Lin's Immortal Clan

The viewing experience is very good, so give it a positive rating. The author's writing is very good, especially in the first few dozen chapters. There are some minor flaws in the subsequent chapters, but they do not affect the overall viewing experience. The world view and each character are well established. Each character has his or her own thoughts. Except for the real NPCs, they basically have things they want to pursue. There is no one who kills the protagonist for no reason or without thinking, but most of them are caused by greed. But it is undeniable that greed, as one of the seven deadly sins, can indeed blind people's reason, so I agree with part of the plot written by the author. The narration of each realm is also very good. Even the cross-level combat is not exclusive to the protagonist, and the upper limit is very small, which will not cause the built combat power system to collapse. Of course, there are some shortcomings. For example, the "Soul-Destroying Kill" kills the enemy too quickly. Although the author has said that it can be wiped out if it is higher than its spiritual consciousness. However, I feel that everyone is a cultivator of immortality. Cultivation is to strive for life with the sky. More or less, we are all people with a little luck. I think I can describe the behavior of the person who is killed. This may give readers a better experience (suggestion). I am not opposed to direct erasure, but I feel that by describing the reactions of some of the people who were killed, it can better reflect their defiance, and it can also better show the protagonist's desperate feeling of desperate to quickly solve the battle and support his relatives and friends. Of course, this is just my suggestion, so it is only for reference. My vision and thinking may be limited, but I also hope that the author can write this book better and better, so I make this suggestion. If there is any offense, please forgive me.

So far the writing is very good, five stars. But in the future, it must not be a harem novel.

Praise! This is my only three favorite family novels. It is not like other novels of the same type. It looks like a family novel, but in fact it is a personal immortality invincible novel wrapped in a family novel. It is all refreshing. This book is very good. The clan members are united as one. Although most of the words are devoted to the protagonist, both the family atmosphere and the character of the protagonist are excellent, and the values ​​​​disseminated are also very correct.

Isn't this book a harem?

Hello, author, I would like to give you a suggestion. Change this title. Uncle, second uncle, third uncle, fourth uncle, fifth uncle, eldest uncle, second uncle, third uncle, fourth uncle, fifth uncle (second uncle, third uncle, fourth uncle, fifth uncle). For example, the protagonist says hello, second uncle, and after saying it, the second uncle's name is Lin Zongyan, etc. It's weird. It's my personal opinion. In the end, I hope you can write better and better. This kind of family novel seems to be the first one I've read here.

The three views of this book are quite correct and full of emotions. It is not the kind of vulgar writing that only relies on killing to gain enlightenment. It can be regarded as one of the fairy herbs. I hope the follow-up will be exciting!

😎👣The Emperor Zun arrived and left a footprint. The subject matter of this book is good. 👍Although the author's writing style has shortcomings, it is still very exciting and beautiful. It is worth reading and collecting, and it is worth owning. 🤓The author will continue to encourage you. Keep up the hard work and look forward to watching the exciting chapters in the future. We can only stop here at this time. There will be a new chapter in the future to fight again and conquer this place. 😜Emperor is gone... ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

The author is great, he writes about the reality of the world of immortality, and tells about the difficulty of growing up a family. His writing style is good.

It's very beautiful. Come on, the author. I hope there will be no more eunuchs. (If possible, I hope the author can let the protagonist learn marksmanship.)

The writing is good. The author could write more about unity and strength to resist the enemy. Otherwise, it would be a little easier to obtain resources.

A family should be like this, with seniority, age, ability, and reasonable distribution of materials. Family travel is a whole, and unity is the core.

Personally, this book is a good book for family cultivation. If there is no Holy Mother, there is no harem, and it is not useless. It is worth watching.

Very good, I hope the author can continue to update, the inspiration will never run out

The content is rich and exciting, the writing is sophisticated and sophisticated, and it leads the family to grow together. The protagonist is resourceful, kind and courageous. Genius flow, family flow type novel.

The writing is okay, not a brainless novel. Although the protagonist has the perk of a time traveler, which is a storage bag, and not much else, the performance is still okay.

The writing is very good, but your kind of subject matter will not become popular. If there is a system, this book's score should be better. After all, most people nowadays like articles that have a system.

Just come up with a system

Very good, the more you watch, the more exciting it becomes

Not bad, very pretty

I like this kind of book

Very good, but the number of words is relatively small, so four stars

Very powerful, don't be a eunuch.

This book is very good, but the update is a little too slow. I give the author four stars. I am afraid that the author will be proud if I give it full. I hope the author can update it quickly.

What a great book! Traditional writing on immortality

A very good novel about cultivating immortals, with acceptable plug-ins.

Good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The writing is vivid, the writing is fluent, and it is not a bitch or brainless! Great book! ! !

Okay, there is no such thing as improving one's cultivation for no reason, the fundamentals are not stable, come on💪, you will come back to read it when you have hundreds of chapters, save it first.

Very interesting, thank you to the author!

Super exciting, very good

So far so good