. When I read books about pirates, I always wanted to accomplish one regret: changing the fate of Whitebeard and Ace. This book does it. It is different from ordinary books related to Whitebeard. In ordinary books, due to the development of the plot of the war, there is nothing to write about, except that he formed a pirate group related to Whitebeard. This kind of writing makes people look very uncomfortable and uninteresting, but this book is great. It starts the war and directly rescues Ace, and now he is fighting Blackbeard. After reading so much, you have to read it yourself to feel that what I say is true. In short, I highly recommend it, give it full marks, and will keep up with it for a long time.

Author, I hope you can answer some questions from readers in the comments

It's great, very exciting! It's even more exciting than the original work. The author has worked hard. Come on, I'm looking forward to the next story of this book.

It feels okay, but it's not as outrageous as it is. It's still a bit short of being the number one among Pirates fans, but what can I say? Anyway, the plot is okay. The most important thing is that there is a single female protagonist. I still feel a little uncomfortable after watching multiple female protagonists. Oh, by the way, it would be better if the protagonist can change his sword in the later stage. The author should update the bloody book more!

That's right! Is the author great? What about Whitebeard II? ? ? I want to see what Dad's expression would be like if he were still alive and looking at Whitebeard II!

Momonosuke is dead, I must give him a good review

Personally, I quite enjoyed reading this book. Although it has some minor flaws, it doesn't matter. Looking forward to the next update from the author

The writing is very good, even more slowly [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

Because Momonosuke died and Whitebeard and Ace were still alive, I originally wanted to give it five stars, but after Xiaozi died, I could only give it four stars.

It's so beautiful, I just watched it to death

Really very beautiful

Good, very good👍👍👍👍

Wow, such a beautiful book, it would be a shame not to give it a five-star review!

I give it full stars. The book is very good. If you insist on pursuing perfection, you can go directly to the original version. I think the fanfic is very good. It's fun to watch, exciting, and has no knives. It doesn't hesitate when it's time to be cruel. But I think this is an old book. Can the author continue to update it? I still want to see the end.

It's so good. I hope I can keep writing. I finished reading these chapters in one day.

1 Why do you still call yourself a swordsman, a swordsman, or a great swordsman even though you know that you are using a sword? . 2 Why do the giants have a lieutenant general level per capita and don't eat devil fruits? The latter one is really poisonous

It's pretty good, but there are some flaws.

There are 60 chapters in the war. The original novel would not even dare to do this. [Laughing and crying]

The author doesn't need to worry about the bad reviews. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. Come on, buddy.

There are indeed millions of people with overlord-colored domineering power. There is a whole pirate world. Not to mention billions of people like the earth, there are at least 100 or 200 million people. Among them, there are only dozens of people in the original work. Plus some characters who appeared, it is estimated that there will not be more than a hundred, which is indeed quite small.

This book is so good

Happy New Year, fellow book friends (Good writing, cheers＾0＾~)

Come on, come on, come on

I still hope there will be no heroine