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It's nice to read, and to be honest, Yun Fo's book writing is really good. Although I think sometimes the dialogue is awkward (referring to the previous books), but basically many authors are like this even though they can't feel it. I hope this book will have a beginning and an end, and don't be too anxious.

Five stars, I hope Yunfo can write the story more perfectly or make it longer

Keep up the good work, author!

Let's give the author praise! Because I am afraid that the author will be a eunuch, I actually have quite high expectations for this book. It is still attractive to skip the passage about the senior sister. Then, I want to complain that the position of the senior sister is really crotch-stretching. I always skipped to watch the protagonist to show off. Fortunately, I didn't give up! Why is it said that the eldest sister pulls her hips? Although she is good-looking and has decent talents, she has one thing that readers hate, that is, she has a suitor, and it does not matter if she has a suitor. The key is that she treats her differently intentionally or unintentionally, leading the suitor to cause trouble for the protagonist (although she does not have this awareness, but it has been reflected in her actions). To be honest, I am quite tired of watching this routine. Tell me, you were kind enough to give her advice, but because of her, you attracted criticism from others. Think about it for yourself, are you happy? It's definitely not pleasant! Moreover, the protagonist is not powerful enough to ignore everyone, which makes the senior sister not very lovable in terms of senses. The reader will naturally think, Oh, this woman is such a troublemaker. Then, the reading experience suddenly dropped, which is really unnecessary. If possible, I hope the author will reduce the role of the senior sister. If it doesn't work, just pretend I didn't say it! Actually, I was quite happy to see the main character pretending to be cool later. I would like to support the author with five stars~

Okay, great, Minling

Who treated my Jing and Jin elixirs as stones and cut them off?

I hope this book will have a beginning and an end, and won't be like the previous books, which were discontinued again.

It looks good, but it's too short.

It looks good, it just feels good to look at. Why bother with so much? It would be boring to take it too seriously. Come on, author, keep updating, don't pay attention to those trolls

Come on, duck, the content is great.

Author, you are too short! ! !

The protagonist is finally a bit awesome

It's really wonderful, it would be a pity not to watch it! 😊

Good looking, come on

I've been short of books lately, but this book is good

I can't have more four stars. In fact, I want to give you three stars because you didn't write him as the second one. The remaining one star is for your praise. If you don't say that, you will be criticized. No one wants to hear bad words

There's not much to say, it just looks good.

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good!

It's good-looking. I hope the main character won't be the Virgin in the future.

The writing and plot are very good, I like it very much