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What the hell? The protagonist is intruding. Take stock of all the ghosts.

The first part was fine, but the second part was bad when Bai Xin disappeared and the protagonist was forced to become wise. Since there was a reward, why did he keep making extraordinary achievements in human beings? Is the mythical genre outdated? There is also the Ten Thousand Realms Management Bureau and the six major princes. To be honest, this male protagonist is just a tool, and tool people will not end well. Therefore, there should be no such thing as the Management Bureau of All Realms. The emergence of this thing shows that the male protagonist's world not only has the technology to connect all realms, but also has the means to travel through all realms.

If the author of rubbish novels can't write it, then don't write it.

I'm really fucking convinced. If you really want to kill them, some shady soldiers will kill them first and kill them secretly. What do you want to do without silencing someone? I thought it was about ghosts and beasts, but there is actually such a plot. Forget it, it's not a refreshing and invincible article.

What the hell? Make a video, just make a video. You have to add some messy things. What is written in the front is good, but what is written in the back is rubbish.

Just edit it well, what about the other content? It's cloudy and foggy, the more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel

It's just rubbish among rubbish! ! Just play the video properly. Why do you want to incorporate the protagonist's story line into it?

I'm so tired of watching what the hell?

There is no clear distinction between priorities, and writing in the real world is not good either. The ranking introduction is simply crammed into the word count, and there is little interaction or casual skipping. There is no interactive plot at all and then jumps to the real world. Then you start writing about your uninteresting and boring world again. There is a sense of fragmentation and neither side has been dealt with well. So why write the editing rankings in the first place? Do you want to watch you write about urban daily life due to the popularity? When my level is low, I still don't calm down. Now I'm broken and want to see how miserable it can be.

What, Tang San, such a dish can still be on the list. What kind of dish is he? Why is he the same as the Ancient Dust Desert Emperor Ye Tiandi? This is an urban article. The cities are just cities. Just take stock of the joke. While taking inventory, the cities are mainly still a bunch of cities.

Was this written to make up the word count? When you make a video, make a video properly. The video is like forcibly changing the topic to the protagonist's company. It's a hot chicken novel. After more than a dozen chapters, you don't want to read it. The name of your novel doesn't match up. Why do you insist on forcing it to be about the company? Then you just change the name. Is it really possible to publish any shabby novel now? Completely water

What exactly did you write? Author, can you make me laugh but not as a writer?

Spicy chicken. . . . .

I have read all but one list, and the rest are really eye-catching.

It's not impossible to write a novel about taking stock of the world. However, if you spend a lot of time writing about the world, you won't take stock of it in one stroke. It's just a little bit. What's the point of starting with your title of taking stock of the world? In the world of this novel, the male protagonist is also born with mental retardation, and he doesn't know what to say. Editing and writing are wrong in the comments, but the difference is not big, they are all the same.

It's really rubbish

The front is okay, the back is just garbage.

I saw one that made me uncomfortable

What rubbish. . . . Garbage protagonist

What the hell is this? It's so messy!

After reading Chapter 20, I want to ask, is this editing type? Slipped away

Why write about the city when you just edit a trashy novel well?

Selling dog meat in sheep's clothing, every word is messed up

Rubbish novel, I don't want to give it even one star.

Junk novels

It's rubbish. You can still read the first few chapters. Where are the children? I'd rather never see this book, it's rubbish

I have never seen such a ridiculous book that can be published in all directions. Since there are people on it and they also manage the company, I was convinced, and finally wrote a completely incorrect book.

Sorry, the eunuch is so damn bad

Just two words are frustrating

Spicy novels