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I find that the manuscripts I write seem to be less than the ones I send out There is no disconnect between chapters. One chapter is obviously missing, right?

The plot settings are good. But please update me soon! 😡

He has a strange life experience, his parents are either absent or being hunted down. Either you can't come back, you're a genius at birth, but you suddenly become useless. Often beaten and scolded, disliked by elders, kissed since childhood, The woman will cheat and be humiliated in front of her, swearing to collect her debt. Either fall off the cliff, or jade pendant, beads or cauldron, The remnant soul lives in the sea of ​​consciousness, and it is completely different from now on. It upgrades very quickly. As soon as it soars into the sky, all enemies are trampled, and the hero wants to save the beauty. He will definitely offend the rich second generation, kill many people, and attract old monsters. He was not strong enough and was forced to jump out of the sea. He was about to die. When the ruins cave opens, you can either drink dragon blood or eat natural materials. Reborn and reborn, my skills are improving rapidly, I just pick up things when I go shopping, Pets are mythical beasts. If you spend too much money, they will be auctioned off. If you are two levels below your peers, come here if you don't agree with me, and you can't finish your own business. I love all beauties, looking for death all the way, but there is always life. The protagonist is cheating, everyone is a loser, and one world is not enough to play. Climb the Immortal Platform, break through the Nine Heavens, and live forever.

Not bad, I hope to transform more magical creatures, such as Pokémon, Seer, Shan Hai Jing and so on, and see more miracles come out [smile][smile][smile]

Not bad, just a little bit less

Without looking at it, the excitement will be gone

Not bad, hope it stabilizes. Try to keep the protagonist alone on a main line, and he can do things appropriately for the plot. But don't go deep

It's beautiful. It restores the way Western dialogue is done.

"Through the Norwegian forest, let me walk into your dream. The sunset falls on my armor. The prince may not necessarily be riding a white horse. The prince on a black horse is at home everywhere. It is now three-thirty in the morning. The author is not still sleeping and has no code, right?

The beginning is a bit messy and the connection is not very good, but the problem is not serious. Please give me some support. Besides, it has not been updated for a long time❗

I have a question, see now I don't see Monty Python? Eaten by whom?

If you start reading from Chapter 5, it's okay.

I like it very much, I hope the author will work harder!

The imagination suits my taste very well

Are you learning Naruto? Memories account for half from beginning to end.

It's ok and looks good

Why is the elder brother still with another one? I went there to read it, and it feels more and more familiar. I think the other person said, this is not a new book, is it copied?