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Chapter 12, the first story, I like it very much. But when I wanted to read Chapter 13, I found that you didn't update, and I was very dissatisfied!

Yesterday, I saw that the rating was still 8:1, and not many people were reading it. How about it? I pushed it in the official group and it immediately became popular.

It's very well written, give me five stars to support it.

Today is National Day, and I happened to read this book. The first story is about soldiers. I give you a thumbs up👍 If it's not good later, I will change the rating too😊

Although I only read five chapters, I cried while reading it. First of all, give me a five-star review👍. I didn't expect that this review could be revised in time. I cried again when I read that paragraph in Chapter 25.

Yes, I hope there will be a last wish for Pangu's funeral later. The last wish is to kill the system and take my blood, bones, soul, and even my eldest brother.

Huh? Why is it gone? I was having fun and a button came up.

The author is still a newbie, so I can't get enough of it. Ah, when I saw the most exciting part, it ended up being gone 😂

Book review from Feng Mou: Actually, I rarely review books, but I think this book is well written, much better than those cool articles, but the score is so low, so I will try my best.

I feel that the writing is quite good, but you are too low on self-confidence. I am looking forward to your new book, which preferably has this theme. Let's not talk about the theme yet. Just finish this book. Come on!

To the author: It is recommended that the author be a new writer. It is understandable that the author is a new writer, but when I saw the passages about the death of Ying Zheng, my evaluation of the book was somewhat lowered. Too much ink was wasted on describing details that are not related to the main line of the book, resulting in some unimportant plots occupying a larger space. Generally, readers who like to read this style of novels are not too interested in what the author describes. For example: Chen Sheng... Wu Guang... Zhang Liang... Han Xin... Liu Bang... Xiang Yu... It is recommended to use one or two representative descriptions instead of describing some insignificant details, and remember that details that have little to do with the plot should not exceed 200 words at most. It would be too lengthy to write about people's reactions in two large chapters as the author has done. If you really want to improve the word count, you can do it, but try not to compromise on the content. You can do it like this: He picked up the flashlight. [He picked up the old Phoenix flashlight with two AA batteries with trembling hands] This brings readers a less bad reading experience, and it also achieves the effect of the word "water"! There are a few too many reviews, but I really like the author's novel creative themes, which are refreshing. I don't want this book to be abandoned because of some minor problems. Keep up the good work! 😊😄💪👍I hope you will become a great god like Taishang Buyi ——Your sincere readers 2021.10.4

The pictures about Qin Shihuang and the pictures about the veteran are pretty good. Just not enough. After reading novels for so many years, you are the first person I have given five stars to. Keep up the good work, great author!

The first one is okay, but the second one seems to be off topic, but it comes back to the point. The appearance of the person named Qin is wonderful, and the offline is also wonderful, so I won't comment too much. I heard that the author is a newcomer, so I would like to encourage him, come on (๑Ő௰Ő๑)

I have promoted this book. Can the author update it soon? ——Tomato Book Reviewer + Taichu Wu Shi - The Controller of Nothingness

I remember this type of book. I first read it on a certain guest, and it was the second one in the funeral series. Only the one by Boiling Furnace was earlier than it. After reading it, I fell in love with this type of book. Then I searched on Tomato. After looking through a row, only the author's book was added to the bookshelf. In this row, only the author's book interested me. As long as there are more than three poisonous spots in a row in this book, and there is no eunuch, I will keep reading.

If I were a bird, I should also sing with my hoarse throat: This land battered by storms, This river of sorrow and indignation always surges with us, This angry wind that blows endlessly, And the extremely gentle dawn coming from the forest... - And then I died, Even the feathers rotted in the earth. Why do I always have tears in my eyes? Because I love this land deeply

I happened to see the clip about the veteran during the National Day. Well, it made me burst into tears instantly. Aren't my tears valuable?

I think it's okay, not particularly good, but not particularly bad either. The description of the soldiers is particularly good, so your ending is a bit

It's very good. There seem to be more people writing books about this kind of subject 😂

This is a book that made me cry. It's just a bit too much nonsense. At least I think it deserves five stars.

So far, it looks pretty good

I like this book very much. I hope you will update it 5 times a day. I hope you will not be ignorant of praise!

You are awesome, this is the fastest book I have ever read. I was confused at the time. I wish you success in writing books in the future. Come on, I believe in you.

Cheers to the newcomers and new books

Although this book may not be to my liking, I still want to give it a good review and hope that the author can continue to work hard to write. (The main reason is which chapter of Qin Shihuang)

Veterans will not die, they will only gradually wither. Pay tribute to the martyrs

Chapters 19 to 34 are recommended to be paired with "last reunion"

This is the first time I have seen this type of novel, actually. . .

Author, I want to give you a sentence: "I, Chen Beixuan, have been doing what I have done all my life. Why do I need others to explain me?" Come on (ಥ^GG)

I was enjoying watching it. Is it over? Caught off guardQwQ