Heaven-Chosen Phoenix: The Emperor's Cherished Favorite

It's very well written, from beginning to end, very well written, consistent to the end, without any sloppiness. There seems to be less time for the male and female protagonists to interact. They have been writing about the heroine's upgrade and other things. There are too few after the Fengyu Palace and should be written more, instead of directly advancing. However, the heroine's journey was too smooth. The heroine's parents were rescued in one chapter. It was too simple. There seemed to be less space for the heroine. There should be some extra chapters to write about the heroine's friends. The Phoenix and Lotus in the space appeared very rarely. Xiao Huihui only had one fight and basically ate the rest. Personally, I think the heroine's space can be removed and she will have no sense of presence at all. Also, the master the heroine worships at the academy is of no use! At the beginning, it was said that Xiao Huihui is the most powerful fire, but later it turned into an ancient mythical beast. I suggest the author change Xiao Huihui's self-introduction in the second chapter. Everything else is good. There was a brother and sister in the college who were waiting for someone important. They appeared in a chapter and then never wrote it again. The author, thank you 🕳️you have to fill it in! Personal opinions, for reference only! Don't spray if you don't like it! Thanks!

The heroine is so funny, hahaha. . .

Male protagonist: Mo Bai Female protagonist: Si Yue The male protagonist is the ruler of the Supreme Continent, and the female protagonist is the daughter of a family in the Tianyan Continent. Her parents disappeared when she was young, and she lives with her grandfather. As soon as the heroine traveled to this continent, the hero found her because the hero's ring and the heroine's bracelet were the same set and were related, and the bracelet was a symbol of the hero's wife. The hero gradually turned the heroine into his arms. The heroine initially wanted to hug and spank her thighs, but it went too far, but the heroine seemed to want to be together better than hugging her thighs. The ending was a bit anxious, some things were not resolved, and some people were not explained clearly. All in all, this article is okay. In summary, not bad

I like to read short stories quickly. The plot is good and the characters of Si Yue and Mo Bai are also good. The ending is a bit rushed and many things are just brushed off.

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Very nice! The plot is well written, the heroine is very funny, and the ending is perfect. I like this kind of sweet short story👍👍

Two strong characters, a perfect ending, and the rest is even more exciting. After a few strokes, the description of Baby Mo is vivid, and the little baby's self-narration is written in one stroke, which is the finishing touch. I don't know why the reviews are so bleak, but I think it's very beautiful anyway, [Like][Like][Like]

It's very interesting and highly recommended, but the finale is a bit rushed. Some things are not clearly written, such as the process of the heroine's parents being brought back, the process of the heroine's cultivation in heaven and the process of the supporting characters. The rest is gone. I'm just a little dissatisfied with the finale. The rest is missing. Everyone must go and watch it, and be patient.

It's very interesting, it would be great if there is a sequel, hahaha

I really doubt the readers' grading standards ❓ Such a short story echoes from beginning to end, has a fresh structure, and the relationships between the characters are not mixed. How can you only give 8.8 Points? I think it should be above 9.4 Points to be reasonable. Therefore, I hope readers who choose to read novels based only on ratings will read this novel. Big cheers to the author. Hope to see your other novels. ♨️But it's a pity that the white lotus and evil forces in the mainland below have not been completely eliminated, which is a bit unfinished!