Breathe********

The writing is very good but there are too few chapters. Ten chapters a day is never too few, and thirty or forty chapters is never too many (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)

I don't know when I will stop updating, but I will wait until you come back. Come on

It's good to read but the content is too little. The writing is good and the content is quite funny. The author needs to work hard and update it.

How should I put it, although the element of demon slayer has been added, there are too many traces of summoning banzai, and the flower demon and succubus plots are a bit repetitive, but overall it is okay. Come on, you can write more of your own ideas.

Since it is a breathing method, why not use a knife... I always see the protagonist using a sword. Swords and knives are different, okay? I always feel that the breathing method shown with a sword lacks something, and it has no visual sense and feels unsightly.

The book is good. But what about the author?

What about the author? Missing?

The writing is pretty good and the subject matter is relatively new. But the update speed is too slow

How can I put it, it looks very comfortable, there are some Pokémon, and the style of summoning banzai. The addition of demon slayer elements not only does not draw points but also improves the overall quality. Good reviews! (Why did I stop updating?)

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author.

The subject matter is very new. Very good.

Author, you died so miserably!

Why doesn't the author update? This book has been on my bookshelf for a long time. Please update it quickly. I feel like I have no novels to read.

Can't Su Sheng have a female protagonist? Author

Did the author forget about this book?

17 Chapters saved for more than half a month

It's poisonous, it's too poisonous, but I can handle it, so I think it looks good.

This book has a good idea. Even martial arts is not created out of nothing. For the time being, I only found this pitfall. It has not been updated for a long time.

It's very good. It's the best book of this genre that I've read so far. Come on, author!

It's very exciting. I read it without any interruption. It's just too little. I need more from the author.

I read it in one sitting as a bookworm of fifteen years. The whole story is fluent and I like big books very much.

A high-quality beast-control story, it's cool to have a time traveler and the original protagonist, and the process is very reasonable.

It's okay. The emotional lines are also very rich and warm. The protagonist is not a virgin either, so he can quarrel when he needs to quarrel with her. The battle scenes are also very exciting Most people say the plot is cliche. You say it's cliche. Why don't you write one yourself? Just know bb

The content is quite special

It's not enough, it's so uncomfortable.

So beautiful, why did it break?

If this doesn't end, I'll keep chasing it

The book is okay, but there are many typos and omissions. I hope the author will be more serious.

Very nice, but a little short and weak

Five-star praise, I hope the author will continue to work hard and not collapse.