(Note: The writing is not good, this book is poisonous, please read with caution if you like Long Ao Astronomy.)
Li Junze accidentally traveled through time and became the villain of an urban novel. In the original novel, he was originally a good student with excellent academic performance and a bright future, but in the end he died on the street because he helped the rich second-generation villain brother steal the girl from the protagonist.
To survive! He had to embark on a road of death with the protagonist!
Reader comments
I have a hunch that 99.99999% Of the time this novel will end in failure. In order not to take any chances, I'll say goodbye. ٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ
The author's stumbling writing reminds me of me back then, with the idea of writing a good story, without making an outline or checking the information, regardless of the situation, just writing it with passion. I have been trained that I am a novice and not as good as a master, I have also been scolded that the plot is boring and brainless, I have been annoyed by all sorts of strange things, and I have been attacked by life, but I still persist in writing because of my youthful passion and my desire to finish the story. Looking back on the past, I can only say that I am sad because I wrote new words, but now I can only say that it is a good autumn... Well, it seems that I couldn't even hold a pen at that time? But this cannot stop a 4-year-old child from dreaming of writing! (🤪)
The writing is very good. I have never seen such a good-looking novel. I have never seen this type of novel before. I just treat it as a show. It is so funny that my stomach hurts!
From the current point of view, this book is different from other villain novels! The protagonists of other villain stories basically seem to be controlled by the system! And also to please the heroine. I've read too many villain stories, and I don't feel anything anymore! When it comes to writing, you have to be unique in order to achieve good results!
Super five stars. Compared with many villain stories that rely solely on wooing the heroine, this book is still very novel and exciting.
And the male protagonist also knows the law, but sometimes the male protagonist's IQ is really embarrassing😓,
Also, although he was threatened by the heroine Lin, this shows that the male protagonist does not rely entirely on the system.
But the policewoman part is a bit cliche, although it's quite exciting.
Finally, I hope it will be a single female protagonist. [Smile]
It's pretty good, except for some places where it doesn't work well, but I support the setting of not having a female protagonist.
I hope the protagonist can help Wang Zixuan and Lin Shuyao get together later
Is there a female protagonist? If so, who?
It's very beautiful, well organized, and the writing style is old-fashioned. At first glance, it's a work of the gods. If it doesn't look good, come and kill me.
Come on! ! ! I hope a female protagonist appears.
I'm thinking about what would happen if Chu Xinghe saw the protagonist's change of gender.
This book is wonderful! When I say this to other villain novels, I have a different feeling.
The author's writing style is very good, but it's a little immature. With more training, it will definitely be better. The content of the article is a little sluggish, but overall it's very good. I support the author greatly.
After reading the first ten chapters, I learned that the protagonist is an ordinary person (a very ordinary person), traveled to another world, and slowly learned that he was a villain in the novel. I once thought about escaping from the "protagonist", but I had to become an enemy with the "protagonist". After the first battle with the "protagonist", I realized that to deal with the "protagonist", I need to slowly weaken the "protagonist"'s aura to deal with him, and then slowly grow up, and later become a real villain.
Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, don't worry, I'll try my best to fight back if you criticize you, don't be angry, your writing is great! 😊
In short, I hope the author won't be too literal. Personally, I think the author talks a lot. (Personal issue, please forgive me and don't spray me)
The author does not have to question his own text. What you wrote suits my taste
Don't worry about them, just write your book
Author, please continue to work hard, we will support you to the end
The book is very good. I like it. Don't worry, the book (uncle) will support you.
The author writes very well.
The plot is pretty good
Come on, author, come on
I hope the author will update soon [Petrochemical][Petrochemical][OK]
I have a hunch that 99.99999% Of the time this novel will end in failure. In order not to take any chances, I'll say goodbye. ٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ
The author's stumbling writing reminds me of me back then, with the idea of writing a good story, without making an outline or checking the information, regardless of the situation, just writing it with passion. I have been trained that I am a novice and not as good as a master, I have also been scolded that the plot is boring and brainless, I have been annoyed by all sorts of strange things, and I have been attacked by life, but I still persist in writing because of my youthful passion and my desire to finish the story. Looking back on the past, I can only say that I am sad because I wrote new words, but now I can only say that it is a good autumn... Well, it seems that I couldn't even hold a pen at that time? But this cannot stop a 4-year-old child from dreaming of writing! (🤪)
The writing is very good. I have never seen such a good-looking novel. I have never seen this type of novel before. I just treat it as a show. It is so funny that my stomach hurts!
From the current point of view, this book is different from other villain novels! The protagonists of other villain stories basically seem to be controlled by the system! And also to please the heroine. I've read too many villain stories, and I don't feel anything anymore! When it comes to writing, you have to be unique in order to achieve good results!
Super five stars. Compared with many villain stories that rely solely on wooing the heroine, this book is still very novel and exciting. And the male protagonist also knows the law, but sometimes the male protagonist's IQ is really embarrassing😓, Also, although he was threatened by the heroine Lin, this shows that the male protagonist does not rely entirely on the system. But the policewoman part is a bit cliche, although it's quite exciting. Finally, I hope it will be a single female protagonist. [Smile]
It's pretty good, except for some places where it doesn't work well, but I support the setting of not having a female protagonist.
I hope the protagonist can help Wang Zixuan and Lin Shuyao get together later
Is there a female protagonist? If so, who?
It's very beautiful, well organized, and the writing style is old-fashioned. At first glance, it's a work of the gods. If it doesn't look good, come and kill me.
Come on! ! ! I hope a female protagonist appears.
I'm thinking about what would happen if Chu Xinghe saw the protagonist's change of gender.
This book is wonderful! When I say this to other villain novels, I have a different feeling.
The author's writing style is very good, but it's a little immature. With more training, it will definitely be better. The content of the article is a little sluggish, but overall it's very good. I support the author greatly.
After reading the first ten chapters, I learned that the protagonist is an ordinary person (a very ordinary person), traveled to another world, and slowly learned that he was a villain in the novel. I once thought about escaping from the "protagonist", but I had to become an enemy with the "protagonist". After the first battle with the "protagonist", I realized that to deal with the "protagonist", I need to slowly weaken the "protagonist"'s aura to deal with him, and then slowly grow up, and later become a real villain.
Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, don't worry, I'll try my best to fight back if you criticize you, don't be angry, your writing is great! 😊
In short, I hope the author won't be too literal. Personally, I think the author talks a lot. (Personal issue, please forgive me and don't spray me)
The author does not have to question his own text. What you wrote suits my taste
Don't worry about them, just write your book
Author, please continue to work hard, we will support you to the end
The book is very good. I like it. Don't worry, the book (uncle) will support you.
The author writes very well.
The plot is pretty good
Come on, author, come on
I hope the author will update soon [Petrochemical][Petrochemical][OK]
Come on! The author is great
Too short, too short! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
It looks great. Come on, leader.
How can I say it, not bad
Nothing, I just want to give it five stars.
Not bad, keep up the good work