Pay 200 Yuan: Make Your Funeral the Talk of the World

Chapter 12, the first story, I like it very much. But when I wanted to read Chapter 13, I found that you didn't update, and I was very dissatisfied!

Yesterday, I saw that the rating was still 8:1, and not many people were reading it. How about it? I pushed it in the official group and it immediately became popular.

Today is National Day, and I happened to read this book. The first story is about soldiers. I give you a thumbs up👍 If it's not good later, I will change the rating too😊

It's very well written, give me five stars to support it.

Although I only read five chapters, I cried while reading it. First of all, give me a five-star review👍. I didn't expect that this review could be revised in time. I cried again when I read that paragraph in Chapter 25.

Yes, I hope there will be a last wish for Pangu's funeral later. The last wish is to kill the system and take my blood, bones, soul, and even my eldest brother.

To the author: It is recommended that the author be a new writer. It is understandable that the author is a new writer, but when I saw the passages about the death of Ying Zheng, my evaluation of the book was somewhat lowered. Too much ink was wasted on describing details that are not related to the main line of the book, resulting in some unimportant plots occupying a larger space. Generally, readers who like to read this style of novels are not too interested in what the author describes. For example: Chen Sheng... Wu Guang... Zhang Liang... Han Xin... Liu Bang... Xiang Yu... It is recommended to use one or two representative descriptions instead of describing some insignificant details, and remember that details that have little to do with the plot should not exceed 200 words at most. It would be too lengthy to write about people's reactions in two large chapters as the author has done. If you really want to improve the word count, you can do it, but try not to compromise on the content. You can do it like this: He picked up the flashlight. [He picked up the old Phoenix flashlight with two AA batteries with trembling hands] This brings readers a less bad reading experience, and it also achieves the effect of the word "water"! There are a few too many reviews, but I really like the author's novel creative themes, which are refreshing. I don't want this book to be abandoned because of some minor problems. Keep up the good work! 😊😄💪👍I hope you will become a great god like Taishang Buyi ——Your sincere readers 2021.10.4

I feel that the writing is quite good, but you are too low on self-confidence. I am looking forward to your new book, which preferably has this theme. Let's not talk about the theme yet. Just finish this book. Come on!

Book review from Feng Mou: Actually, I rarely review books, but I think this book is well written, much better than those cool articles, but the score is so low, so I will try my best.

The first one is okay, but the second one seems to be off topic, but it comes back to the point. The appearance of the person named Qin is wonderful, and the offline is also wonderful, so I won't comment too much. I heard that the author is a newcomer, so I would like to encourage him, come on (๑Ő௰Ő๑)