Too Little Talent, All Depends on the System's Blackening

The subject matter is okay, but the author's writing style could be strengthened.

You can add a technique similar to Faxiang Tiandi at the end, which can make the protagonist huge and increase the overall quality by many times.

Come on, author, the number of chapters is too few. I will give you a gift when you write more.

The protagonist's pure martial arts attempts to compete with the Qi-training monks and lead to the great road.

Good job writing

After reading the comments, I was not in the mood to read it. I came here because of my son, leading his father to show off and leading his father to slap others in the face to read cool articles. This is not what I like88

If you like cool articles, you can read it

I only looked at three of them. I don't know what's wrong with them. I can't see them anyway.

It's pretty good, but because the early data is too large, it won't make sense if the data in the middle and later stages is too big [eating melon]

Personally, I think it's pretty good. If you're interested, you can check it out [Top Post] This is the second time I've watched it. The first time I watched it, the rating was pretty high [Top Post] [Top Post] [Top Post] [Top Post]