A Pirate in the Hokage World: Summoning Zoro from the Start

I don't know why, but this plot direction makes me feel more irritated than Bo. Why is this, the author? It's not that exciting, and even if it's interesting at first and gradually cools down, you should read more about other Moten-ryu double-travel novels, how to use the information gap between the two worlds, especially the praise of teammates from the pirate world to achieve a cultural cognitive gap. Anyway, I didn't feel that Zoro and Nami had their own thoughts and unemotional work. Gu Ren, what you wrote is like the dialogue of an RPG game. Some of the contradictions created are not well written. For example, the collision with Obito, there is no collision of beliefs, and I didn't understand the summoning of Nami for Mao. They say they are elites, but in fact not many can fight. They say they are a team, but they still rely on Zoro and themselves. Author, please sort out your ideas before writing.

Damn it, it's gone now?

Not bad, come on

Looks interesting

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A bit short

Good subject, too much to write down

, Except for the good subject matter, the rest is terrible compared to

Really. . . I finished it with just a few dozen pictures, why not write a short story?

What kind of yarn is this? I won't write about it here.