Man in Pirates: Deceiving Ace as a Marine at the Beginning

Semi-invincible. Very good but too little. The easiest way to change the plot. A way to get a lot of plot points. Stealing Luffy's straw hat.............

I think this book is well written, Unlike those pirate novels I read before, There is no plot, Follow the main line, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger There are not many old routines It's like watching a brand new story The author is great Five-star praise for you ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧

The plot is very good and the characters are very good. In fact, I think the specific actions of each force under my command can be written later. I feel that the later part has broken away from the original framework of One Piece and has its own style, which is very good.

This is the first one I've read. One Piece is about being a marine through time travel. I think it's pretty good.

Although I have not watched the One Piece anime (drama, etc.), I do not deny that this is an excellent novel. I will not comment further since it has not been updated yet. The novel is very good, but the updates are a bit slow. Come on, author, come on, come on, Oli! ! !

This pirate book is quite good. The author has a great imagination and doesn't have any poisonous points. The protagonist is also very powerful and very capable.

Very good, the characters and the plot are also very good ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू ), keep it up

Nice! ! ! ! ! Come and see everyone! ! ! ! And there's still no heroine in the story! ! ! ! I finally waited for the story without a heroine, so touching (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`) Oh, it's a harem story

It's not bad. There are no poisonous spots. It seems to be quite smooth. I give you a five-star rating. Keep up the good work.

It's well written and carefully written. If there is no brainless plot, it is better than most authors. I hope it will be better in the future, come on.

The writing is good and I know the original work very well. It is the best pirate novel I have read so far. However, I hope the author can update it more and not be like some authors who are not only weak but also short and weak (≧∇≦)/

The writing is quite good, but there is an extra bit of a charlatan, Oda. The setting really follows the original work, and the plot is the author's idea. The character settings are full, with foreshadowing, and ups and downs. The ending is a bit hasty, but it's understandable, because the author's subsequent guess about the pirates was wrong.

From the beginning when Sean appeared and his decision, I was actually quite shocked, because his style from the beginning was very appealing to me. And most of the other fanfics I've read will decide to just enjoy the story all the way, and many places can't withstand scrutiny. Although this book can be considered a cheat all the way to the end, the author's main story is really unique. It is the kind I have never read before. All kinds of difficulties are solved perfectly, and there is no situation where the front and back are not connected. (Ps: I have to say that Luffy didn't appear until the last few chapters, which is really dramatic for me, maybe because it was Wang Luffy who originally said it [whisper]) Overall, the author is really serious about this book (B*2: At least it's better than mine)

I really like this kind of writing. Although it is an invincible novel, it is very comfortable to read. The IQ is online throughout the whole process. If it were not for the cruelty of the old thief Oda, you would not be in the end. I have read a lot of pirate novels, and yours is the best one. Come on

It's a relatively good Pirates fanfic. It doesn't have that kind of plot. You can understand all the plots. The climax is in the middle and late stages. It has about 50 chapters.

I have read a lot of similar fan fiction. To be honest. The writing of this book is still good, except that the update is a bit slow. As for the plot, it looks pretty good so far. But I'm afraid that the protagonist's strength will collapse later on. But I still have to give the author a big thumbs up. Come on, author.

Although there are quite a few things that I am a bit dissatisfied with, I will give it five stars. PS: This book depends on the situation and the harem has not escaped. If it is not for the harem, it is 100% ambiguous. . . . . But the author ensures that the male protagonist's relationship will be dealt with later in the game, so you don't have to worry about the relationship line in the early stages.

What a great book! It's a pity that there are only more than 50 pictures. The main reason is that the characters are all similar and consistent with the original work.

I have also been a bookworm for several years, and this is my first review. I feel that the author's writing is okay, better than some novels I have read before. Some novels killed Im to death as they were written. The key is that I still don't know how the protagonist practices cultivation. The only thing is... The update is too slow, I hope the author will stop being a eunuch, come on

It's really a great novel, but it's a pity that the updated plot by Oda the old thief disrupted the setting of this novel, causing the author to have no choice but to finish it. Alas~ What a pity, otherwise it would be a really good novel.

I haven't read much, but the author's control of the plot and description of the characters are very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on, Oli.

There is one story and one that is well written. I can't bear to read much of it, but the prediction failed and ended early. In fact, I feel that the author can write according to his own ideas. After all, Oda knows a shit about pirates [Dog Head Protection]

This book is very good. It is one of the few pirate novels that I can read. Although the plot is always the same, this one is about the navy but I don't want to be in the navy. Except for the ending, which is a bit rushed, everything else is fine.

The system text adds countless bug-level abilities to the protagonist, such as healing, summoning, purification, space movement, and others. With the plot recommendations, the system provides more and more bug-level abilities. The description of the abilities is similar to the plot. The system is invincible. The protagonist is very awesome.

The protagonist of this novel is very good. His character is more like an ordinary person. It is human nature, unlike some protagonists who are normal before time travel, but their temperament changes drastically after time travel. Unlike some protagonists, they are overly dependent on the system and everything is given by the system. It is an unreal feeling. I always feel like this person is being controlled by the system. I have been reading books for 5 years. This is the most normal protagonist I have ever seen, and the author's attitude and writing style are also very good. This five-star is well deserved.

Don't ask for how fast zz will update. The writing is very good. Just keep it steady. Don't collapse. Don't be a eunuch.

After reading it, I suddenly remembered that I hadn't written a review yet, so I wrote it in the middle of the night. Very good, this book. I prefer such refreshing articles, which are more comfortable to read, and the author seems to treat these original characters very seriously. I also really like the heartthrob type of protagonist who no one loves. It would be great if it can stir up chaos in the world and restart the world line. I especially want to see the protagonist show off his power and destroy the world.

The logic is very good, not a brainless article, but I can't read this hahaha, it requires a little memory to read this

It would be better to write about daring to love and hate, and the subordinates should be portrayed more carefully.

Yes, it's not like other books, which are obviously passionate and all kinds of stories about death if you don't fall in love, this book is awesome👍🏻