Starting with the Evil God Doll, Do I Have a Choice?

The writing style in the beginning is a bit immature, but the concept is novel and the plot is interesting. It gradually gets better and I read the latest chapter in one go, which is very good.

I don't know what those people who give one star because of a minor flaw think about it. In my opinion, this book is the most perfect character creation I have ever seen. His characters even have different tone of voice for each person. This book is a little embarrassing, but it is not as serious as those one-star bad reviews say. I suggest those who have one star peace to put the character into the environment from a psychological point of view, think carefully, don't always regard yourself as a god, and can remain rational in various circumstances.

The beginning of this book is very..., Emmm, which makes people uncomfortable, but other than that, the content of this book is very attractive and fresh. My only expectation is that every chapter is like the author's great care.

Note: personal thoughts! Personal thoughts! Personal thoughts! [Note] Comments with a bad tone will not be accepted here, but I will respect every polite netizen [blowing kiss] I think the character design of this book is okay. The more I read Leng Yuexi, the more I like it. The protagonist is also crazy and I love it. However, some of the author's descriptions and logic are a bit problematic, which makes it feel a bit strange to read. Of course, if you come to read Invincible instead of the plot and Invincible, you can read it. I only have a short time to read it. I just suggest that you read a little bit first to test the water before deciding whether to pursue it or not. The plot is actually quite cliche, that is, the protagonist is bullied in the early stage and rises in the later stage. Type, but a little different, a little fresh, because some people who bully the protagonist have been rectified at the beginning, and I haven't seen the subsequent plot, but just talking about the first part, the plot is old-fashioned and a little fresh, and then I think the part where I save the grandma can be slightly changed. It can be changed to say that although the grandma does not die in the end, Leng Yuexi's feelings in it should not be too strong, and it should be weakened a little to reflect the indifference caused by crazy comments. Personal suggestion, you can not adopt it. In terms of rating, because some parts are very inconsistent, I don't think it looks very comfortable. However, the invincible writing is genuine and the character portrayal is okay, so I gave it four stars. I would like to suggest that the author improves his logic. The author should remember that this is an invincible novel, not a Mary Sue novel. Don't pay too much attention to the appearance of the character. "Beautiful eyes" or "catkin" should not appear in tense or important situations. Just change them to neutral ones, such as "eyes" and "little hands". Because Leng Yuexi is not an orphan, catkin is not suitable. At least there will be calluses on the hands. Beautiful eyes are okay, but they appear in the wrong place. Finally, I would like to add that although this book is not to my liking, the author has a hard time coding. Please work hard. I'm leaving first [Sending my heart] This is the first time I have commented with so many words. I hope you can read it patiently. I really hope this book gets better because I like Leng Yuexi very much, so I listed my opinions and suggestions. I hope this book will get better and better [Blow kiss]

My mother said that if you play with your mobile phone for 24 hours straight, you will die suddenly. I have been playing for 23 hours and 59 minutes. I am laughing so hard. I am totally confused.

It's pretty good, the plot is smooth and compact, cheers for the author💪 A good book requires a 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 five-star recommendation! Clockwork barrage suppresses shock Σ(っ °Д °;)っ Salute to the author (｀･ω･´)ゞ

I'm reading this book. I'm familiar with the slap-in-the-face plots, so overall it's not bad^ω^ and it's written about a group of children in the early stage (´-ω-`). Don't worry so much about it.

I thought it wasn't a harem story, but it turns out... Ugh Although the writing is good, it's not my type. Give me a five-star review, which is my final conclusion to this book.

I don't know why this book is not rated 9. It's so unscientific! I used to search for books with high ratings, but later I found that some of the highly rated books did not meet my personal preferences. It wasn't until I accidentally clicked on this book that I discovered that my little baby was here! ! ! Leng Yuexi is so awesome! So cool! Author, please update,

This book needs to be read patiently. The writing is relatively immature at the beginning, but it improves a lot as it goes on, getting better and better. I hope people who have only read a few chapters will stop talking nonsense. This book is really not bad.

Generally speaking, the book is very good, but the writing style is still a bit immature, and there is nothing too attractive to read. I can try to add some exciting parts later.

The story is not bad, but it feels a bit awkward in some places. - 2022.12.6 10:41

I have never read such a beautiful book. The author should not be lazy. Oops, can you write more in the future? Please! Just a little bit in total, how about writing a little bit more and then the ending! ! But overall, this book is very good to read and has no other shortcomings except for further writing! Everyone's image is very good, and the details are also very good. I have read a lot of this type of book, but this book by the author made my eyes shine, and this comment is the most and longest one in my life! ! !

I don't know how to put it, but it just looks good.

Author, I really like this novel you wrote. It is very well written. It is very good from the first page. It describes the evil nature of human beings. It is good.

The plot of this book is okay so far. Although the catchphrase is a bit awkward, but if you read it carefully and draw the picture in your mind, and match the words of the characters, the catchphrase and other words are very immersive. I support this book very much, but it is not very popular. I took a look at the author, and he didn't even change his avatar. I probably haven't recommended the book a few times. I really feel that this book is very good. I support it with five stars.

I'm halfway through reading it, and I think it's okay, so I'll give it four stars. No, the heroine didn't become an adult until the second to last chapter??? There is no daily life after that. What the hell did I see! ?

How to say it? It's okay. After all, it's a cool article, so don't ask for too much. It's just that this person wearing the skin of Cthulhu tricked me into it makes me a little unhappy, but overall it's okay. I'll give it four stars.

Let's take a character with elements and circumstances such as nature, elf, gentleness, and kindness. He was saved by a pig's foot when he was about to die or was dead, and then something like that, I can't think of anythingｸﾞｯ! (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧（X_x；）🌝🌚🤣😏 I was reading the previous chapter and was beaten violently. We gave up in this game. The above comment at the end of the chapter may also be at the end of the following chapter.

The five-star award shows the author's hard work. The content is interesting and new to the genre. It is better than some older authors. Overall, I love this novel. I love it.

It looks great, why is the score so low?

How can I put it, overall it's okay, but the power system is a bit anxious in the middle and late stages, and it's not very easy to distinguish. The concept is quite novel. However, I would like to make some comments. The power of the evil god is too weakened, and the concept of the evil god may not be well understood by the author. I suggest the author to learn more about the categories and power systems of the evil god. The name of the evil god really cannot be spoken directly...😂, Looking forward to the new book

It's great. Invincible is gone. I still want to see the next one, such as Going to the Upper World.

This is the best book I have read so far, besides Mo Dao and Sanjiu.

Author, do you have any other works? They are so beautiful and I like them so much.

Overall, it's okay. To be honest, ah, these modal particles seem very childish, even though they are all children.

It's good to watch, the plot is interesting, and the characters' emotions are delicate. I finished reading it in two days.

The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is that of family members, not lovers.

Those who are good at sports are healthy, those who are good at thinking are wise, those who are good at helping others are happy, those who are good at reading are knowledgeable, those who are good at traveling are happy, and those who are good at pursuit are successful.

According to my personal preference, it's pretty good, but can it be updated faster?