Quick Travel: Crazy Criticism of the Male Protagonist's Heartthrob Subordinate

Wow! It's so well written that it's not enough to read. Please give it a thumbs up, author, and update it quickly. I'll give you five stars. ฅ( ̳• ◡ • ̳)ฅ

It's good-looking, and the writing style of Dada is also good, but I can't understand it a bit. At the beginning, it was about setting up tasks and slicing, and then suddenly... It felt a bit inconsistent, but I still like the story. The writing style of Dada is really good. I recalled carefully, uh, the three views of characters in some planes and the main story directions of some characters, uh, how should I put it? It's not very good. I feel that the foreshadowing is too early, and the routines in some planes are really old. Well, I'm really disappointed in the end. The setting is okay, but in the early stage, you just attack and slice, and you also store memories and think about people who are not him but are related to him. Later, It suddenly changed, and the tasks were not completed well. It was not without candy, but it was very bland (I personally think that there is really nothing memorable for me). The whole story fascinated me. It was obviously all about planes, but suddenly it involved God, the Emperor of Heaven, and a complete system of heaven. Isn't this a quick time travel? Why did he become a fairy? ? ? Generally speaking, some of the settings of Gong, such as the Lord God, generally refer to people who create various small worlds. Like the Creator God, it does not mean that he is a high-status god in the heaven. In short, I was really interested in it at the beginning. I finished it in almost a day (when there were chapter skips, I felt that the plot was too slow). I was really disappointed in the end and had no idea of ​​​​watching it. For some outside, I just looked at the plane setting and then jumped directly to the ending.

Family members, believe me, don't be fooled by the first plane. Although the first plane is very bloody and incomprehensible, the more you look at it, the more beautiful it becomes. Except for the first world, the subsequent worlds are all quite beautiful\(//∇//)\Maybe it's because the author's writing style is improving.

Nice! ! ! I like! Why is the rating so low! ! ! The first few worlds seemed a bit boring to me, but they became more and more exciting later on! ! ! ! Bullshit + no common sense. I take back what I said before. There are some places where the views are really crooked. Is the author a man or a woman? It made me extremely uncomfortable...

Nice! Just right to my taste I love this book! Love it! 😍

It looks good (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, but there are so few people (✪▽✪) that the rating seems to have dropped!

Super pretty! I beg the author to continue writing! Come on!

Perfect, awesome🌚🌝I also want to say, if you don't like it, no one is forcing you to watch it. But please don't do something sad, I only rated four when I rated it before. Here, I added. It saddens me to see people who deliberately lower ratings. I've rambled so much. There are definitely some people who don't want to read it but I still want to say it. Please don't make the author sad, okay? This is respect between people. Not many people may read this comment, but if they do, please respect it. Thank you Oh~! ＾＿＾

Big cheers for the author💪It's so beautiful! ₍₍ ◟(∗˙ ꒵ ˙∗)◞ ₎₎

What does this book say? It's really super good-looking, okay, I also brushed it a lot, I thought silently, hehe, there are very few love lines in it, almost none, but I directly used a magnifying glass to hit the candy. There may not be much in the early stage, but the finale was good. I successfully hit the real candy, and Wuhu took off.

It's very interesting, the article is smooth, and the author is great. Please continue to work hard to update new articles. I really like this book, but I just wanted to kick the other male protagonist off when I read it. Especially when it is getting closer and closer to the ending, all kinds of imaginings are always holding me back (▼盘▼). There are also some people (Chi v Chi) who feel deeply that you must not just imagining things. It is very troublesome for people who are not in this situation.

This is so beautiful, why is it rated so low? On the contrary, why do some unsightly ones have very high ratings? This is really good-looking. Don't stop watching it just because of the ratings.

This book is not bad, but how can I put it, it's a bit of a bloody Mary Suᥬ😂᭄, but I think it's still okay [Thinking] (Quietly speaking, if you want to read this book, you should either read the book review first, or read the book review after you have read it almost, otherwise, just I feel that this book is not well written. After all, sometimes Mary Sue's writing is also a different kind of refreshing writing. It's just that some tend to be slap-in-the-face refreshing writing, so I can't stand this type of writing, but this book is also good) [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I feel a little embarrassed when I see it... How should I put it... Come on. The writing style needs to be improved. (•́ω•̀ ٥)

It's very pretty, I like it anyway.

In fact, this book is very interesting, but the system is simply a poisonous point. This system ruined a lot of my gentleness. I feel that the protagonist is a bit humble. The system is so double-standard, I feel a little heartbroken when I see it. But overall, this book is still very good.

It's so pretty! The character's image, language, and demeanor are well portrayed.

It's very interesting. I really like this style of novel. I hope the author will update it more (˘ ³˘)♡

The update speed is okay but not enough to read. The writing is very nice and can be updated.

It's so good to read. It's so good to read. I can't stop. I'm so happy now that I finally have a book that I've finished reading. However, I'm also so sad because I may never find another book that interests me so much that I can read it all at once. Even the book about Di Yange is finished. I'm sad💔[I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, it's very beautiful. Hahahaha (going crazy), everyone comes to see it, everyone comes to see it (gnashing teeth). It will definitely make you more excited. You will be able to write and spell like you are better than you. Hahahaha (I'm already angry...)

The writing in the early stage is better than that in the later stage, but they all look very good. Jue Juezi loves [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

Although the author is new, he has already written quite well😄

It's a good-looking book, but when I was about to catch up to the end of the book, he told me that he was serializing it? ? (Irritated readers are urging me to update) Doctor: It's over, it's over! This author died because of his writing Me: I'll write even if I'm dead! ! !

The plot is pretty good. It's not like other fast-traveling stories that torture for the sake of torture. The only thing I can't figure out is why the protagonist dies very early in every life. Then let the other half die alone. And I found that many fast-travel novels are like this. What do female authors think? Do you just like the feeling of making your other half suffer?

This book is quite good. If you like it, you can read it.

This book is very good. Every time the novels on my bookshelf are updated, I read this book first. Every time I read it, I think about when the author will update it. ε=(´O｀) Oh. However, the author should not overwork himself and pay more attention to rest (´∩ω∩｀)Hehe~\(≧▽≦)/~!

It looks good, but the update is a bit slow. The author should work hard to update it. ＾0＾~

It's very interesting (/ω＼) I'm shy. This is my first time to follow an article, and it's also the first time I have the patience to read an unfinished article. Other unfinished articles are either suddenly unreadable or impatient to pursue. The author gives you a lot of supportｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

The story is quite rich, but the love brain is so serious that it can cause people to lose their IQ. Maybe the love brain really makes people lose their IQ. Overall, it's very interesting to watch. It's touching, funny, speechless, and even embarrassing and crazy. Some people say that the small world has no ending. In fact, the author has given it all, but some of it is concise. The reason for conciseness may be that he doesn't want to ink.