Rebirth of Dragon Ball I Just Want to Live Forever

There must be many people who like Dragon Ball! This book is just my opinion and a story based on Dragon Ball! I wouldn't have thought at first how well written it was! But I also don't expect my book to be popular. My original intention is just to write it and get the 600 royalties myself! Of course it would be best if I could attract people who think like me to like this book. Those of you who take one minute to write a one-star review and then read it for forty or fifty minutes to write a one-star review. How much of a failure are you? You give it three stars, two stars, and you have your own opinion. There is nothing wrong with it! There are so many complaints about the original Dragon Ball! There are so many people who don't like Dragon Ball!

Will Bulma and Ponzi meet again? Will Ponzi still recognize this sister? Will Ponzi continue to be ruthless? Why is a Dragon Ball written so sad... I really want to know the outcome!

When I read fanfiction, I just want to see something different. I'm glad that the author wrote this book to fulfill my wish. I hope the protagonist won't have a harem. How can women be so good at practicing? (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)

Since ancient times, talented people have been criticized, and every sentence is better than that of Li Taibai. If he had not been born in the new era, how would he be like Li Taibai in the Tang Dynasty? If there were netizens in the Tang Dynasty, there would be more than 300 Tang poems. Fortunately, Li Bai died early, otherwise his reputation as a poet would not have been preserved. I just blame myself for being uneducated, so I can go all over the world with just one word. Your comments are unusual, they are either poets or immortals. It feels pretty good, 5🌟 for you. Come on, author

It's a very good book. The low ratings are due to malicious comments. You should read a few more chapters. Don't just read a few chapters and say it's not good. The wonderful chapters are at the back. Only by reading them chapter by chapter can you have a sense of coherence and feel that this book is really good.

To be honest, the author of the Dragon Ball fanfic has written very well. He has established a reasonable story line based on the Dragon Ball story. It does not belong to the original plot but does not derail from the original plot. The story logic is reasonable and the protagonist is three-dimensional. Thank you to the author for writing such interesting and good articles in his busy schedule to fill my spare time with a little happiness 😂😂

It can also be said that the protagonist will return to the Dragon Ball world due to some accident, or that his apprentice's strength reaches a certain level and goes to find his master to break reality and illusion, or his sister Bulma, or that although the protagonist escapes, he calms down and discovers his destiny. Open up a new training system, or the protagonist commits suicide in despair, or the protagonist commits suicide and travels to the next novel and becomes the Turtle Immortal to tell the protagonist of the experimental subject, using a few words to hint him, or the protagonist fails to escape and is captured again to continue the experiment.

Don't be too tired, author. It's important to take good care of your body and write novels. Go drink a glass of water and start writing again.

This novel is the one I have been able to read from the beginning in the past few years. It's very immersive to read. There are a few flaws at the beginning, and the ending is a little not perfect. Overall, this novel is quite enjoyable. Come on, author [like]

Why do I feel that if the protagonist has such a personality, he will become obsessed with cultivation?

I believe all comic fans will be familiar with "Dragon Ball". So the author is very smart not to describe the main plot of the original comic in detail. After all, it's a familiar plot. Through the main plot of the original work, plus its own sub-plot. In order to parasitize my own story on the main line. Not a bad idea. For old book fans (love or hate it) This book is suitable for novices who have never experienced the baptism of dragon balls! It will be more interesting to watch! Actually. To be honest, the authors of online articles nowadays are like parasites, as if they can't write a book unless they are attached to something (book/comic)! The above opinions are just my own views on the current Internet articles! Not specific to this work! This book can only be said to be relatively stable. Um! "Very stable" is the key point, students mark it!

What should I do if it's not enough? Don't lock the author in a dark room and code words.

I hope I can keep writing

When I first read more than 100 chapters, I felt average, but after reading more than 200 chapters, it became a bit interesting. I haven't seen the end yet, but I have the idea of ​​​​getting to the end. Thank you to the author for his hard work.

I remember it was pretty good, but the pace felt a bit slow, and when I wanted to do one thing, I was always held up by another thing, which made me uncomfortable. I lost the desire to watch it while watching it. But it's a pity to give up, and it's a bit uncomfortable to watch.

Well, the writing is okay, and the content is quite interesting. I would like to ask what will happen to the protagonist and her sister in the future, and will the protagonist become more powerful in the future?

This book is very good, but I suggest you write Dragon Ball Super as well.

It's very interesting and creative, and it's the only fan I've read that explains many of the unreasonable pitfalls in Dragon Ball, such as the ability of the little fairy beans to restore billions of qi, and the fact that King Quan is so weak that he can create erasures. It's just that many places may be too demanding and the expressions are not very clear, such as combat power multipliers and the principle of not being erased.

Full of memories👍The combination of Chinese culture and Dragon Ball has a unique flavor👍Come on, author👍

Come on, author, this is the best novel in the Dragon Ball series I have ever seen.

A very excellent work. The key is that the author is still a girl! Must praise!

Come on, author, the writing is good, and the protagonist's character is still very good. I just want to know if the protagonist's combat power rises too fast, will it collapse in the later stage?

Come on, good looking, come on

Not bad, pretty good

Super super exciting

I hope to bring more Chinese culture to the Dragon Ball world. After all, the Chinese library is such a big place and there should be countless books. Come on, I support you. You should also pay more attention to rest when coding. Only when you are healthy can you code well.

Although I don't want to admit it, this book is still very interesting, at least better than most other Dragon Ball fics.

It's really exciting. I like it very much. I suggest you read a few more chapters to see how interesting it is. It's very good.

There are a lot of pictures, enough to watch, the protagonist is simply invincible, very beautiful

Buu takes him as his apprentice