Quick Travel: Those Years After Being Haunted by the Yandere Male Protagonist

I'm a little afraid of being scolded when I say it. After all, I only watched one or two planes. I really like this subject matter, but when I saw the rest, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I don't know what the rest of the writing is like, but I still want to talk about the problems that arise. The first is that the emotional transition is a bit stiff. Take the leader of the Demon Cult for example. I really looked carefully, but I still don't know why I suddenly fell in love with Shou. There was no reason, and I didn't say what Shou had done. It seemed to be a whitewash in Gong's eyes, just the few righteous words Shou said. In fact, even the simplest thing about being fascinated by beauty was To get to know this person, I think we should describe it more when Gong inadvertently marvels at Shou's beauty. In short, I just feel that the emotional line between the two of them can be written more carefully and slowly, so that the transition between Gong and Shou can be more natural and delicate, and then The ending could be more specific, but it is very sloppy and fast. Apart from this, there is no big problem. The subject matter is well chosen. However, I think the author should be a novice when starting to write, so many people do not pay attention. Later, the writing will get better and better, starting from the next one or two planes. You can feel that the writing style is getting better. In fact, I also write novels myself, but not on the same platform. The above are my personal opinions. I hope you don't mind. After all, I have no malice, but I think the overall situation is very good, and I think the author is quite cute. Keep up the good work for the author of Four Hearts! ! ! ! ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

I really like this book, the more I read it, the more I am interested in it. That's it, the ending of the second world is confusing and unclear. I have seen all three worlds, and I didn't understand it until the third plane. I suggest the author explain this. Otherwise, some readers will just leave a negative review if they don't see it clearly, and the impact will not be good (just a suggestion). Also, the master is written in this aspect. Can you write a sweetheart? Please, if it doesn't work, forget it! I have no intention of interfering.

|｡･㉨･)っDemining♡♪ ✧*This book sometimes has plot directions that make people wonder what's going on. ✧*You don't have to watch the planes you don't like, it won't make you confused, so feel free to watch it ✧*The yandere male protagonist in this book will not be so yandere, he will have some possessiveness and will not be offensive, so you can eat it with confidence ✧*Some natural passages in this book require your reading ability ✧*The che su of this book will have one (hundred million) points of kua, and sometimes there will be a little benefit. If you don't know what * means, go to the comment area to find out. ✧*Writing is not easy for the author. If you don't like to read it, please click the button on the upper left and don't leave negative reviews. Thank you! It is recommended that you go to the comment area to clear mines when reading in the future. ❀ʕ๑•That's it ㉨ Goodbye•๑ʔ❀

Qiuqiu and Xiaoyan are so perfect for each other. Qiuqiu is pure and lustful, with a slightly confused personality that is also super cute. Xiaoyan is dedicated and affectionate. Although he is paranoid, his love is deep and super sweet. Watching them fall in love smoothly is so comfortable. This article is great.

Nice. Sorry, I'm at a loss for words. But, chase me! ! ! ! ! Sisters, charge forward.

The overall feeling is quite good. The two people have traveled through so many worlds. At first they thought it was their first encounter, but it turned out to be a reunion. They accidentally forgot the memories of being together with Xu. Xu only appeared in so many small worlds to remind A Ci. In the end, the memories were recovered. Two little idiots, they are together well. The writing is still good, and the overall feeling is good. You can rush if you like

I originally loved reading male and female comics, but when I saw Pure Love in Tomato, I clicked in with the mentality of giving it a try, but who the hell can tell me why it looks so good

This book is very good, highly recommended Each world is relatively short. If you like fast progress, you can check it out. But I still hope that you can write each world in more detail. Xue Wei wrote it in a longer way (●´ω｀●)ゞIt's not enough, please give me more (,,ω,,)

Immediate praise, I like it so much. If possible, can any book friends recommend me some male-to-male fast-traveling books about "Two Directions"?

This book is very good, I will give it five stars first. Every world is a little too fast, It's more to my liking. I don't really like watching it. Slowly Also, every male protagonist in the world falls in love with Gu for no reason. I was very confused. It was probably because it was too fast at the time. If it's too fast, you'll be confused; if it's too slow, you'll be impatient. So I think this book... Is more to my liking, So it's five stars❤️❤️❤️ ♡(*´∀｀*)(*´∀｀*)♡

"Xu Yanzhi, we want to be together forever." "Well, I've always been there." Nice looking, quite sweet

"Xu Yanzhi we will be together forever" "Well, I've always been there." The author's writing is engaging, the interactions are heartwarming, and the supporting characters generally have a good ending. I really like the last special plane, a lot of it subconsciously! ! The reader's name appears very carefully. However, some of the endings felt a bit rushed, but overall it was pretty good. Finally, I wish the author will develop better and better in the future, and his books will become more popular (I read some of them on another mobile phone) (ง •_•)ง

He is really sweet. When I saw the back part, I was really moved to (ಥ_ಥ) the short essay. It has a sweet feeling everywhere. It's really beautiful\(//∇//)\! It's really the kind of uncontrollable excitement that fills my heart instantly! I really feel happy for them!

It's pretty, but not enough. Looking forward to the author's story of System 0009 and 0010 (Tenth Brother)! ——The summer in Phuket never ends, and the boy I love will always be in love!

The story is very well written and interesting, the author needs to work hard! Write more danmei novels for us (ฅ>ω<*ฅ) I love you so much＾3＾

Not bad, the novel is very vivid and vivid, and is presented in front of the readers. I like the novel very much, and it is undoubtedly a five-star review. However, the number of words is too small and I read it very quickly, so I hope the author can write more. VThank youV

This book is quite beautiful, the story is wonderful, and every character is vivid. The only shortcoming is that there are too many letters replacing words, which is a little bit flawed. The rest is very, very good. I highly recommend everyone to read it. It will definitely live up to your expectations.

Well, it's very interesting. I also like every character written by the author because they are all so good, and A Ci is also very good. I think this book is really meaningful to read. Anyway, I like this book very much.

I really like the author's article. I didn't like to read fast travel in the past. Now I have changed my mind after reading the article. I really like the master-student aspect. Come on, author! ! !

To be honest, in the introduction, I don't think it is a great work, but the content inside is very beautiful. The author said that her writing is not good, and it feels a bit like Versailles...( ￣ ▽￣)O╭╯☆#╰( ￣￣)╯

Finished reading! Personally, I think it's pretty good. After reading the whole article, although there aren't many small worlds, there are still quite a few. I can only say that it's just right [heartfelt] After reading it, I didn't find any poisonous points. The author explained how the male protagonists' relationships developed and why they were so quick to wear each other [Thinking][Thinking] The ending part is also equivalent to an extra chapter. It also explained the subsequent development. It didn't leave me any regrets. I felt a little uncomfortable [face covering] [face covering] In summary, it's non-toxic, all the pitfalls are filled, and the ending looks like it may be linked to the previous or next book [Thinking][Thinking] (After all, I feel like the protagonist's brother and the male protagonist's sister can both publish another book)

The previous writing is very good, but the sentences may not be fluent in some places, and some places have obviously been severely edited. Some places also have a lot of pinyin and so on. I suspect that this article may have been the most rigorously censored and was written during that time. Then at the back, when I saw what the heck Xu was, I couldn't stand it. The back was a bit stiff and I couldn't put it in words. It just didn't have the same feeling as the front. It's pretty sweet anyway

Give the author a five-star rating ε(*･ω･)_/ﾟ:･☆Hehehehe

I've finished watching a plane. Overall it's pretty good. But the author, you have a lot of typos and incorrect sentences, and the reading is not very smooth in some places. The more you practice your writing, the better it will be. Looking forward to the next dimension. Five-star praise is given.

"Xu Yanzhi, we want to be together forever." "Well, I've always been there." Xu Yanzhi's paranoid and affectionate love at first sight and Gu Qiuci's conniving and affectionate love at first sight. They are a perfect match in terms of appearance and personality. They are very suitable. From falling in love at first sight when they met for a trip, to being angry and suffering from accidental amnesia on the way home, to the mission of traveling through planes, and then to recovering their memories and meeting each other's parents at the end of the mission, everything seemed to be arranged, but in fact everything happened naturally. Xu Yanzhi is worthy of Gu Qiu Ci's appearance and emotions. To be honest, among the fast-travel novels I have read, the 1970s and 1980s in this novel is the best one I have ever read so far. Moreover, the character setting, plot and emotions of the characters in this novel are all very well done. I like it very much [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

Highly recommended, even though there are only two planes, I still feel like I can't get enough of it! The most important thing is that the writing is very good! You are not just making up fiction, it's not bad, it's good hahahahahaha (BB, this is the top 1v1 novel with two male protagonists in my Tomato ☆_☆ Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha I'm sorry, I reviewed the wrong novel, but this one is not bad~

I have read the whole book and I like it very much. Although there are some flaws in some places, nothing in the world is perfect. I believe that the author will write better and better. Come on, the author. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Ah, I like big books very much. They are very exciting and beautiful. And I also prefer books with a faster emotional progression. This book is about the protagonist's emotional progress. It is simply one of my dream love letters. Finally, I hope you can update it more, but don't tire yourself. I love you so much (●'◡'●)ﾉ♥⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄

Finally finished reading it! I read it a little late, but the author's writing is really beautiful! But there are some planes that have a little bit of grass at the end! He is very, very, very good! ! !

The story of Gu Qiu Ci and Xu Yanzhi is very sweet and good, because when I read this book, the book was already finished, and I did not experience the joy of chasing articles and urging updates in this book. There were many mysteries at the beginning, but finally the clouds cleared and all the mysteries were solved. I wish Gu Ci and Xu Yanzhi become more and more happy in one dimension. If the author opens another pure love book, I will definitely read it to experience the joy of chasing articles and urging updates. I wish we will meet again (^~^)