Socially Afraid People Are Forced to Socialize by the System!

First give me five stars! Come on, author! As someone who controls social horror, I suddenly wanted to read a novel whose main character is social horror. And it's my favorite urban superpower. Okay, let's talk about the reason why I was persuaded to quit. Putting aside the facts first, manual dog head (•́ω•̀ ٥) Let's not talk about the many problems such as the plot or the ambiguity of the supporting characters. The most basic description of social terror is insufficient. I seriously doubt that the author is not a sociopath! Accuse! ! ! ! Apart from the first few sentences, I don't see the main character being sociophobic. As a social control company! I have a few suggestions~ 1. Please add more detailed descriptions of the protagonist's actions. This is really, really important! The most basic thing is to dig your toes into the ground! If I were to tie the shoelaces of strangers in public, I would be able to squeeze out three bedrooms and one living room. Don't dare to look directly at people during conversations. Oh, I can really think of it with my toes. 2. The protagonist must have psychological activities during the dialogue! ! ! The author doesn't think that being alone in a corner is considered a form of social fear, right? Dialogue! ! Dialogue! ! Talk to people! ! That's what society fears the most! That kind of embarrassment, unnaturalness, and fear of saying something wrong and getting negative feedback from others! ! ! ! Secondly, the most difficult thing to understand is the school beauty. Her mother has been admitted to the hospital, and she was still entangled with two boys on the street for a long time about tying her shoelaces! ! ! Of course, I believe that as long as the author keeps updating the plot design or character design, he will be able to master it sooner or later. I remember there was an article on Tomato titled, "I'm Combating Social Terror in an Infinite World." After reading the first two chapters, I felt a strong sense of social fear! The author can take a look~ Looking forward to the author's progress!

Well written, good luck to the author