Xuanhuan: My Cultivation Techniques Level Up Automatically Every Day

My own book, five-star praise ❛‿˂̵✧

I just read the first chapter and it feels good

Come on! However, it is recommended that after chapter 46, when the protagonist becomes Qingyunzi, not everyone should be in line with him. There have been villains and subordinates (those two from the outer sect) before this, but what about the other characters? For example, scenes with fellow disciples, chasers (for example, continuing to fight with the protagonist after being defeated in a polite challenge), some accidents, etc. One advantage is that the brother-sister line is pretty good. The biggest shortcoming is that I feel that the protagonist has more angry emotions and is more obvious, while other emotions are less or less obvious.

It's well written, with a few flaws. I hope the author will write better and better!

There are not too many bells and whistles, the plug-in is just like an ordinary production machine, it looks simple and rough, very nice! ! ! ! !

Although there are some embarrassing clichés in it, overall it's still a good watch. The protagonist has normal outlook on life, is decisive in killing, and has an online IQ. As for the villains, they should all be poor children who can't bear the protagonist's taunting halo, and the little brothers and companions they make have all withstood the test of the halo. Build and read.

3 Cm also includes the head. 

# Poetry drunken floating life# original work # # greet the morning breeze # The moon is leisurely and bright, drunk and cute, and I am with you. In the morning light, I haven't thought deeply yet. I ask you if you understand. I miss my dear teacher and shed tears when he leaves, the water is full of clear waves, green and red, Life is drunk with breeze, Qiaoqian's eyebrows are thick, magnanimous and calm, May the spring breeze go away and the young eagles soar to the sky.

I'm not saying that, the author, you have too many typos.

Such a good novel deserves five stars!