The Myriad Worlds Shop: I Sell Gatling Guns to the Ancestral Dragon

I'm a new author. I think it's okay. I'll give it a five-star review.

It's very interesting, the plot is novel and the rhythm is tight. A good book requires ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ five-star recommendation! Clockwork barrages suppress the shock Σ(っ °Д °;)っ Salute to the author (`･ω･´)ゞっ

Although a novel is set in one realm, the author writes that Feng Qingyang, who was originally in the acquired realm, has the middle stage of Jindan at the beginning of the book. Then, when you go to the worlds with innate, grandmaster, and grand master, are they the Yuanying, out-of-body, and combined cultivations? How can a martial arts world be so terrifying and powerful?

"The Strongest Shopkeeper in History" modified

It's beautiful, please give it a thumbs up to the author (ง•̀_•́)ง

Five stars first. I just read Chapter 9 and it's pretty good. However, I hope that the author's protagonist will not be unable to walk when he sees a woman. I would like to make a small suggestion to avoid having a harem as much as possible. Even if you have a harem, please don't have so many women. Just three or four or two or three will be fine. I'll take it as appropriate to see how it develops in the future! Ps (Can you please stop treating Concubine Xuan as the heroine or a member of the harem? I always feel that her three views are not very correct and include the entire Buddhism. I cannot rule out that there are good ones, but they are very few)

I don't like the main character's character! There is no expert demeanor at all! Nothing cool! When someone kneels down to you, just smile and help them up with your hands! In the eyes of others, you are God! Have you ever seen God lift up an ant? Shops open to all corners of the world! How long do you want to support me?

If this book wasn't really interesting, just because of your last sentence, I would definitely pay attention to you.

I was originally going to give it three and a half stars, but I gave it more than half a star for writing better details. The level was skipped too quickly. There's no need to go into too much detail, just focus on details!

Come on, author! 💪