The Quick Travel Mission Starts with the Crazy Criticism That the Male Protagonist Has the Ability to Read Minds.

This novel is so good! I just finished watching the first world, leaving a footprint👣2021.10.4 21:28. Tutu is so cute, I really want to hug her secretly. Okay, once this book becomes popular, I will become a long-time fan, yeah✌

I thought the first part was quite interesting, but I couldn't understand the extra chapter. I couldn't tell whether it was a dream or reality. My favorite and most complete one is probably the first plane. Why didn't the author write the plot of them becoming immortals and getting together again? I feel that when I wrote about the third and fourth planes, it was very short. Did the author have no ideas for writing? Of course, I also like the Prime Minister and Emperor one, but it's too short. Overall, it's still a bit sloppy, but it's really nice to look at (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡.

Very, very beautiful! ! What I really like is, can you make our protagonist a little tougher? It feels soft and not very masculine... Just a suggestion, don't spray...

Text I feel very cute and beautiful! ! Tutu is so cute, and Master loves him very much. I like the story of the first world the most, because Fu Erye and Tutu in that story are too funny [laughing] [laughing] I feel that in every story, Master's character cannot hide the charlatan, hahahahaha, Master always likes to use foul language, I think it's really funny, the sarcastic mantra of "I'm fucked" won't work anymore, it will really make me laugh to death [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]. But, the previous stories are very exciting, but the author of the extra chapter is really over the top with the word count. The male and female partners are very confusing, and the plot is also jumping around. I am a bit clueless, but it does not stop me from liking this article. Come on, Tutu, come on, Master! I look down on you if you can't have children [note][note][note]

Writing is not easy, five stars for support~ The overall plot has no redundant burdens, the structure is concrete and rigorous, and the language is clear. Personally, I hope the author's wife can increase the plot and the emotional line at a moderate pace. Come on, madam! ✊

I really like TuTu, Master's pampering and understanding of my own feelings. I read this book on October 10th. I hope it can be longer. If it is shorter, I will write it again. Come on, TuTu.

Old fan, this book is still very good, please give it a thumbs up to the author💪🏻

The revision is good, but the extra chapters at the end feel very confusing and I don't understand them clearly. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's so good-looking. I love it so much. Sisters, go, go, go.

It's very good. I passed it from another book by Da Da. Hehe, the two writing styles are different, but there are still some differences. This article seems to be the author Da Da Da's free time to polish his time, hahaha, but it inexplicably pokes me. It's quite interesting, but I didn't read the extra chapter. When I read the book review, some people said that the extra chapter was a bit sadistic and that children can't stand the knife, so I stopped reading it. I will also be in the author's next book~ Come on, big brother (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's super nice🌸🌸🌸 Give the author a big shout out! ! 🔥

It's super, super pretty. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh runspicable and cute baby Tutu a bit cute [laughing and crying] I recommend adding it to the bookshelf [laughing]

He is a man of extraordinary talent who knows the world, has the ambition to swallow mountains and rivers, knows astronomy from the top and geography from the bottom, and stays up all night to learn from the ancient and modern Chinese and Western. Wen Neng can bring peace to the world with his pen, and Wan Neng can use his horse to settle the world.

I followed it from the previous book, it's still very good😍

I like this article very much. When I saw the rating, I was actually a little hesitant. I liked the previous article better. My favorite is probably the world of the prime minister and the emperor. The writing style is unreliable and presents a very cute white painting! But I can't stand the rest of the world a little bit, and it feels a little boring (in my opinion, don't comment if you don't like it). Maybe it's because I have higher expectations for the rest of the world, but overall it's okay (ˊ˘ˋ*)♡

This book is quite good. Master finally became more independent, which was not easy. 😂😂

I really love the characters of the two male protagonists, so please go to the author! ! (~￣▽￣)~

Author, I really like this book of yours. It is really wonderful. I hope you will continue to do so in the future. I hope that the plot will become more and more exciting in the future. But author, you are really clever and your writing is really good. I really like it! I support you too! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Love][Love][Love][Love]

It's okay, it's quite sweet. Sisters who like pure sweet articles can read it. I feel that some of them are inconsistent with the title (the male protagonist is not crazy about criticism. To be honest, it feels quite normal, and there is no sign of crazy criticism. Maybe I have read too many others)

It's really good, but when I'm the only one watching it, it says this chapter is under review. Can't you watch it?

I skipped the big abuse. I read three abuse novels today and it was really unbearable. The first world of mind reading is very interesting! This is just to make me jealous of myself. It's so obvious. 🌚👍👍

Ahhhh~ The author is great, very beautiful, so sweet 555~😋😋

It's super beautiful, Tutu is so cute, and the writing is superb. But when I read the extra chapter Mortals, I decided to give up because the title at the end said it was a big deal (I was very tearful), but the previous article was so good! ! ! Everyone can rush decisively (because my tears were low, I didn't look back) When writing the extra, the main text is finished and it will not affect the main text. By the way, is there any abuse later in the episode? If you don't abuse me, I will continue to charge.

How to say it? The first plane is really beautiful [like]

It's very interesting, but also a bit silly, but the emotional aspects are not very clear.

It's super nice. I really like the settings in it. It's stuck in my heart [Adoration]

Super exciting, I really like this type of book, and the author's book is also one of the most exciting ones

The style of the whole book is that of a cookie cutter, and the main plot is very sweet! Especially the letter written by the White Queen in Chapter 66, I really couldn't stop laughing! However, the main content is a bit lacking. Next is the extra story. The plot is a bit confusing, and I still haven't figured out whether Bai Tu in the extra is a boy or a girl. It's a bit confusing, so I didn't finish it. I'd like to apologize. The idea for the extra chapter is pretty good, but I feel a little regretful that I couldn't continue writing it. Mo Xun·Bai Tu

Overall, it's pretty good and sweet [shy], but the plot behind it is a little bit unclear, but it's still pretty good [laughing]

In an instant, I suddenly realized that I was short of words and could only describe it as super beautiful! [Shy] Tutu is so cute! I miss rua so much! But I can't defeat someone named Mo! [Pouts] Not cruel at all! Super sweet! The plot is very funny! Super pretty! [Sending Hearts] Some of them are a little cruel, some of them are heartbreaking... But they are really beautiful! [Adoration]