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This is the author's first book, thank you very much, and all readers please support me! When I first started writing, there were more or less plots that were not handled very well, and there were stumbles. Now it has reached more than 1 million, and the plots and concepts are much better than before! The author carefully reads the comments left by each reader, and writes as well as possible according to everyone's opinions. After all, every story requires both the author's careful writing and the reader's careful appreciation. The two are jointly created, and one is indispensable! Poisonous points in readers' comments: 1. There are too many female protagonists. Three were confirmed before and two were revealed. However, everyone objected and the third female protagonist has been removed! There will never be another female lead in the future! 2. Regarding the issue of Qian Boliang, everyone feels that the rebellious protagonist should not be accepted anymore. Since everyone doesn't like it, Qian Boliang has also been dealt with in the subsequent plot! 3. Emotional drama. To be honest, the author is not very good at writing emotional drama. There are three female protagonists in the outline, and now there are two left. They are all a kind of power bond. There are not many emotional dramas in this book! If you can't adapt to these poisonous points, in order not to affect the mood of the new readers, then you should choose the next book! The author is not a full-time writer, but he loves writing. He writes two large chapters in one every day. He takes one day off every month. It's not easy to code, so please spray lightly!

Now I'm reading chapter 39. Compared to those useless families with internal strife and so on, I prefer to read this kind of family unity. The author's writing style is also very good, so I give it five stars.

The writing is really good, it doesn't look boring, the rhythm is also very good, the plot is not dull, I hope the author will stick to it, there are not many good-looking books, it is a masterpiece, the only thing is that it is not enough to watch, not enough to watch￣ ￣)σ

This book is well written and the author needs to work hard.

The writing is okay. If you don't recommend harem stories, you can read it, but the protagonist can't move when he sees a woman. There are two female protagonists in less than 10%.

Okay, I just don't like too many women

Does the author recommend any other novels similar to this one? As long as there is no system, it is easy to do. There are too many systems in novels nowadays.

There are very few articles about family cultivating immortality on Tomato. Come on, the author. You can write well. I hope it won't stop updating.

So far, the content is quite good. It's a slow-paced novel. Although the plot is quite old, it's still quite enjoyable to read. This is a novel about cultivating immortality with a family as the core. It doesn't have a sarcastic and slap-in-the-face plot, so it's still very good.

The upgrade of this kind of family group gives people a completely new look!

The author's writing is very good and very suitable to my taste. I especially like to read this kind of developing family flow. The author's other novel Purple Tears is also very good, but it is updated too slowly, but it is still very interesting.

The author's writing is really good, but it's too short. I finished reading it in two days! Any book with a similar author is trash! The author writes quickly and urges updates!

I have never read much of this style of writing, because the others are all cool and I don't want to read the names. But in this book, the protagonist walks step by step without the family intrigues in other articles. This is an innovation. I don't reject multiple female protagonists, but too many is not good. The author still has a lot of room for improvement in writing relationships. Overall, very good! I hope the author can work hard!

The author must be an old bookworm. He incorporated the things he loved to read. Nice

The author can tell me the names of the heroines!

Not bad, more in line with the taste of an old bookworm like me

After leaving, I saw Chapter 271 (´△｀), which is quite satisfactory and more suitable for beginners. When I first read the novel, I almost read these. This author handled the details better, but there were a little more typos in the later period, which seemed not to be the case in the early stage.

After reading many novels about cultivating immortals, and then reading about practicing swordsmanship, alchemy, and physical training, it is difficult to see the hardship, persistence, and struggle of a family in cultivating immortals. What is even more rare is the unity of the family, which at least gives me the feeling that it is valuable. In addition, the storyline of this book is also compact.

I think it's still okay, but it won't be a single female protagonist later on. If you exclude this, it's still good.

Personally, I prefer that there are no intrigues within this race and they live in harmony. I finally found a copy. I hope it doesn't involve eunuchs.

This book deserves five stars! If you don't believe it, old book friends can go in and take a look and you'll find out! I have read hundreds of novels for decades. Jin Yong, Gu Long, Wen Ruian, Chen Qingyun, Liu Canyang, Wangyu, Ni Cangtian, Crazy, I Eat Tomatoes, Tomatoes and Potatoes, and many more. This novel can compete with the top ones! It's really exciting!

It is a family-style fairy tale that is worth watching. The plot is ups and downs, compact and not procrastinating, and the details of the fighting are also handled very well! Come on, the update is too slow, I really can't watch it!

Why did it all end immediately?

I originally wanted to give it five stars, but there are too many female protagonists, and the writing is very good, so I'll give it four stars first.

This book is very good, but it is a slow read, please be patient, it will be very good later \(//∇//)\

Five stars first, I recently read more than 60 chapters in two days. This kind of subject matter is very beautiful. The whole story is mostly about families helping each other, and the names are also very good. I'll change my comment later if I want to! Also, I don't like the heroine Feng Yue, she is really bad, she is far worse than the hero's mother. And it's a little charming. Not as good as Zheng Dong.

I'm hooked on this novel. The story about family cultivation is very good. There is no intrigue in the family and it seems very enjoyable.

Very good, very pretty

Chapter 24 has history, one star deducted

It's a good book. It doesn't have the drama of a family fighting each other and suppressing the clan members like in other fantasy novels. It's very harmonious and very comfortable to read.