Chen Fei traveled to the world of Naruto and awakened the super pirate system at the beginning.
The first crew member summoned is the beast-like swordsman Roronoa Zoro!
"We, the Dawn Pirates, are here to do only three things."
"Collect money."
"Collect money."
"Still collect the money!"
Zabuza: "I can't beat that green-haired swordsman!"
Deidara: "Why can't my bombs blow up his ship?"
Raikage Ai: "It's impossible for us, Kumogakure, to surrender!"
Obito: "Let's discuss it. How about selling the tailed beast to me?"
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As a result, the names of Chen Fei and the Dawn Pirates resounded throughout the ninja world.
Reader comments
I don't know why, but this plot direction makes me feel more irritated than Bo. Why is this, the author? It's not that exciting, and even if it's interesting at first and gradually cools down, you should read more about other Moten-ryu double-travel novels, how to use the information gap between the two worlds, especially the praise of teammates from the pirate world to achieve a cultural cognitive gap. Anyway, I didn't feel that Zoro and Nami had their own thoughts and unemotional work. Gu Ren, what you wrote is like the dialogue of an RPG game. Some of the contradictions created are not well written. For example, the collision with Obito, there is no collision of beliefs, and I didn't understand the summoning of Nami for Mao. They say they are elites, but in fact not many can fight. They say they are a team, but they still rely on Zoro and themselves. Author, please sort out your ideas before writing.
Looks interesting
Not bad, come on
Damn it, it's gone now?
What kind of yarn is this? I won't write about it here.
, Except for the good subject matter, the rest is terrible compared to
Good subject, too much to write down
A bit short
La la la la la la chicken
Really. . . I finished it with just a few dozen pictures, why not write a short story?
Can
The protagonist's arrogance can be seen from the beginning
I don't know why, but this plot direction makes me feel more irritated than Bo. Why is this, the author? It's not that exciting, and even if it's interesting at first and gradually cools down, you should read more about other Moten-ryu double-travel novels, how to use the information gap between the two worlds, especially the praise of teammates from the pirate world to achieve a cultural cognitive gap. Anyway, I didn't feel that Zoro and Nami had their own thoughts and unemotional work. Gu Ren, what you wrote is like the dialogue of an RPG game. Some of the contradictions created are not well written. For example, the collision with Obito, there is no collision of beliefs, and I didn't understand the summoning of Nami for Mao. They say they are elites, but in fact not many can fight. They say they are a team, but they still rely on Zoro and themselves. Author, please sort out your ideas before writing.
Looks interesting
Not bad, come on
Damn it, it's gone now?
What kind of yarn is this? I won't write about it here.
, Except for the good subject matter, the rest is terrible compared to
Good subject, too much to write down
A bit short
La la la la la la chicken
Really. . . I finished it with just a few dozen pictures, why not write a short story?
Can
The protagonist's arrogance can be seen from the beginning