(Era + Group Pet + Space + Supernatural + Shuangjie) The Lao Jin family finally welcomed a soft little girl, named Jin Shining by her grandfather. The story begins when the heroine is 12 years old. She has a high fever and her grandfather gives her a jade pendant to keep her safe. Unexpectedly, there is a sudden flood in the plains. Jin Shining survives the catastrophe. Not only does she open up a space, but she also meets the male protagonist Lu Zhan who has been with her for a lifetime. Usually, Jin Shining was either practicing or fighting ghosts, and lived a free and easy life, until many years later during military training, he asked, "Are you the little girl who insisted on marrying me?" Who would have thought that this sick and frail instructor leader was actually the same person back then, when Jin Shining was weak...
Reader comments
To be precise, this book is my first novel. It was rejected twice before, but I couldn't let it go. It took a year to delete and delete it. A year later, it was successfully signed, and I can finally tell everyone the story in my heart.
Some things in this book are real, and there are some people that I can never find again. The fiction, reality, and fiction can be regarded as another world I weaved!
Although it is a short article, it is well-written and interesting. The writing style is also good, not shallow but not clear. It is very emotional and humane, which makes people read it. The heroine is also good. She is innocent, passionate and humane. She takes good care of her grandfather and her elders and relatives. She is comfortable to watch. She has a very good group pet attribute. She is also cute. Her skills are also super exciting and enjoyable to watch. There are all kinds of excitement and fantasy in the daily life, and the writing is very good. However, the ending feels too sudden, and it feels like I haven't finished writing half of it~ I don't really want to see how the male protagonist and female protagonist will be. The romance is not interesting and too tacky. I just should continue to write the heroine's legendary and wonderful story. I feel that it is over before I get there~ I don't know if the author has no idea or is too busy to have time to write~ It's a bit regretful~
I still want to see it, but I haven't seen enough
I didn't know until I read the review that this was your first novel. I only saw this novel after reading other novels you wrote and clicking on your avatar to enter. I gave you four stars before. I gave you four stars. It's a pity that the male and female protagonists spend less time together❗️
After discovering it, I will immediately change it to five stars🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟praise❗️
Delete the four-star rating 🌟🌟🌟🌟 and change it to five-star rating 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟praise❗️❗️❗️
I hope the author✍ can write better novels to share with our readers❗️❗️❗️
It's very interesting, but the ending is a bit too fast [smile]
The writing is relatively novel, but it is too short. I hope there are some clues! ! ! !
It's funny and interesting. I watched it all the way through.
Yes, the ending was a bit unexpected. I haven't seen enough yet. I really like Twinkle.
It's great to watch, but it ends too quickly. I'm not satisfied with it.
Jin Shining - Sense of Justice, Erha, Funny, Xiaoyi, has the ability to fearlessly come and go in the human world and the ghost world. Although I didn't see enough, this ending is really good!
I like this type of work, it has a relaxed atmosphere and lots of laughs! Reading novels takes no time and is just fun!
[Like] [Like] Very exciting, very beautiful
It's pretty good, but it would be perfect if there were a few more chapters with the male and female protagonists together.
Although this book is short, every chapter I read makes me feel relaxed and funny, and makes me feel happy and relaxed after reading it. I like this type of book very much. Friends can choose to read it. It is very good.
I have finished reading. The books written by the author are very good. I recommend them to book friends.
Relaxing and funny, I really like this book
I like it very much. Every protagonist is very real, especially the group favorite, Jin Shining, who is free and unrestrained.
The subject matter is very new and very interesting. If you like it, you can join it. [Laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs]
The writing is very good, the content is lively and interesting, and quite attractive. However, the ending is a bit too fast and not enjoyable enough, but overall it is good. Keep working hard, come on [eat melon]
It's pretty. Come on.
Very pretty. Very pretty.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Support support support
Very good looking very good looking
Watch carefully, it's quite beautiful!
The ones that look good are gone
Not enough. Take a look.
Group pet space training
Beautiful and interesting
It's been more than half of this, and the male protagonist has never appeared.
To be precise, this book is my first novel. It was rejected twice before, but I couldn't let it go. It took a year to delete and delete it. A year later, it was successfully signed, and I can finally tell everyone the story in my heart. Some things in this book are real, and there are some people that I can never find again. The fiction, reality, and fiction can be regarded as another world I weaved!
Although it is a short article, it is well-written and interesting. The writing style is also good, not shallow but not clear. It is very emotional and humane, which makes people read it. The heroine is also good. She is innocent, passionate and humane. She takes good care of her grandfather and her elders and relatives. She is comfortable to watch. She has a very good group pet attribute. She is also cute. Her skills are also super exciting and enjoyable to watch. There are all kinds of excitement and fantasy in the daily life, and the writing is very good. However, the ending feels too sudden, and it feels like I haven't finished writing half of it~ I don't really want to see how the male protagonist and female protagonist will be. The romance is not interesting and too tacky. I just should continue to write the heroine's legendary and wonderful story. I feel that it is over before I get there~ I don't know if the author has no idea or is too busy to have time to write~ It's a bit regretful~
I still want to see it, but I haven't seen enough
I didn't know until I read the review that this was your first novel. I only saw this novel after reading other novels you wrote and clicking on your avatar to enter. I gave you four stars before. I gave you four stars. It's a pity that the male and female protagonists spend less time together❗️ After discovering it, I will immediately change it to five stars🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟praise❗️ Delete the four-star rating 🌟🌟🌟🌟 and change it to five-star rating 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟praise❗️❗️❗️ I hope the author✍ can write better novels to share with our readers❗️❗️❗️
It's very interesting, but the ending is a bit too fast [smile]
The writing is relatively novel, but it is too short. I hope there are some clues! ! ! !
It's funny and interesting. I watched it all the way through.
Yes, the ending was a bit unexpected. I haven't seen enough yet. I really like Twinkle.
It's great to watch, but it ends too quickly. I'm not satisfied with it.
Jin Shining - Sense of Justice, Erha, Funny, Xiaoyi, has the ability to fearlessly come and go in the human world and the ghost world. Although I didn't see enough, this ending is really good!
I like this type of work, it has a relaxed atmosphere and lots of laughs! Reading novels takes no time and is just fun!
[Like] [Like] Very exciting, very beautiful
It's pretty good, but it would be perfect if there were a few more chapters with the male and female protagonists together.
Although this book is short, every chapter I read makes me feel relaxed and funny, and makes me feel happy and relaxed after reading it. I like this type of book very much. Friends can choose to read it. It is very good.
I have finished reading. The books written by the author are very good. I recommend them to book friends.
Relaxing and funny, I really like this book
I like it very much. Every protagonist is very real, especially the group favorite, Jin Shining, who is free and unrestrained.
The subject matter is very new and very interesting. If you like it, you can join it. [Laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs]
The writing is very good, the content is lively and interesting, and quite attractive. However, the ending is a bit too fast and not enjoyable enough, but overall it is good. Keep working hard, come on [eat melon]
It's pretty. Come on.
Very pretty. Very pretty.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Support support support
Very good looking very good looking
Watch carefully, it's quite beautiful!
The ones that look good are gone
Not enough. Take a look.
Group pet space training
Beautiful and interesting
It's been more than half of this, and the male protagonist has never appeared.