Martial Arts************

This book was written by a girl, I firmly don't believe it! I guess it's a burly guy with a sloppy beard and foot-picking pretending to be a girl! Show us the evidence!

If a girl writes about harem, please support her! ! !

How to say it? Compared with the enjoyable version, it still lacks shortcomings. It is basically invincible. It can accept a few younger brothers and marry a few lovely wives. The only thing missing is the regrets in these dramas. It would be best to make up for it. Supported, five stars, waiting for more exciting things to come.

It's super exciting, the protagonist is neat and tidy, the male protagonist written by a female author is more enjoyable than the male protagonist written by a male author, and the plot is compact and not verbose.

It's really good, I read it in one go, like it! The key is that the author is a young lady!

Not bad, not bad, very to my liking, very exciting. But I just feel that after the protagonist went to the Demon Realm, it felt a bit dull and not as exciting as before. This is a personal feeling. But overall it's still good, give it five-star support.

Let's see if we can restore Xiong Ba's skills...

I like Fengyun very much. Duan Lang is indeed very sad. I am very grateful to the author for letting us see a different feeling.

The subject matter is good, and the outline is also good. I really want to read the novel about this movie, but the writing is not very good, so this is okay. It's just that the plot progresses too fast, just like the Douyin video, which is indeed much more enjoyable. But there is a lack of precipitation. You can refer to the books written by masters such as the Third Young Master of the Tang family. It is similar to the difference between Shuangwen and famous novels.

Xiongba's criticism for the rest of his life was his own. Given Nie Feng's nature, as long as Xiongba treats him well, Nie Feng will not rebel. Bu Jingyun may not, after all, Bu Jingyun saw the destruction of Huojiazhuang with his own eyes! According to the conversation between Duan Shuai and Duan Lang, the Duan family has been guarding the Fire Qilin for generations. The Duan family should be a breeder from a hidden sect who is responsible for guarding the Fire Qilin! In other words, there should be a sect of cultivating immortals in the storm, but for unknown reasons, the sect disappeared and only four divine beasts were left: the dragon turtle was imprisoned, the fire phoenix was nirvana, the green dragon disappeared into the sea, and the fire unicorn was trapped in Lingyun Cave!

Although it's not detailed enough, it's still quite interesting. Come on.

After reading it, I will continue reading the next book.

You don't need to write the harem so quickly... There are two women in Chapter 12...

It's okay, it's barely a high-quality novel. The only pity is why the final subsystem hasn't arrived yet? [Laugh]

The character selection angle is unique, the plot is fast-paced, and the plot is not awkward. Especially after knowing that the author is a young lady, I must give it a five-point praise (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Awesome, come on! It is recommended that Bu Jingyun be eliminated.

Looks good (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Come on, lady (ง •̀_•́)ง

Business

The young lady has deep tricks [laughing]

It's hard to understand why such a beautiful book has such low reviews [almost crying]

My darling, you ascended to another world, it's not pretty, but I like Duanlang, Mingyue, Youruo, very good, this is very good, Yoxi, hehehehehe

Duanlang in the parallel world is truly a winner in life!!!

Not bad, good, good, very good

Miss, I hope the update will be faster. The highlights are gone when you see them. It's really uncomfortable to watch.

Yes, your writing is getting better and better. I'm optimistic about you.

The writing in this book is sophisticated, the plot is exciting but not confusing, and the martial arts are seamlessly connected. Come on!

A very nice book

This book is well rewritten👍👍👍

Not bad, come on author

Little beauty, well written